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Written: October 23, 2023 _________________________________ In this ethereal dawn, we discover solace. As the aurora borealis implies the sky grace. Psychedelic light illumination. Sculpt our whims and spark our sensation. A peculiar combination of love's aroma. locating lies that we can't fathom as chroma In this tenuous hug, we seek forbearance. Fearing the depth of our disguised grace. However, submission leads to release. A celestial insight, an inkling of peace. Sighs of submission, a symphony of bliss. A duet with the mystery, a fleeting abyss. We descry our bearings in this twilight lullaby. I was caught up in a splendor, and can't nullify. As we swapped hushed vowels, souls were one. Finding solace in the surrendering we were done. And so, we embrace the fleeting hour, With a love that defies all logic and power. For in surrender, we find our true essence, Embracing the elixir of life's evanescence. Whispers of surrender, a gateway to felicity, A journey into the realms of eternal serenity. As the breeze carries our dreams to distant shores We surrender to love, forevermore. As the night fades into dawn first light, The whispers of surrender still ignite. Through the twilight's embrace, we find our way, In the dance of surrender, we settle to stay.

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Date: 10/24/2023 7:07:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Very enchanting... :)
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:34:00 PM
You're such a talented and gifted poet and writer, dearest Sotto. What a deep and evocative poem of soulful romance, of 'surrendering to love forevermore.' Surrender is one of the most powerful components of love--one that some don't quite comprehend. You've said it so beautifully, so artistically and with your outstanding vocabulary. Am faving this one too. It speaks to me. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 10/24/2023 12:57:00 PM
I enjoyed your wonderful write/picture. Enjoy a wonderful day................
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