Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Night Sky In March

Greet the winsome poise of equinox
Staging day and night equally apart
Welcoming spring as winter departs
While moon enthralls doting hearts
In twinkling dance of sparkling stars
Strumming strings of astral orchestra.

Fall in love with heavenly stellar dream
As Milky Way floats on starlit stream
Riding ebullient waves of celestial sea
In colors and shapes of mystical artistry:
Zodiacal themes constellations gleam~
A painting hanging on walls of galaxy.

Search up-high for Mercury and Mars
Rejoicing in path of spectacular charm,
Meteor showers, airglows, and sparks,
Brilliant colors refracting dusty storms,
And a smile embellishing cusp of dawn:
Conspicuous posture of Venus above,

Eloquently posing as-if a morning star,
Goddess of love for romantic hearts,
Envious of Polaris~ the northern star,
Unwilling to cede to sun’s entourage
Glistening amber horizon of rosy arc
Sparkling winsome posture of equinox.

February 25, 2022
Placed 1st: Second Chance Submission
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Evelyn Judy Buehler June 18, 2023 at 11:57 AM Pure celestial delight is transmitted by these beautiful lines on the period of lovely, vernal equinox. A fantastic work, Vijay.

Sam Kauffman October 17, 2022 at 12:42 PM Vijay, I am as mesmerized by your words as I am by the March sky - the equinox! I love the way you have blended the celestial images and the factual. Beautifully done. Congratulations to you for your win! Blessings of the autumnal equinox to you!

Sotto Poet October 16, 2022 at 9:15 AM You have my heartfelt congratulations on winning my contest, Vijay. You have written a remarkable poem that is built with many various levels of beauty.

Sotto Poet March 7, 2022 at 2:20 AM Aww!!! It's really wonderful!!! Writing style, there is beautiful imagery. These are imaginative emotions that are offered to the stars, the sky, and the planets. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:55 AM So glad to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate, Lasaad. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos March 6, 2022 at 10:26 PM The nightly equal equinox beteeen day and night as the sun has already set and the mood turns to stars slowly twinkling in the sky ,awesome write my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:54 AM Much appreciate, Jennifer--many many thanks.

M. L. Kiser March 3, 2022 at 3:53 PM Ah...quite a beautiful penning of the night skies. Vijay Pandit March 7, 2022 at 7:54 AM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands March 3, 2022 at 7:04 AM A beautiful poem about the night sky! Great vocabulary. So well written Vijay. Looks like a winner!! :) Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 8:01 AM Always a delight to read your feedback. Many thanks Heidi.

Supraja Kannan March 3, 2022 at 4:29 AM Aww!!! Incredibly beautiful!!! Lovely imagery throughout and your poem glistens like the unique northern lights ... Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 8:00 AM Glistens like northern lights--beautifully said. Much appreciate Supraja. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar March 3, 2022 at 3:09 AM So beautiful a verse of the night sky Vijayji...so rich in imagery...your brilliant words of this poem sparkle just as the 'twinkling stars' of the night sky...Best wishes in the contest...God bless...~ Ani Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 7:59 AM So glad you liked the poem. Always a joy to read your insightful comments. Many thanks, Ani.

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2022 at 8:39 PM great take on the topic. I like how you made it be in March. Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 7:59 AM March was on mind. Many thanks Andrea. Appreciate your feedback.

Bj Legros Kelley March 2, 2022 at 11:43 AM Wow Vijay, an amazing stellar poem! Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 7:58 AM Thank you BJ. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Victor Buhagiar March 2, 2022 at 5:52 AM Well written as usual. Vijay Pandit March 2, 2022 at 7:32 AM Happy to see you again. Hope all is well, Victor.

Bill Baker March 1, 2022 at 4:44 PM You really know your night sky facts, Vijay. Love the imagery and description of various heavenly bodies. Good entry for the contest. A poet friend, Bill Vijay Pandit March 2, 2022 at 7:31 AM Much to explore up there, Bill. Glad you liked the poem. Many thanks for visiting and commenting.

Mike Gentile March 1, 2022 at 6:52 AM The winsome poise of equinox! What a great opening line Vijay! It sets the tone for the rest of your beautiful portrait of the night sky!! Vijay Pandit March 2, 2022 at 7:30 AM Glad you liked it Mike. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Quoth Theraven February 28, 2022 at 7:25 AM Vijay, Put in writing the way only best dreamers can. 'equinox Staging day and night equally apart', Resounds in new hope for all the world, especially for the young at heart. -Richard Vijay Pandit March 1, 2022 at 4:36 AM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Richard. Many thanks.

Joseph May February 27, 2022 at 8:22 PM You describe the Night sky well Vijay.. I enjoyed the read Vijay Pandit March 1, 2022 at 4:35 AM Thank you Joseph. Much appreciate.

Michael Tor February 27, 2022 at 7:30 PM These are creative thoughts giving to the stars, the sky, and planets. Nicely written Vijay... Vijay Pandit March 1, 2022 at 4:34 AM Much appreciate Michael--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues February 27, 2022 at 3:48 PM Love the line: A painting hanging on walls of galaxy. Vijay Pandit March 1, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2022 at 3:02 PM Very descriptive and creative work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I appreciate you dropping by my page. Sara Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 3:42 PM Thank you Sara for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Susan Lawrence February 27, 2022 at 12:42 PM Poignant lovely words flowing from your pen as always Vijay. I especially love Fall in love with heavenly stellar dream As Milky Way floats on starlit stream Riding ebullient waves of celestial sea. Best of luck in the contest ! Hugs, Susan :) Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 3:42 PM Much appreciate your visit and insightful feedback, Susan. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2022 at 11:41 AM Heavenly poetic symphony, my dearest friend, Vijay! Good luck! Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 3:40 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2022 at 6:12 AM - Beautifully written as always, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 6:15 AM So glad you stopped by Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many many thanks.

Elaine George February 27, 2022 at 5:44 AM Beautiful! Sure to be on the winners list, dear Vijay. Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 6:14 AM So very kind of you Elaine. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman February 26, 2022 at 9:55 PM Love your galactic poetry, Vijay, also a wonderful learning curve for star gazers. Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 6:14 AM So nice to hear that from you Harry. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Valsa George February 26, 2022 at 5:18 AM Supped to my heart's full the beauty of this "painting hanging on walls of galaxy". Also enjoyed the 'astral orchestra' ! As ever, you have sucked up the entire beauty of the night ! Vijay Pandit February 27, 2022 at 6:13 AM Glad you liked the poem Valsa. Always a treat to read your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

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