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Chaotic Soul

My soul has gone through constant torment as many have come into my life for the mere enjoyment of giving me deceit. It was a long night when I saw the rain falling from the clouds outside. As it hit the ground, I heard a voice in the dark. It was the voice of a small child. I saw her crying in the rain, tears streaming down her pale face. She was shivering and soaking wet from the pouring rain. I could not let her, a small child, suffer through the night or even for another second. I opened the door and ran to bring her into the house. I was alone that night as my family was at an event I decided not to attend. The child had long black hair with highlights of red. Her eyes were red from her crying. Her clothes were soaking wet from the rain. Immediately, I went to grab a throw for her to be warm. After that, I made her some tea as I had no hot chocolate. Kneeling before her, I gave her the mug, and she took it with a weak smile while she drank. I asked her, “Are you ok, angel.” She looked up with a smile and nodded. As I turned away to get her some food, she asked me, “Are you ok?” I could only say that I was. She replied, “You don’t look well.” “A wise girl,” I thought. I told her that I was trying to adjust to being a single man with no children and the prospect of it being always. She asks why I feel this way. I tell her about how I have seen many women deny any relationship with me as they feared I would leave them once I achieved my dreams and how I had been rejected by others who saw no value in me, for they only wanted someone to fulfill their dreams. This little girl looks up at me with tears and states, “Allah has seen your struggle and has sent you a message through me. It is not to worry, as the little girl looking at you is an angel in disguise. I am your guardian angel in disguise as your youngest daughter in the future, her name is Hope. How can it be that you are here in the past then, and how can it be that my youngest would have the named the name that I would want for my first daughter? The angel replies, “Your first daughter is named Bella Maria, your second daughter is named Faith Gianna, your third daughter is named Mindi Rose, and your two sons are named Liam and Logan.
Your dreams will come true; you only have to wait a little longer. Your enemies will be at the table that has been prepared.
In an instant, the angel was gone.
Form: Prose


Apartment of Addiction

There seems to be silence within the serene night,
 yet those indoors have eternal cries of unspoken fright.
One man drowns in chocolate, shamefully eying his hips,
as the woman next door kisses the hundredth man’s lips. 
Two floors below, one screams out in pain, 
as fatal anger has won the game.
The killer, shadowed, makes no remark, 
but watches the blood flow, immersed in his soul of eternal dark.
Three doors across, an elderly man sits, rejected and broke,
hiding his face with tendrils of smoke. 
His trusty cigarettes always at the ready, 
when his finances where never steady.
Another flight down, a woman drowns in her agony sip by sip,
her life seems to slip by like a commercial blip.
Yet all she can think
is that her marriage is on the brink.
Before she fades into the night of another day,
all she remembers is throwing her wedding ring away.
Traveling down to the ground floor, 
the troubles seem to equal more.
A woman tosses about in her anxious bed, 
while her worries do pirouettes in her head. 
Try to let the past and present go,
but the future looms like a horror show. 
Outside, in the darkness, a piercing light shines 
as a moth flutters by, on the still air it climbs. 
It seems this beacon, as bright as the sun,
new hope has just begun.
The moth bangs itself against the glass,
trying to reach glory at last. 
Yet no matter how much its antennae bend, 
or wings grow fragile and not able to mend,
it seems like the only thing to do
to deal with its feelings, old and new.
Until it steps back and looks at the light 
realizing that harming itself won’t set anything right.
With the last of its strength, ending its plight,
the moth flies off into the night. 
At this moment, the man decides to rid his house of fat-packed glory,
as the woman on the ground floor takes a deep breath, changing her story. 
The killer at large turns himself in,
the end to his years of sin.
The woman pours the bottles of wine down the drain, 
finally she can remember her name. 
The elderly man exhales his last puff of smoke, 
the grueling memories no longer prod and poke.
And the woman kissing her hundredth man
lets him go, heart no longer sinking in deadly quicksand.
The light of dawn finally breaks,
and the darkness of the mind  no longer takes
away from the people’s lives 
as the light of hope is now by their sides.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Sweat of Thy Face




