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Premium Member The Lord Conquers Me

The Lord conquers me by His truth!
I thank Him for girding me along my faith…
Anchoring my steadfastness thru His standards
Against doubts and unbelief.

The Lord conquers me by His sovereignty!
I honour Him for uplifting me in my submission…
Breaking my pride thru His holiness
Against haughtiness and self-glorying.

The Lord conquers me by His wisdom*!
I praise Him for correcting me of my ignorance…
Guiding my decisions thru His precepts
Against indecency and vanity.

The Lord conquers me by His might!
I esteem Him for propelling me toward my commitment…
Blessing my labor thru His approval
Against fruitlessness and indolence.

*Ephesians 1:17 That the God of our Lord Jesus Christ, the Father of glory, may give unto you the spirit of wisdom and revelation in the knowledge of him.

November 17, 2018


Premium Member Rotated Consciousness Polarity Is It Positive Or Not Just Negative - My Spokenword

Tears of such just this a random thought
Sadness or joys for the fleshy beating heart
Unseemly unseeking I'm not looking straight forward
Lamented chess piece ivory casted glass on the board now

In seeking my forwarded righteous mind now
Singled Godly unruly unholy
Where to buy to go around now to ask and wait process
Sets the scales of written text I'm blessed or cursed onslaught

To the point of giving transfer voluntary unexpected transfer yields
Yet the premise my emotional heart hardens I sieze take abruptly suddenly
Intense is mine hearts mind feelings of deepest affection intense joy
Turn yet the premise my feelings unguarded intent ardor passion sexual only desire

Surrender submission I to are equal higher power giving up easing all resistance
Too the point of taking deep darkening control commanding prevails
Embrace affectively close hold are minds arms in acceptance I support you
To the point of taking the unagreeable positions such side variant

In truths I am stated candor honesty genuineness validity
To the point of untruths entertain assertions decitful demoralized
Just so to avoid an punishment
Come us so together as a family a unit humbled by are Father's heart

Abuse, abated non comforting evasive indifferent 
differences sense of separation tears of such
Just this random thought ROTATED consciousness POLARITY

My givings I shall bless you versus my grabbing you don't need gimme that
My love in deems so true agape sure versus lusting sexually only
My surrender submission for holiness do diligence
Cast me not domination over others
My embracing those the hearts ceasing war gathered and ending strife

My truths in me instilled in my soul by my Father God
My lies from someone's father the devil
I speak life gathering of all God's people all His Children 
I rebuke all unwarranted senses of separations
In Jesus name
The only part of ROTATED Consciousness POLARITY I want
Is the JUST QUALITY OF JESUS HEART

11/8/22
FOR Rotate Consciousness POLARITY Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

In Solitude I Survived

People in the queue, ask me
Why do I settle in solitude?
I do wonder sometime, that the world I belong 
Has billions, able friends or foe. 

Do I must continue solitudes?
As much as I love hiking in wilderness.
In my dreams or in my conscious mind,
I rather find one, that could never let me walk alone. 

To me, solitude defines me.
seclusion is a retreat corner
Where my nightmare turns in to a burning oil.
Because,  I talk, I weep, I reflect, all alone 
Yes I survived, in solitude.

The reflection of my sorrow is 
My submission to the one that I am accountable.
hitherto, I doubted, I lost hope in 
Humanity, ever existed ?

Then I got back to the one that asked,
I said, sometime the four corners aren't always walled up
Still it is the dazzling star of all the stars. 
Gleaming through the eye of every colours.

Premium Member Insidious

Her lipsticks lost some while ago;
thrown angrily into the bin.
Lips now bare, it wasn't such a blow,
she thought, taking her second Gin.

It's not right for my position
it made her look a tart, he said.
It's not much of a submission,
she thought, making the marriage bed.

Last year, he sold the second car
I'll take you where you need to be.
No need for me to travel far,
she thought, preparing evening tea.

The checks she signs are now declined
her credit card is cut in two,
A weight's been lifted from my mind,
she thought when serving him his brew.

You need to stay at home all week,
you know that is a woman's place.
I will; I'd better not misspeak,
she thought while staring into space. 

You can repair that dress of yours
I need to buy myself a suit.
So what! I never go outdoors,
she thought. Then whispered, what a brute!
Form: Rhyme

I am sorry, Joanna, on behalf of the Nominative case

These days, actors and singers serve my catapult mayhem, 
sometimes they are catalyst too!
I sing in between their lines of songs
their churned up recorded whims, hums, and candid cataracts! 
And some days, whence things get screwed up
about a  random psychotic feed back ,on a laminated free verse!

A day care and a festive color season! 
Once small pox diagnosed , 
they let the sick baby get a safe mode, in an arranged detour reason, instead.

For a submission and a genuine submittal try! 
On a humorous cover page , it calms down the wildest underneath rage, outcry!
Everything is clouded, intranet, inter too!
Nonetheless, a Fine arts diploma travels to the farthest east and swings to west, 
they surely do!
To and fro round  trip with a lonely estranged,
to Alaka and the random Parthenon 
to cuddle Athena to wrap the scar, very own 
before applying to have a trip to scar benign
Certainly,
We knew the translators' sage first,
Before originals tried to happen there, in a diaspora or wanderlust.

