Offending Poems | Examples


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Premium Member offending the art teacher eye roll

The instructions were easy.
Invent and draw a new kind of alien.
My alien was a combination between a rodent and a dragon.
I put a cigarette in its mouth and gave it black teeth.
This offended the art teacher, who was a smoker.
Ask me if I care.
His nicotine pores offend me.

Premium Member Evaluation of Life

What's the values of life
What's a successful life
No definition indeed
One man's meat may be another man's  poison
Let the happiness decides
Man should pursue happiness 
Without hurting others 
Or offending the law
Let's follow one's conscience
Let's follow the teachings of God
Life is full of meanings and pursuits
Richess, love, health, fame or contribution
May be one of the road to 
The tower of happiness 
And so a successful life
But it can be either temporary or everlasting
And it all depends on your fate or sincerity

Offending a Child

“Whoever against a child does offend
stands before all utterly condemned
     to be thrown off the quay,
     being submerged in the sea 
a stone round your neck to bring life to an end.”

Paraphrasing words of Jesus from Mark 9.42


The Gop - Guys Offending Puke

The California GOP
Does not believe in liberty
As sly as foxes
Fake ballot boxes
Swallow each vote maliciously

The Texas GOP decree
People of color need a knee
One travels far
To vote per car
But only when one's white and free!

*"There is no bottom to how low
Trump and McConnell will go
to retain their power"

Being Condescending While Offending

Being Condescending While Offending

Trump constantly can be condescending;
What he did has always been offending;
Become obscure,
Do wish for sure,
And us into tizzy he ended up sending.

Jim Horn

Depending On Offending

Depending On Offending

On certain things had been depending,
And how repulsive it was and offending;
Surely outrageous;
Could be contagious;
Disrupted while upsetting and upending.

Jim Horn


Offending

I did wrong again
Everything I do offends
I can't be myself

Premium Member Oo Kittens Offending Odor

Small meow I hear
A smell coming underneath
I see movement in the dark
I saw the kitten
The odor was offensive
Wanted to pass out, didn’t

She purred so slightly
I picked her up to see her
Then the smell nearly smacked me
She stunk so, so bad
I took her home to bathe her
So she won’t offend again

Entrant into Susan Burch's "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest!

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