                           The Sweat of Thy Face

When we were young, we were given a charge by the Almighty…
 “ Be fruitful, and multiply, and replenish the earth, and subdue it.”
                       ( This, we seemed able to do. 
It was the second charge we've had trouble with…)
“...In the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread, till thou return unto the ground…”

     History, according to the Bible,  tells us that, one reason Adam was formed was because God wanted someone to till the ground…to work the soil, planting seeds and reaping the fruits of their labor.
      Since it goes on to say we will do this with the sweat of our face,  we can deduce that this will be hard work. Perhaps mankind misunderstood the words,  “of THY face”, reading it as, “the sweat of THEIR face”?
****************************************************************************
Slavery,
Bond servants, 
Free labor…
Sacrificing humanity and compassion for a footstool.
****************************************************************************
Freedom! Finally, unpaid and forced labor is rejected and despised…outlawed.

However, the ones in power were still the wealthy. 
Mankind, always searching for the loophole to save their soft, lilly white hands from respectable callouses. 

We began to forget how to work, how to grow food, preserve it, and how to be self reliant.

We sacrificed quality for quantity, flavor for convenience, health for sloth.
We've been blessed with intelligence, ingenuity, common sense…what do we accomplish with these blessings? Discovering more and more ways to avoid a sweaty face and those calloused hands. 
****************************************************************************
The industrial revolution,
The Sciences, Technology,
Our superpower,  Pollution. 
****************************************************************************
     Now, on the cusp of inventing the ultimate slave, we could be creating a world where human beings are merely dumb animals relying on our own creation to do all the hard stuff…like thinking. 

Once again we create the tower of Babel. 
Not to reach heaven, no...
a tower that controls our very own Adam...
 Our highly polished, Eve.

When one tries to control Artificial Intelligence , how will we know who holds the leash and who wears the collar?
Form: Didactic

On the Catwalk

In numerous locales countrywide, they hold sway
Pirouetting at intervals like ballerinas from Bolshoi
Beauteous, feline and very feminine
Slender to the point of emaciation, not quite
Cultivating the undernourished look on a frugal diet
Decidedly austere for a longer tenure in the limelight
Basking in the fleeting warmth of an adulatory audience
A gathering of the doting kindred and the upwardly mobile
Some dirty old men on the sly, dirty young men too
Glued to their seats craning for a better view
By and large captive by choice, a handful perforce
Sitting through to pen their weekly column
Giving those they fancy their due in the sun
Witnesses to a parade of demure eyed lasses
And a few with flashy looks walking tall on stilettos
Essentially female and contoured though not prominently so
At least not to a marked degree, yet with excellent muscle tone

Opulence, no longer deemed a career necessity
Once considered right stuff, now rejected as wrong size
An hour-glass shape belonging to an age bygone 
But hardly so, from the viewers’ mind, in retrospect
Enchanting and alluring yet not overtly titillating
Each in a state of dress and undress
Willing tools of designers flaunting their creations
Sporting dresses and hats and shoes, and lingerie too
In black or white and loud or subdued hues
Displaying formal wear, casual wear, swimsuits and sleep suits
Some scanty and figure hugging, others flowing and loose
A bony look required for some, others fulsome
A voyeur’s paradise, to be sure
Indulging a fetish without stooping too low
Chilly weather was never reason enough to cancel a show
Heat of arc-lamps taking care of goose pimples
Or brandy taken neat infusing the needed heat

Harbingers of tomorrow’s fashion and pall-bearers of today’s
The strobe lit platform of the pageant
Serving to launch new faces or is it legs?
The leggy look personified by Twiggy of yore
Carried through in the interim and sustained by the new genre
Captivating without doubt, and thorough professionals
Displaying unruffled demeanour and tutored bearing of thoroughbreds
Exuding confidence with every graceful step they take
Cool as ice despite the harsh glare of stage lights
And callous catcalls from boorish males
Performing in a backdrop of future fashion trends
Money and fame finding some, eluding others
Be it centre stage or in the shadows 
It is bread on the catwalk for all