Please allow me a reason to try, anyway , anymore
before, they even try to be happy , at least mock or greet
and then eventually, troubleshoot for the love story ever after, special treat!

I am sorry, Joanna, on behalf of the survey-monkey!
You know me now. And the poem from the day care of Maxim Gorky!


Premium Member Christ Messiah Saviour and Lord

Two thousand years ago on this earth
there was a man who here did walk
who spoke like no man ever did
controls even all of our life's clock

this is Christ the living messiah
who came to show life so divine
display his miracles astound man
for those who believe a sure sign

His mission was to bring salvation
for earth bound sinners all are lost
as He would be their true saviour
in giving His life this His true cost

Jesus Christ is redemption's source
the redeemed make Him Lord of all
for this Lord leads and guides them
through life until heaven shall call

Honour obey in utter submission
to this God in the person of His son
who reigns in triumph for eternity
praise Him for all that He's done
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Vanished Like Mist





                                               Vanished Like Mist


Now I wonder, ponder, persuade the mind to wander in an abyss of what may be

Plowed and clawed then probed to find a reason for frenetic rumblings within me

As time passed unabated, skin hides pain beneath waves of what these eyes see

The heart trembled: is myopia or enmity reason why I have not found Amy Lee?


Love is not a game man coerces into submission then drags its spirit underwater

Auguring, kneeling, begging will not make it acquiescent to what one may prefer

Precious memories evoked by the hungry heart impalpably depart and disappear

What remains are remnants, reminders of the haunting past...that I had lost her








06/17/2023
Vision of the Seas
Cruising towards Hamilton, Bermuda
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member FAITH IN GOD WHO IS MIGHTY

June 11 Faith in God Bible Meditations Based on Job 35-37
 
Key Verse –  Job 36:5 Behold, God is mighty, and despiseth not any: he is mighty in strength and wisdom.
	
FAITH IN GOD WHO IS MIGHTY	

God is mighty in His dominion’s goodness
Never driving us toward carnality-weakness…
We must stay in His presence of graciousness
Always trusting Him by faith, our Rock of righteousness.

God is mighty in His strength’s glory
Never allowing us to immerse in misery…
We must seek His help against worry
Always depending on Him by faith as we share His Gospel story.

God is mighty in His love’s working
Never leaving us toward wreaking…
We must praise His name along our spiritual trekking
Always calling Him by faith Who guards us from breaking.

God is mighty in His care’s preservation
Never ignoring us midst our affliction’s oppression…
We must obey His commands with our submission
Always humbling before Him by faith in our service-function.

God is mighty in His Word’s endurance
Never setting us to doubt toward our severance…
We must learn from His statutes giving us assurance
Always relying on Him by faith for our deliverance.

God is mighty in His truth’s life building
Never refusing us in our need for His guiding…
We must beseech His power in our service by His leading
Always exalting Him by faith along ministry-involvement abounding.

God is mighty in His victory’s presence
Never leading us to downfall with pride’s license…
We must abide in His triumphant license
Always praying to Him by faith of supplication-incense.

June 11, 2025
Form: Quatrain

Lady In Red

  
Lady Bird
Though not a lady
nor even is she a bird
But she's the most
exquisite beauty
ever seen
though never heard
Her coat of ruby red
‘tis almost designer
one could have said
With small black polka dots galore
This gorgeous creature I adore
Sometimes she walks across my floor
Multi-talented this gal in red
flying on hidden wings out spread 

The dots upon here ruby coat
Some say will tell her age
This is untrue
It tells her species
For there are very many
A beauty in red
Impossible to perceive
an insect is she
a beetle I believe
One of five thousand species
munching aphids she sees
for breakfasts
for dinners 
and even for teas
This lady in red
she is so well fed
Farmers welcome
with open arms
She can eat 50 aphids
on farms each day
keeping those pesky creatures away

But to me she is something quite special
This beautiful Lady in Red
Queen of all beetles
When I see her
I want to touch her
and gently stroke
her ruby red coat
My favorite beetle
She makes me gleeful
thus forever to me  
she will always be
A beautiful Lady in Red

Written 13th April 2022

Contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIER CHOICE
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Premium Member My God, Thank You For Rendering To Me According To My Work

May 12 Scripture Meditations Based on Psalms 60-62

Key Verse – Psalm 62:12 Also unto thee, O Lord, belongeth mercy: for thou renderest to every man according to his work.

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR RENDERING TO ME ACCORDING TO MY WORK

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s diligence 
Ever regarding my earnest obedience
While forgiving my impudence and impatience
Every time I come to You for Your revival prevalence.

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s fervency 
Ever upholding my faith’s persistency
While correcting my laxity and leniency
Every time I come to You for Your mercy.

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s feature 
Ever rewarding my service-gesture
While recompensing my sacrifice of submission-posture
Every time I labour through Your strengthening nurture.

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s earnestness 
Ever blessing my steadfastness
While attending to my performance along faithfulness
Every time I depend on You for Your helpfulness.

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s commitment 
Ever equipping my involvement
While enabling my dedication’s achievement
Every time I trust You for Your encouragement.

Thank You for rendering to me according to my work’s fruit-bearing 
Ever satisfying my productiveness’ rearing
While increasing my soulwinning harvest with love’s caring
Every time I beseech You for Your gearing.

May 12, 2022
Form: Rhyme

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