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Leading Light

A sudden thought springs to my mind,
a statement borne in rhyme.
I find this happens frequently
and cherish it each time.

Don’t ask me where the thought came from,
another soul or mine
or maybe it bleeds from the ‘whole’,
if so this thought’s divine.

The thought then echoes through my mind,
I’m clothed within it’s gown
and actually feel the thought’s relief
when it is written down.

Then other thoughts can quickly come
like rain they start to pour,
while some must wait until the first
has more time to mature.

When time is right I sit me down
then more words start to flow,
my pen moves through the rhyme with ease
and writes it in one go.

The written words bear ripened fruit
like grapes plucked from the vine,
but from this point I nourish them
and make them really mine.

I carefully study every thought
and review every line
to keep the meaning shining through,
but help the words to rhyme.

I know that I am meant to share
this gift that I’ve received,
to help some find their inner strength
in what has been conceived.

My poetry can mean so much
to those who care to read,
but please don’t offer me the praise
I did not plant the seed.

There really is a leading light
to see us through our day,
it shows itself in many forms
to help us find our way.

But you my friends must seek it out
then with it you can shine,
like I have done with poetry
a gift that I make mine.

Ivor G Davies
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member A Rising Sun

A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky
Then clear illumination sunbeams were shining bright
Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry

So cold below, feeling nature has gone awry
Shivering, close the door to avoid frostbite despite
A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky 

Informing us of science knowledge, that nature can defy
The color purple and cold co-exist is the insight
Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry

Wondering what colors tonight will the moonlight supply?
Could there be colors to match aurora borealis after this skylight
A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky

Each sunrise different, colors change, sometimes almost zip by
Mostly in the cold months purple, cobalt impresses a troglodyte
Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry

What will happen at sunset when we bid the sun goodbye?
Then in the morning what will we see at first light?
A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky
Above in the shadows prune-plum purple bone dry

Written: 11/21/2022
Sponsor: Milton

Unable to let go

Foundation of the piece.


Is life just a purging of the soul and to ascend to a higher plane of existence,

do you have to let go of everything and everybody you once loved or knew? 

To do so?

Or would you wait to be called to join them if separated because you couldn't let go of your old life?

Title:

Unable to let go

(A lone raspy voice talks in the fog as it slithers in - to a hidden audience)

I crossed over
In March 

On the fifth

In the year of our Lord
1902

And all these sad years 
I've sat 

Patiently waiting for her

I've watched 
Our old beautiful world
Burn

Through the blackest of fire filled nights 

Through two world wars

Witnessed hearts bleed
With incomprehensible need

Seen corruption and illusions unfold 

Hand in hand
With greed

Out in the warm and cold

As the seduced welcomed evil into their strongholds

Watched shining stars fall
Sat thinking of my fate 

As I wait
Pining asking myself 

When will she call me to walk and join her through that silver gate

That I look to

Down this dark road
Every second 

Whenever I think
Of her

For I've looked in
Old memories that once beckoned

Explored all the seconds and who knows
Linked to being found guilty of sin

Chased paper boats
With endless time 

Just hoping
She's coping
In Heaven

And not broken in two
Like me 
In this Deep Divine

But still
Perched 

Upon this rock 
Chained like Prometheus

I
Wait

Even though the Mendli
You lot listening 

Think I'm crazy
But my old Love 
Still cuts me open

Making me cling to an old  life

With wild dreams of a new beginning

So angels
Forgive me

But hear me
Quick

Take my hand
And lead me home 
To her

Give me the Star Fire
If this can't happen

Or you can't do it

For I fear
I can no longer
Wait 

For the opening of that gate

So let me cross the burning sand barriers

Step straight through the eternal fire

For is waiting for true love
The price 

Worth all this pain

As one 
Moves on
And one remains

Show me a happy couple
And I'll show you the fire that ignites 

And it's that light
That I pray

Keeps carrying me
On horseback 

To my beloved wife

Throughout
All these 
Endless nights

As I fight Father Time 
To return to that old life

(C)
Copyright John Duffy
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Come the Night

I waited for you in the night
Holding my breath so wide awake 
The moon was high the stars shone bright 

I dreamt of holding you so tight
Enough to fear two hearts might break
I waited for you in the night

Sent love messengers in full flight
Adrift on ripples of the lake
The moon was high the stars shone bright 

Two spellbound hearts to reunite
Lovers winning big the sweepstake
While waiting for you in the night

Come to me quench my appetite
Sweet love in store through till daybreak
The moon so high the stars so bright 

Towards me comes my shining knight
It's you at last it's no mistake
I waited for you in the night
The moon was high the stars shone bright



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on February 2, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT B sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Premium Member In the mystery of the universe, where mortal hands cannot stop the fall of flowers

In the mystery of the universe, where mortal hands cannot stop the fall of flowers,
tears gather like pearls on the petals of destiny, without defying the law of time,
for what must be, shall be, like the twilight that bows before the night,
and the stars, in a trembling choir, bow to the dusk with grace and silence.
Let us not cling to the hourglass, for its sand flows like an endless river of gold,
let us drink from its golden dust, like lovers sipping the last drop of wine,
and lose ourselves in the dance of moments, unafraid of the whisper of time past,
for beauty lies in the passing, in the ephemeral that gives meaning to boundless eternity.
In the depths of the heart, let memories flow like rivers through forgotten valleys,
while our souls merge with the pale light of the waning moon,
and let us remember that life is a dream, a poem written on pages of stellar ink,
and love, an echo resounding beyond the edges of time and space.
So let us embrace our destiny, be carried by the wave of the present moment,
and find in the flower's fall not sorrow, but the beauty of an inevitable departure,
for in every ending there is a new beginning, a rebirth of celestial desires,
and in every sunset, a promise of a new dawn, shining with hope.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.