A Kind of Hate

as a child to his mother, to you i run
but you reject me, as an illegal son

i hoped to open your arms....
and take me into your embrace
i hoped to hold your hand...
and see the smile on your face

i thought your were different...
i thought you wouldn't give me pain
i thought you loved me, i opened my heart for you....
but all was in vain, all was in vain!!

my hopes in you were so high....
and as high they were, as painful was the fall!
you made my feel that i can be loved
you made me trust you....
you made me believe in love again
but all in vain, all in vain!!

now i shall leave you, like how you left me...
i don't regret it, i don't feel guilty for it
you who started it, you lied to me
you deceived me...
and after you made me believe in love again
after you convinced me that i can be loved
after you lied to me and made me feel...
that you love me
you just left!! 
like all the rest!!
you are just like them all!!
you are no different!!

i thought you'd make me forget my ugly past
i thought you'd make up for all those years....
i spent before seeing you
i thought I'd find the true love
i thought you'd never leave me
but you left me!!
just like all of them

so now i shall leave you the same way
now when you realized my value....
my worth, when you found nobody
to love you the way i did
to be kind to you, the way i was
to praise you the way i did
now you come back to me
when you realized that you can never
find somebody like me
when you realized how good and true
i was to you

now you come back
thinking I'm waiting for you!!
thinking that i would meet you...
with opened arms and take you into my embrace
to hold my hand and to see the smile on my face!
but i did just like what you did
i rejected you
just like how you rejected me
i wanted to hurt you
just like how you hurt me
i wanted to make you feel how 
sad it feels, how bad it feels
so you can try the poisonous cup
you made me drink!

just leave now, i don't want you anymore
i don't love you anymore
i may be even hating you now!!
i don't want even to see, nor talk to you
i don't want even to run into you as a coincidence!
you just go away, and leave me alone again
in my dear solitude, with my dear empty life
with my dear hatred and anger and sadness
I'd rather live and die alone
than to be with somebody like you!!


Premium Member Kith

KITH

I have told you who l am numerous times. But you just took me for a regular creature, all of you have failed the test of recognition; I am not all human, yet it is just the human side of me catching up to my lost soul;

My Spirit has preceded me in space, time and perception.
My daughter left me because she was my Mother:

My Kith no longer recognizes me because my
thought patterns were antagonized by the misplacement of its pattern. 
My Original Kith has fallen into the depths of the human experience.
This time I came to sort out those things that held us back - 
Those things that prevented you from knowing me. 
I am not yet with the universal creator; Nor am I yet with total God mind -

I am only privileged to be as an interpreter of what I've experienced. 
Those foul and unclean thoughts and deeds that kept me defiled will serve to enlighten so that you do not have to experience them, I have been made pure and wise, now able to rise.
I have been exalted to the Mother-Dome.

I come seeking those who want to know my reason for being, to let them experience life through my eyes. 
Realization of my extraordinary existence came during a bout with celibacy when a zephyr came through my window and seductively filled me with awesome bliss.
It was then I understood the magnitude of my sex appeal that somehow,        
I had always rejected. 
Wanted only to be loved for merely being born.

People trying to get inside of me or as close as they could get infringingly,

they wanted to be a power over me or sup from my body or somehow. 
Impregnate me with their own will.  
Though as an Eagle, or a Sphinx, Oft' times I must cluck,
for they certainly do not understand my language -

"I am not just by happenstance" – 
"I have happened to you" !.

I ‘vied lived to pay my debt to you. Yet, if you do not make it … in this sphere
I will call to you, and you will arise from the cinders in stages. 
All who experience me as their "Mother" will hear my call - And while the earth burns and the Water dwindles; As the oxygen becomes toxic; I cannot develop gills again …
Yet, instill, I’m here for you, and all who follow my mind leaps shall come with me to new heights, and a new beginning… I cannot keep clucking around on the ground, it’s time for conscious spirits to rise and soar while speaking the language of our kith.

