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Premium Member Breakfast At Tiffanys
I watched “Breakfast at Tiffany’s” last night - we’re going to be reading Truman Capote’s book after the break and I wanted to start thinking about it. The movie rewrites Truman Capote’s story, turning it...

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Categories: rewrites, class, school, society, student, teen, women, write,
Form: Free verse



The Rewrite Daily News a Never New and Never Ending Story
"Every day is a page to write a new story". 
And I have rewritten us every day for the last 20 years
We break up…but we were never really together
We make up…how sweet it is ...but...

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Categories: rewrites, lost love, wine,
Form: Free verse
Red China Rewrites the Bible
The Red Chinese Communist leader has rewritten the Bible by declaring that Jesus Christ is also a sinner which is provocative blasphemy against Jesus Christ! In this account Jesus Christ tells the woman caught in...

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Categories: rewrites, 10th grade, 11th grade, 12th grade, 6th
Form: Narrative
Oh, the poet sees you not just as a fleeting shadow that fades into horizons
Oh, the poet sees you not just as a fleeting shadow that fades into horizons,
He falls in love as the sun in gold transfigures the curve of your cheeks,
In the line of the smile that...

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© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, fantasy,
Form: Free verse
A Hero's Truth
A knight still shining...
Because that’s what we need;
Someone to admire... 
When the world’s on its knees.
So much is weighing...
On the shoulders of the story;
And everyone is watching,
For there own personal touch of glory...

Fight the good...

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Categories: rewrites, angst, confusion, education, introspection, life, peace, philosophy,
Form: Epic



You Say You Want a Revolution
You say you want a revolution?
                             ...

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© Dm Babbit  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, angst, change, freedom, political, war,
Form: Couplet
The Heart, the Hand
With shaking hand I write in dimmed light
Strings of words robust burst and slip from my pen
With a grave heart I write
With a frail heart I forgive
It mimicks the sound of life
   ...

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Categories: rewrites, write, words, heart, heart, love, me,
Form: Free verse
In this world full of lies and illusions
In this world full of lies and illusions,
There's a power that constantly changes its face.
It never shows itself in the light of day,
But hides in the shadows of a corrupt system.
It chooses its puppets from...

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© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, power,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member The Ascension--with Rewrites
(Author’s note: This poem is a humorous satire on how a modern media mentality would view the story of Christ’s Ascension.)


The Ascension (with Rewrites)

By Mark D. Stucky
Look!
Up in the sky!
Not a bird.
Certainly no plane.
It’s super...

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Categories: rewrites, humor, jesus, miracle, mystery, religion, spiritual, success,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Poetry Is a Well-Organized Speech
Poetry is a naturally simple speech
Poetry is a well-organized speech
It is the profound expression of the soul
The digital or verbal dialect of the heart
Poetry is a special piece of art
Poetry plays a major and vital...

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Categories: rewrites, allegory, inspiration, language, literature, muse, poetry, poets,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member A Lollipop Day
A Lollipop Day

A swing stalls mid swings
kicked dirt strewed a ground
a swing seat goes empty
a boy whacks away at clung dirt
     ~~lawn trails a dusty path,

Blue jeans stand at attention
further treatment...

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© Hilo Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, allegory, candy, childhood, day, hair, life, parents,
Form: Narrative
If I'D Picked Up a Snooker Cue
If I’d picked up a snooker cue, when I picked up a pen;
and then gone on to build a break of eight or nine or ten.

If I had only listened more to those who understand;
who...

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Categories: rewrites, funny, humorous, satire, sports,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member When a Poet Feels a Break Is Needed
When A Poet Feels A Break Is Needed

O at the times I swore to drop this pen,
rejoin the multitudes of normal men.
Those sleepless nights, this old writing hand ached,
from sweat and tears, true poet can...

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Categories: rewrites, endurance, feelings, meaningful, poets, wisdom, words, writing,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Salvation in an App Store
Salvation in an App Store?

By Mark D. Stucky
Google Maps won’t work
for the way I feel lost.
Is there a salvation app
I can install on my phone
to download redemption today
and upload my soul when I die?

Since there...

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Categories: rewrites, god, humor, relationship, religion, social, spiritual, technology,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Loving You More
My love since you are away
I visit you in my heart
I pull the image of your spirit from my soul
That way you are inside of me
That keeps me calm yet
In a serious sexy frenzy for...

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Categories: rewrites, appreciation, i love you, love,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Juice Ex Machina
Juice Ex Machina

By Mark D. Stucky
When wine ran out at the wedding in Cana,
why did Mary request and expect Jesus
(who seemed slightly exasperated)
to act as an on-demand, divine liquor store?

Yet, gallons of fermented juice of...

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Categories: rewrites, care, humorous, jesus, judgement, miracle, mystery, spiritual,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member How Many More

Tears fill our eyes these winter years;
our spring it seems was long ago...
we look ahead with deepened fears.
Tears fill our eyes these winter years
as days fly faster it appears...
not much more time for us to...

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Categories: rewrites, age, feelings, life, together,
Form: Triolet
Once More Unto the Breach
Trauma
Drama
Pain....
another page in a chapter
In a book that rewrites itself
I should learn to leave that book 
upon the shelf
Or maybe I should burn it
And keep myself warm next to the fire
She said she loved me—
This...

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© James West  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, betrayal, conflict, fate,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Gospel Rewrites
I think, and sometimes fear,
we have two ways, maybe more,
to read the four holy gospels,
and any sacred scripture,
and any regeneration/degeneration story
of creative tension,
win/win sweet spot future aspirations
midst win/lose historic raw spots
of past experience.

We can read...

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Categories: rewrites, caregiving, health, integrity, relationship,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member God's On Mute
(Author’s note: This poem is a humorous look at how the pandemic changed our technology, our relationships, and maybe even our spiritual quests.)


God’s on Mute

By Mark D. Stucky
We forgot how to talk
during the pandemic.
Glitches often...

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Categories: rewrites, god, humor, loneliness, mental health, mystery, solitude,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member We All Have That One Sibling
We all have that one sibling who has to have the attention, right?
I am a laid-back Tom, and happy without attention, day and night.
My sister Tallahassee is one who needs to delight a room.
Full of...

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Categories: rewrites, sister,
Form: Rhyme
Knowledge of the Soul
I’ve learnt so many things, the bringer of my hate
This world seems to want me to despise
My self and what is vain, my pride is only in my head
The words are teaming with despair

Language of...

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© Ian Petch  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, imagination, introspection, sad, me, me,
Form: I do not know?
The Third Time
Without the warmth and light of your soul the world withers and dies as if a human without oxygen 
The human concept cries and rewrites the whole story of what it really means to be...

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© Marco Soto  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrites, age, beautiful, beauty, best friend, life, lonely,
Form: I do not know?
Premium Member Just Thinking
Morning soothes my heart and delights my thoughts
Whispers of a misty moment rights my thoughts

Buttery sunshine bestows joy through my life
As hues of lavender laughter highlights my thoughts

Gentle birds emerge and silence the milky clouds
With...

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Categories: rewrites, inspirational, morning, nature,
Form: Ghazal
They Were Dying, Part 4 of 7
(Montgomery Clift was almost 40 years old
when he appeared in "The Misfits".  Four
years earlier, he had badly damaged his
face in a car accident, symbolically ending
his matinee idol status.  By this picture,
he was confused...

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Categories: rewrites, film,
Form: Free verse

Book: Reflection on the Important Things