Sleep-Created Fantasy World Part 1

My conscience flickers within my brain

My eyes meet the floor in constant shame

In a dark room I sit and wait

Until I go into my own world with less hate

My eyes get tired and begin to close

The thumping of my blood developing flows

Mind twists into a sleepy mode

Of all the different roads I rode

I’ve finally made it to my sweet refugee

A world I created for just me

I land on my feet in the middle of the wood

With all the colors of the rainbow and the air smelling so good

My best faerie-friend lands in the palm of my hand

She tells me what the goblins did to the land

And how them and the giants destroyed it with fights

How the sun stopped shining it’s precious lights

I needed to be there for it had been too long

So I whistled my genuine elf-song

The dragons, gnomes, faeries, and friends

All came out as the white-tigers emerged from their dens

They circled around me with tears in their eyes

Told me how the giants and goblins took our most precious prize

They tried to destroy the world I made

Tried to wipe out all the life and the world began to fade

They were so glad I was home again

We will create an army and now we’d win...

Christ Is Life

The cross is a symbol of your love and it burns like a flame burning away our pain and shame your word is igniting a new flame, you're always on the rise and taking us to higher heights, shining bright like the stars in the sky your word is full of truth and there is nothing that we can't do, our hearts are filled with you and the good news, your presence feels so sweet when we encounter you we feel at peace, we're only living for you and you can provide us with a clear view our dreams are coming true, your always supporting us like real friends do, we are complete in you nothing can ever change that, You're the vine that provides us with all that we need, we are connected like the branches on a tree no matter where we are you will be right there to catch us when we fall

Take our old lives and ignite your life
In Jesus we have eternal life 

We have the Holy Spirit burning within our chest, changing lives and igniting us with your life today's the day we come alive our hearts burn with passion on the inside, your love can not be contained we want to embrace in your presence and see your face lit up like the sun there's nowhere to run, no need to hide we're filled with your power on the inside, and nothing can knock us down spread your kingdom like wildfire for everyone to see and clean out our hearts with a clean sweep work through us to help those in need and bring peace so they can live worry free, you will always be right by our side like a coach from the sideline, building us up not tearing us down and encouraging us to lift our heads up off the ground, we have the victory there's no contradicting that like the fact that the sun causes nature to react

Take our old lives and ignite your life
In Jesus we have eternal life 


Our hearts overflow  
Of living water fill us up, 
Fill us up, fill us up (repeat)

Take our old lives and ignite your life
In Jesus we have eternal life
Form: Lyric

To Sir With Gratitude

fair glinting gold

                   light shining bold

                        this I saw

                     for my 'flaw' is to be

                     not of your world

              Into the breech I was hurled

                   before your times were told

              ere I was an aeon old

              I changed Universes - yet

                 here, I was in darkness jet.

                    when again I rose

                    in biped pose

              to complete the task
 
                began, before your form thought to ask

                       Whence came we here?

              Your light came just in time

                 shimmered thru deepest despair

             A human mind gave to me

              a beckoning seed of desire to see

                  another day, in limited heartlost society

                Whence before  was only my desire to flee.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Cinderalla Sleeps

good night 
sweet cinders
as the clock 
on the second hand
turns clicks
striking upon twelve
chiming midnight

playing 
in a beautiful song
cinderalla it's you
strumming cords
in the heart
kissing the soul
softly without lips
a sleeping beauty

standing tall
among'st all roses
drinking of morning dew
forever young 
always beautiful
without eyes
sparkling inner vision
princess of shining light
in the spotlight
a star

crowning of dreams
glistening in happiness
dazzling within
a treasured jewel
sparkling diamonds
only worthy
of a  king

humbled kissing
lips upon 
one hand
a lady 
of elegance
in this castle

oh sleeping beauty
it is one 
of dreams
cupid he shot
a golden arrow
it landed
on a perfect dream

Premium Member An Old Comb

The old combs
Stay with me many years
Now I bought new combs too
But too lazy to use
I stay at home 
Especially during MCO
I seldom use mirror or comb
I use my hands to comb most of the time 
To tidy the short hair I cut myself
I'm too old to use comb often
I'm too lazy to bother appearance
Which was spoiled by dimmy eyes and ugly wrinkles
Suddenly I think of my parents
Everyday they couldn't do without combs 
They brushed their hair tidy and shining
Father with a quick sweep 
Mother with a long hour combing straight down
Olden days people like tidiness and cleanliness
Their days are simple 
And follow routines and etiquette
Their hearts loyal and simple 
Like the being straightened hair
Now people like fashions ,excitements and hairstyles
The combs bring me back 
The sweet memories of my parents and their love
The old combs deserve to be kept
In my heart
Especially during this Mother's and Father's Day

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