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Premium Member Eye of Manic Storm

Thrust in the center of the storm
All I could see was You
My deepest fears had been born
My sanity like strings unloosed 

Nerves unglued by life events
Perhaps this broke my mind
Strapped to a bed I no longer lament
Refused food or drink of any kind

The drugs they tried made me hide
Inside my paranoia so I didn’t speak
Except for occasionally with my eyes
At this one mental health nurse you see

She would gently hold my bound hand
And offered warm wishes and compassion 
Through her empathetic angelic glance 
I gained something humane in her passion 

She’d offer me food which I refused
But fed my spirit with her kindness
After days my mangled mind improved 
God sent her and a divine kiss

Through the eye of a manic storm
Where I lay broken despite grace of God
All I saw was this nurse's form
She grounded me with her heavenly heart
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Actor at the Edge of the World

Actor at the Edge of the World

At the end of life the flight ends and the curtain falls without applause,
To the dead you are actor and actress and judge and all the other causes,
Beyond the self there lives another who wanted to punish and to sentence,
And the ink froze inside the pen... and the truth... stopped passing through its presence.

Hate and love switch into one another like two faces of the same coin,
Spring grew green over our wounds and no one sees them anymore to join,
The devil's hairs braid themselves into the unwritten and bitter verses left behind,
And I was your judge... and you my punishment... without borders or a line.

The actor and the actress play on the same stage not knowing the play is done,
The ink frozen in the pen holds the truth that was never spoken to anyone,
The letters stand as a model for a truth that no one dares to write down bare,
And the flight at the end of life... is the only role... played truly... in silence and in air.

Beyond you and me there is the space where hate becomes love and rearranges,
That spring that greened the ink and caused the pen itself to break in changes,
The devil's hairs are our mismatched and real metaphors laid out in the open,
And we played to the very end... our roles... on parallel and empty stages broken.

At the end of life the actor looks into the empty mirror and does not recognize his face,
To the dead and the living alike he was actor and judge without warning or grace,
The ink dried inside the pen and the letters remained a model for a silent truth,
And that flight at the end... was the only moment... in which I was... myself... unloosed.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Parable

Parable

I just want to come before you brother
And tell you a story
Expound on a moral glory
Lord let your word fit my mouth
Convey intended meaning
Making it plain
Christ unloosed the chains
That bind me down
Jesus found that He cared for all
Let me re tell the stories parable
The tree went forth and the olive tree said there are now our god and man
And the fig tree saidv reign over us
Sweetness be promoted over these trees
Ahh! Come reign with us 
Come thou now and aniont me king
Put trust in my shadow  if not let fire come out of the cedars
Have to stop worshipping the creation need to worship the creator 

If upon reading this do you understand this the
Parable  



2/5/10
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2010

Premium Member Crazy 2020

Crazy 2020

Up side out – downright up –clocks get surly;
Rivers flow north – time faints – Murphy’s Law scores;
Early runs late now late running early –
One and three just don’t make four anymore. 

Rosters crow at midnight – moonrise at noon;
Zebras minus stripes – giraffe with short legs;
Cats with trunks – hippos hop like kangaroos –
Cows give green milk – pink hens laying pink eggs.

Natural order all in shambles – spun round –
Winter's wearing flowers – snowflakes confused;
Mother Nature’s psychotic break profound
Normal now anormal – chaos unloosed.

Year “out of order,” just hang the sign out;
Wait for repair – a screwed up year no doubt.

5-23-20
14 Lines
Form: Sonnet

Fidelity's Flag of Faith

English sonnet

I ponder him who pledged to me his troth.
Our marriage came to shreds with pressure wrought.
He saved each tangled ravel, wove new cloth,
resuming our design with errors naught.

Haphazard doubts occurred which caused some snarls
of jealous hate which anger loves to knot.
Distrust released, his flag of truce unfurls
his calculated plan of love's own plot

Sometimes our banner's hem still comes unloosed
though aging thoughts begrudge, repair we'll find.
Disease destroys and bodies come to roost.
Ere sleep descends, what happens to the mind?

His word has shielded ev'ry other plight.
I have no doubt our God will span that night.

