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 Written 3/16/25 for contest sponsored by poet Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Eye of Manic Storm

Thrust in the center of the storm
All I could see was You
My deepest fears had been born
My sanity like strings unloosed 

Nerves unglued by life events
Perhaps this broke my mind
Strapped to a bed I no longer lament
Refused food or drink of any kind

The drugs they tried made me hide
Inside my paranoia so I didn’t speak
Except for occasionally with my eyes
At this one mental health nurse you see

She would gently hold my bound hand
And offered warm wishes and compassion 
Through her empathetic angelic glance 
I gained something humane in her passion 

She’d offer me food which I refused
But fed my spirit with her kindness
After days my mangled mind improved 
God sent her and a divine kiss

Through the eye of a manic storm
Where I lay broken despite grace of God
All I saw was this nurse's form
She grounded me with her heavenly heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Aww...I had a sweet experience with a nurse during a NDE. She grounded me. Her last name was Sweetheart, and she truly was. Congratulations on this accolade Karen! :)
Jones Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Wow what a great name! Thanks Linda for sharing!
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Thanks Sara!
Greenhough Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 4:20 PM
You have an angel watching over you. I'm glad for the recovery. This poem speaks to everyone whether their hell is obvious, or buried deeply in pain. I feel these words exist as therapy for many.
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 5:19 PM
I appreciate your comment and know God watched very closely over us all especially in times of need. Hugs
Gifford Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Hello Karen, this is a beautiful write, Nurses, kindness on legs. Good luck with the contest my friend.
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Zyrool thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 7:31 AM
An angel in a nurses uniform, you often hear of them going the extra mile. Well written Karen, good luck in the contest. Tom
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Thanks Tom!
May Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 6:55 AM
"Kindness feeds the spirit with its healing grace', Very nicely penned Karen, Thanks for making my poem a fave
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Appreciate you and your poem is awesome
Read Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Hi Karen that was beautiful good luck in the contest. xx
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 6:06 AM
You are kind! Thanks John!
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