Eye of Manic Storm

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 Written 3/16/25 for contest sponsored by poet Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Thrust in the center of the storm
All I could see was You
My deepest fears had been born
My sanity like strings unloosed 

Nerves unglued by life events
Perhaps this broke my mind
Strapped to a bed I no longer lament
Refused food or drink of any kind

The drugs they tried made me hide
Inside my paranoia so I didn’t speak
Except for occasionally with my eyes
At this one mental health nurse you see

She would gently hold my bound hand
And offered warm wishes and compassion 
Through her empathetic angelic glance 
I gained something humane in her passion 

She’d offer me food which I refused
But fed my spirit with her kindness
After days my mangled mind improved 
God sent her and a divine kiss

Through the eye of a manic storm
Where I lay broken despite grace of God
All I saw was this nurse's form
She grounded me with her heavenly heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/27/2025 7:42:00 AM
Aww...I had a sweet experience with a nurse during a NDE. She grounded me. Her last name was Sweetheart, and she truly was. Congratulations on this accolade Karen! :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/27/2025 9:58:00 AM
Wow what a great name! Thanks Linda for sharing!
Date: 4/26/2025 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/26/2025 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 3/17/2025 4:20:00 PM
You have an angel watching over you. I'm glad for the recovery. This poem speaks to everyone whether their hell is obvious, or buried deeply in pain. I feel these words exist as therapy for many.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 5:19:00 PM
I appreciate your comment and know God watched very closely over us all especially in times of need. Hugs
Date: 3/17/2025 11:04:00 AM
Hello Karen, this is a beautiful write, Nurses, kindness on legs. Good luck with the contest my friend.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 12:11:00 PM
Zyrool thank you!
Date: 3/17/2025 7:31:00 AM
An angel in a nurses uniform, you often hear of them going the extra mile. Well written Karen, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Tom!
Date: 3/17/2025 6:55:00 AM
"Kindness feeds the spirit with its healing grace', Very nicely penned Karen, Thanks for making my poem a fave
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 9:30:00 AM
Appreciate you and your poem is awesome
Date: 3/17/2025 3:55:00 AM
Hi Karen that was beautiful good luck in the contest. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 6:06:00 AM
You are kind! Thanks John!
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