Russell Sivey Poet Sedoka

Oo Kittens Offending Odor

Small meow I hear
A smell coming underneath
I see movement in the dark
I saw the kitten
The odor was offensive
Wanted to pass out, didn’t

She purred so slightly
I picked her up to see her
Then the smell nearly smacked me
She stunk so, so bad
I took her home to bathe her
So she won’t offend again

Entrant into Susan Burch's "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest!

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Elizabeth Wesley December 13, 2011 at 2:24 PM Yup, scoop the poop, when it's better then you can pet her!

David Williams December 13, 2011 at 10:22 AM Russell i think this poem confirms why i don't like cats ha ha , like the poem though, good luck..David

Andrea Dietrich December 12, 2011 at 10:44 PM haha. This is a fun read, Russell. I know how bad cats AND dogs can smell!! My one cat is always running around with some small turd hanging from her butt. hahaha. I have to get toilet paper and pull it off. What a nitwit cat.