Fidelity's Flag of Faith

English sonnet

I ponder him who pledged to me his troth.
Our marriage came to shreds with pressure wrought.
He saved each tangled ravel, wove new cloth,
resuming our design with errors naught.

Haphazard doubts occurred which caused some snarls
of jealous hate which anger loves to knot.
Distrust released, his flag of truce unfurls
his calculated plan of love's own plot

Sometimes our banner's hem still comes unloosed
though aging thoughts begrudge, repair we'll find.
Disease destroys and bodies come to roost.
Ere sleep descends, what happens to the mind?

His word has shielded ev'ry other plight.
I have no doubt our God will span that night.

December 4, 2016

contest:  Best Friend Sonnet
hostess:  Regina Riddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Carmack Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Congrats Reason. Poems like this start to get me to want to start hosting contests again.
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December 22, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Congrats for your winning Poem Reason
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