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A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky Then clear illumination sunbeams were shining bright Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry So cold below, feeling nature has gone awry Shivering, close the door to avoid frostbite despite A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky Informing us of science knowledge, that nature can defy The color purple and cold co-exist is the insight Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry Wondering what colors tonight will the moonlight supply? Could there be colors to match aurora borealis after this skylight A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky Each sunrise different, colors change, sometimes almost zip by Mostly in the cold months purple, cobalt impresses a troglodyte Above in the shadows, prune-plum purple bone dry What will happen at sunset when we bid the sun goodbye? Then in the morning what will we see at first light? A rising sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky Above in the shadows prune-plum purple bone dry
Written: 11/21/2022 Sponsor: Milton

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Date: 11/28/2022 7:44:00 AM
WOW ! A rising Sun casting apricot upon the eastern sky. Really charming. Blessings
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/28/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara
Date: 11/22/2022 5:37:00 AM
Rising sun shines on your poetry, Sara. Awesome write.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2022 6:34:00 AM
Vijay, Your compliment is outstanding. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 11/21/2022 10:56:00 PM
Excellent poem. Your imagery is wonderful.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2022 6:31:00 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. Sara
Date: 11/21/2022 1:13:00 PM
- What a beautiful picture made with your words - "to match aurora borealis after this sky light", Sara - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2022 5:28:00 AM
Anna-Lise, Thank you for the nice review of my work. I needed it this morning. Sara