A Poem For Sir James Dyson That's Not About Hoovers

Bath City football club is an embarrassment to Bath
Most people ain't heard of them the ones who have laugh 
Their aim and ambition is to be what they are 
And that's like dreaming you're a broken down car 
The fixture list came and it says you take part 
So you push that car around the track from the start 
Their desire is to exist with no plan to go far 
They don't have the fire they don't have the heart 
We don't show support when it all looks a farce
Don't we deserve something better than this
In good old Bath City where only rugby exists 
Football can rot because rugby's the wish 
absolute bollocks it's bollocks it is
Lacking intelligence in this rugby territory
it's like they see football the ultimate enemy 
Scared of its presence and what it might do 
A city with one club yet big enough for two 
Our Uni makes athletes Olympian Gold 
Bath Rugby competes while the football's on hold 
There is a demand, no there's not we get told 
"Football's not our game it's just not our mould" 
I know Sir James Dyson is a man made in Bath 
we're all proud of that, those Hoovers are bad 
I say that as slang, his old bosses are mad
They rejected his hoover, how dumb and how daft 
Now with your mass fortune beyond simple maths 
You can now do what nobody else ever has 
Invest in Bath City and put them on the map 
You'll be a hero and they won't be crap 
Potential so blatant will finally grow 
and with it our pride, a pride never known  
fill up the stadium with a reason to go 
and fans will keep coming if there is a show 
The community will bond as it responds to events 
when you create dreams the present prevents 
those magical days when the cup brings giants 
a promotion or two through your generous expense 
there's so much potential, they so under achieve 
it wouldn't take much for that club to succeed
giving thousands of locals dreams hope and belief 
It's you Sir James Dyson can gift what we need 
It'll take off like your Hoovers but the football won't suck 
with your big fat fortune it won't cost you a buck 
it's a bigger football club than we know but its stuck 
and it's about our community, it's a gift of good luck 
invest in Bath City and the best is to come,
you'll go down in history as the one champion 
who did the one thing that nobody had done, 
go on mate please it's a job that sounds fun
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Child From the Christmas Star

An eight-pointed star 
Shone in the night in summer 
He came from above 
Not belonging to the stars 
Stranger to them all 
Is above the zodiac 
Plundering its fate 
He is from the pure greatness 
A door to the heavens 
Sophia prepared the flesh 
For she had regret 
Sabaoth sent his great light 
For he was wrathful 
Barbelo sent her power 
For she had wisdom 
Jesus the man sent himself  
For he had mercy 
He was laid in a manger 
No room in the inn 
The world hated him so much  
For it was darkness 
And he blinded it with light 
News reached the dead king  
His hair was a lion’s mare  
His body a snake 
His eyes were bright lightning bolts 
Ruler of darkness 
His mother rejected him 
As a bad disgrace 
He summoned all the magi 
The wise foreigners  
Followers of the fire 
To find this small child 
As the Magi were dispatched 
He thought to himself 
“What is the power of him 
Who was born this night 
Who is higher than we are? 
A drop from heaven? 
Whom dragons brought to a cave? 
Where a child was born?” 
Those magi sailed the bright sand 
Ignoring the cold 
The star became a lighthouse 
Which led to the child 
And to shepherds in pure white 
They gave three blessed gifts 
Gold and frankincense and myrrh 
As the king waited 
In silence and solitude 
He realized something 
Filled with jealousy and wrath 
He ordered his slaves 
“Extinguish this divine light 
Do what is needed!” 
An angel from the great star 
Told the glad Joseph 
“Flee to the land of Egypt 
With your wife and son 
To escape the flood of death 
To escape the plague 
The hot fire and sulphur 
That killed the mature 
And now will murder the young” 
And so the parents 
Carrying the eternal 
Fled to the bare land  
All the little were murdered 
Rivers of blood flowed 
Loud cries of pain and mourning 
Flowed out their mouths 
With the king in vain glory 
Saying “I am God 
There is no other but me!” 
The sands of time fell 
And so, Mary and Joseph 
Returned with Jesus 
The baby pronounced three words 
Whom none can utter 
Lest they be killed by cold stones 
With knowledge we say 
“Out of a pure foreign air 
The light bringer came 
Those ones he chose for himself 
He turned them to stars 
To shine in the pleroma 
The kingdom of light 
Which the only door to it  
Being the eight-pointed star.”
Form: Choka

Not My Choice Pt 1

First times 
are meant 
To be special 
Or so I wish.