December 4, 2016

contest:  Best Friend Sonnet
hostess:  Regina Riddle
Form: Sonnet


Jesus and the Child of Grace

In an old vineyard 
When Jesus was just a lamb 
His coat eight years old 
Working with the chaste Joseph 
His father and guide 
As the beloved Mary 
Kneeled and prayed to God 
In their small and humble home 
A visitor came 
Golden and shining brightly 
Like beams of sunlight 
Shooting through the home’s window 
Shooting from heaven 
Shooting down from the clear heights 
Mary beheld him
Thinking he was her young son 
Putting off his coat 
With gentleness the child said 
“Where is dear Jesus
My dear brother and brave twin 
I want to meet him” 
Mary never responded 
In fearful blindness 
Thinking he was a phantom  
From the lightless depths 
Rather than light from the heights 
She seized his right arm 
And tied his arm to the foot 
Of the worn, torn bed  
Not wishing to scare her more 
He remained at peace 
Not saying a single word
During this event
Jesus held an empty branch
Observing the wood 
As if it were a mirror 
Soon he heard Mary 
Jabbering in confusion 
With tears raining down
In this dim storm of wailing 
Jesus heard the words 
Breaking through the whirling clouds 
“A phantom has come 
Dressed in golden apparel 
Dressed in bright lightning 
Saying “Where is dear Jesus
My twin and brother 
I desire to see him” 
Joseph please help me” 
Only Jesus saw the light 
And heard the thunder
For he had wise eyes to see 
And had ears to hear 
He proclaimed with holy strength 
“Mother, where is he 
So that I may see the light 
Or should I wait here 
Waiting for the bright sunlight 
To break through this storm” 
Jesus said these words in joy 
Joseph was startled 
Mary wiped away her tears 
They entered the house 
And found the spirit at peace 
Still bound to the bed 
Both the parents looked at him 
Then looked at Jesus 
And found them to be the same 
Mary walked further 
And unloosed the child angel 
He bowed to Mary 
He and Jesus said no words 
For they were brothers 
They hugged with their gentle arms 
Gave a holy kiss 
The angel child disappeared 
For he and Jesus 
Became one white pearl of light 
Thus the empty branch
Bloomed with delicious almonds 
Bloomed with holy life
Thus this town was sanctified 
Crowned with golden, shining grace 


Poem based on the account from the ancient apocryphal book The Pistis Sophia, Chapter 61.
Form: Choka

Premium Member A LEAF IN THE WOODS

I rise, a leaf awakened by autumn’s call,
unloosed at last from summer’s tender keep.
Sunbeams uplift me as I start my fall,  
their golden fingers guiding where I sweep.  

I wander through the forest’s breathing light,  
a pilgrim drifting on a path unknown;  
each ray becomes a lantern for my flight,  
and shows me truths the rooted trees have grown.  

I greet the moss as though it were a friend,  
and feel the roots beneath me softly rise;  
they teach me how all journeys seek their end  
in quiet places held by sacred skies.  

So rest I now, a traveler of the bright,  
who found my home by trusting in the light.
Form: Sonnet

Thine, Always

Inspiration:
Inspired by the “Footprints in the Sand” tradition—the enduring idea that when only one set of footprints remains, it is because the Divine is carrying us through our darkest hour.



—The Weight of Mercy—


I turned my years back down the seaward strand,
where joy had once impressed its double trace;
But when the dark unloosed me from its hand,
one print alone lay solemn in its place.

I deemed that single furrow spoke of doom,
and read Heaven’s silence as a sealed decree;
Yet grief, self-crowned, within my inward gloom,
arraigned the unseen for what mine eyes could see.

Then came one night when one brief sentence fell
through all the citadels I built so strong,
and where my failing breath could scarcely dwell,
I felt a strength that bore my soul along;
till, looking back, the furrows seemed to shine:
My feet were mine—the strength that bore me, Thine.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Sweet Spot

Sweet Spot

On the ever shifting sands of time
The spectrum of human action balances 
On a fulcrum between extremes:
Total government and tyranny on the Left
Zero government and anarchy on the Right,
Two ways that on paper may look good
Until practice proves them otherwise.

And in the course of this rise and fall
Systems are engineered to cope
In waves of thesis, antithesis and synthesis
Unloosed to compete for hearts and votes
In the marketplace of ideas and commerce 
Seeking a sweet spot, a middle way, free of extremes
Where the individual’s rights are protected 
By a limited government, from an unlimited one 
And all other predatory entities.

And when this spot is tasted
Balanced for an instant
The tipping point is reached,
The teeter becomes a totter,
And we ride the cycle of up and down again
Until exhausted, defeated or victorious
And leave the playground to the next generation,
Eyes bright and eager for hope and change.

(12/15/24)
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Nacre's Embrace from Grain to Gleam: A Story of Quiet Revenge

Sand only looked to alight,
find some alone-time in the muck
no fuss was meant, it is only a space
as big as a grain taken, escaping its identical
brethren of billions on the sea floor.

Oyster only opened his rigid
lips to rinse, to breathe the brine,
to move a snack through his labial palps
in private, when a tiny intruder, unwelcome,
unbidden, disturbs the digestion,
initiates the unintended consequence
of oyster's defensive reaction.

Called upon, mitigation arrives over time.
Nacre warriors, layer by layer, smooth
sand's edges to soothe oyster's irritation,
an effort that deafens new pleas from a grain
now only looking to go home.

In the dark-churned slime, desire
emerges as a luster in the mud, a dazzling
monster named Pearl, radiant and angry, hard
with longing to be unloosed from her mucous
roots. She sends dreams as currency of streaming
shimmers, to bolster her chances of freedom
from an endless, watery night.

Lured by the glimmer, human hands pry open
shy bivalve, tongue and lips slurp up the middle
like a salty kiss, until teeth accidental onto eager Pearl
warmed by the breath. 

For the indiscretion she now sits pocketed in slacks
belonging to hands with plans to pierce her spine, 
string her along, then hang her on another lover's neck—

	stranger to sand and pearl, already grown
wayward in closeness, is a new desire that oyster
degrade on ocean's bottom, turn into sand and join them 
on the choker.

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