With a lack 
Of experience
And a timid 
Demeanor,

I never learned
How to say no
To a person
That I liked.

When I look
Back on it now,
I think to myself,
How stupid could I be.

Our very first date,
In an empty cinema.
I heard the clink 
Of his belt buckle undone.

Tension held on
As he took my hand
And guided it
To what he pulled out.

His breathing grew heavy,
And I sat stiff
As he moved my hand
Against his.

I should have said no,
But I wasn’t taught how.
Uncomfortable
As he asked 
If I’d put my mouth around.

I shook my head,
Shaky 
And nauseas with fear
As I pulled my hand back.

He claimed ‘blue balls’
And asked if I knew
What that was.
I didn’t.

Every time he touched me
Or the very least tried,
I’d grow sick
And he, upset.

He yelled at me once,
For getting sick to my stomach.
I didn’t know he’d yelled
Until someone told him off.

He’d apologize,
But only half hearted.
It was clear from day one,
What his intentions were.

‘I need to get laid’
He’d tell me on repeat.
Guilt sucked me dry,
But that was what he wanted. 

First times
Are meant to be special
Or at the very least,
Consensual.

After the first,
I was glad
Nothing more happened,
Or I’d regret. 

But in the second half,
I grew comfortable.
Believed he was 
A changed man.

How silly of a thought,
For someone like me,
To be so naive,
I’d given in.

First times should be special. 
That’s how I wanted mine.
Instead, what I got
Was not even a choice.

In the secret of the bed,
Doing nothing more than touching,
He guided his
And my head tilted back.

When he told me
‘It’s in’,
I almost felt sick.
Why hadn’t he asked?
Where was my consent?

My thoughts became muddled,
Filled with disbelief.
It couldn’t be, could it?
But he confirms it the next day.

I sit on the thought
That my first time 
Was taken from me
Without question.

But if I were to tell someone,
They wouldn’t care.
It could count as rape,
If it never happened again.

It happened more times 
Than I can count
(that’s a lie, I could),
With my consent
This time.

If I had it my way,
I’d go back
And do it over again.

I wouldn’t let him touch me,
Because my body rejected.
I should have listened then
Instead of crying and begging.

Premium Member I Am Who I Am

I am who I am

Were you to ask where I’m from my past my tale my next of kin
the answer lies in who tells my narrative my twist what kind of spin

My autobiography is quickly shown in who I am will be in time
past present future blend in context and contingency overt and sublime

No doubt the product of genes and socialisation is rather pertinent
thus mixing and mingling draws frameworks but is also quite reticent

German ancestry Lower Saxon and East Prussian born after the War
struggling with Genocide Holocaust trans-generational down to my core

Grew up in Hamburg somewhat lonely understood by not many but few
too young in my school year a class clown a rebel a critic because I knew

Teachers could not reject or downgrade me since I got full marks in exams
so I carved out my niche opposed authority of Messieurs and Mesdames

A late child of the Student Revolution an exchange to California ensued
where hot love struck me like balm on my wounds with Gigi from Peru

After graduation I rejected being supported by my father and joined the Army
to gain independence yet the method to gain freedom now seems very barmy

Could not leave the Forces despite pretty vigorous conscientious objection
did my best to help others as a medical doctor in humanistic inception

My duties brought me to Wales by the Irish Sea with five children and marriage
country medic and farm house guiding my kids and then nuptial miscarriage

Depression struck no light at the end of the tunnel just darkness and void
too much drink downcast in my mental wheel chair and almost destroyed

Went to rehab in South Africa for treatment where God-incidence came
where I met my wife best friend lover soulmate who had suffered the same

Now I sit in the sun in South Africa stopped medicine write story and poem
reinvent  my life some inner child stuff self-actualisation and certainly growing

New awareness novel perspectives pacifism philosophy and many questions
but the knowledge that kindness love and compassion are more than suggestions

My most intimate companion apart from my gorgeous wife is depression
both showed me my path journey and meaning my own life’s repossession

So few words about where I come from who I am will become and will be
so if you wish to explore more of my roots and my future please read my poetry
Form: Verse

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