Long Pivots Poems

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Eraser

8th grade algebra class

Hyper chit chat from black-caped Louis
And his stringy long-haired buddy Richard

In the hallways before class they slap
The bare back necks of unsuspecting classmates
Stamping foreheads

Making the nuck nuck and whoop whoop of Larry Moe and Curly

That’s what they were re-enacting
With knees slipped under their tiny desks
As Mr. B has his back turned
Scratching formulas from his nails on the blackboard

When he pivots like a pitcher to boos
Lifts his toes to first base and baseball throws
The felt eraser full of all his mis-calculations
A lifetime of rage

Poof powder

Waffle imprint on Richard’s cheek
A cloud of chalk blonds his hair
Beards his performance grin

Richard has a look like when he’s seen his dad
Come home again and again and again
After happy hour

Leaps to his bedroom door
Holding the side of his face
“You can’t do that! You can’t do that!”

Out he disappears

Mr. B clasps his hands and fixes his face to his family
“Now for quiet.”

And we don’t dare say anything.


Premium Member Ineffable Mysteries - a Suzette Sonnet

We paid the price for hasty choices made 
and cried our tears for dreams put to the blade. 
The lessons learned a hefty price we paid. 
Against our woes, we rail — the urgency to bail.
Excuses very stale — comparisons must fail? 
With truthful knowledge, man must themselves arm, 
protecting him from possible great harm, 
as ignorance deceptively would charm. 
Lament will take its toll — do travel to-wards goal. 
Some silver tongues extol — their lavish lyrics roll. 
Plumose-like memories that tease then fade.
A fair comparison to current ails, 
the signs of growing rapprochement disarm. 
Ineffable the mysteries of t’ soul. 
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© SUZETTE SONNET—SUZNET for short (9 April 2021)
A 14-line sonnet of alternating triplets and couplets, concluding with a quatrain.
1. Rhyme scheme: aaa (b1–b2)(b3–b4) ccc (d1–d2)(d3–d4) abcd
2. The triplets are iambic pentameter [*/|*/|*/|*/|*/]. 
3. The rhyming couplets are iambic hexameter and include an internal rhyme, namely [*/|*/|*/—*/|*/|*/] (alexandrines).
4. Concluding with a quatrain in iambic pentameter that summarises the poem in a rhyme scheme set by the triplets and couplets.
5. The volta is at L9. OR the couplets may define pivots within the poem, ie a tilting or shifting in the mainline of thought. When the latter is employed, it needs to be uniform throughout the poem.

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LEXICON
ineffable: (adj) too great or extreme to be expressed or described in words.
plumose: (adj) (biology) having many fine filaments or branches which give a feathery appearance.
rapprochement: (n) (especially in international affairs) an establishment or resumption of harmonious relations.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Dance Secrets

Spin spin, turn turn,
Hold her close, hold her firm,
Then Streamline away,
And Side Step and Sway.

Feelin' the rhythm,
Music's for livin',
Keep to the beat,
Moves that repeat.

Between pairs it's fair,
To copy Ginger 'n Astaire,
If your partner can release,
She'll look like Charisse.

You gotta dance in special shoes,
So they'll know you paid your dues,
When a song's in your heart,
Your performance should start.

Always put beauty on display,
Leading in Form the proper way,
Hitch Kick and Hesitation,
Showing off, no reservation.

Gliding on ice 'cross the floor,
Passing Twinkles, so much more,
Spirals and Pivots, all you can do,
Stay to the Count the whole way through.

Now you know the secret of dance,
The lady looks good, nothing's to chance,
Affectionate sharing is what you do,
Together in life, for both of you.
© Greg Gaul  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Do us a favour Britain needs Flavour

Militant anti immigrant riots by those who love foreign diets inspired by Patrick's (a Nairobi squire & Obi One Kenobi of Satire) "the Flavour Crisis" in the Guardian..



Our saviour from v(ice) some spice and flavour

For Blighty to finally be fancy free and mighty

We must stop dastardly.. bastardly behaviour

Bold in vogue rogues in brogues who're flighty

Britain ain’t as cold as the fold in Scandinavia

Savour cultural gold or it will be nighty nighty


Rascal perky castle floats in quirky murky moats

Nobody notes same gory story just Tory turncoats

Glory gloats as caning boats is still gaining votes

Knaves & slaves sent to their graves scapegoats

Nigel Farage tribal bible barrage sowing his oats


Baiting bigots hating spigots come on do us a favour

Have a go at a hijab then go have a kebab is a worry

Flurry of slurry raves at their quarry pivots craves curry


Shady reformer berk digs jerk go beserk at lady burkha 

Has a go at Gurhka worker making his korma say sorry 

Fears that it took 60 years to pick ethnic peers on Corrie 


If only their morals like their palate whet was bit braver

Tease about it’s a breeze ease of Chinese if in a hurry 

No takeaway waiver unless more a Quaver than raver


Don’t be hasty most things tasty the same wheeze

Places with traces of other races & faces do choose

No quips please about fish and chips is Portuguese

Although clues in London dish introduced by Jews 


On our knees seeing trees not the wood our disease

Not just pasty views need other hues cultural engraver

Colour cascades with brood of shades or mood is duller

No blot of the don't give a jot lot be a melting pot bather

Britain’s future paver.. tutor & life saver could be FLAVA
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member insufferable people

insufferable people
it’s city life
like the train bum
We see him way too much
once a week anyway - he's notorious.
you can’t just loom over someone
stand too close
I can smell him, gross
get out of my space
get out of my face
stay an arm’s length away
He makes me miss covid isolation
There’s vulnerability in human interaction
Charles asks me with his eyes
I look away - which says ‘no,’
but I’ll let you know.
As we slide into the station
I step back
and Charles steps between us
my exit, now behind Charles, is blocked from view
and Charles pivots to subtly block his exit
until the doors close and Charles steps out.
In football that would be a ‘pic’
in basketball a ‘rub’
but there are no flags here
no fouls or whistles
we’ve practiced this for years
sheering away, steering away 
misguided messieurs
.
.
A song for this:
Cannock Chase by Labi Siffre


Premium Member Augury

“There’s a special providence in the fall of a sparrow.” Shakespeare in Hamlet 
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                                                   Augury

                                As the shine of the sun sets down
                                       In the far away horizon
                                    In villages as in the towns
                               And dusk stealthily makes its dawn,
                                   The sky awhile pivots to pink
                              While clouds wafted by woeful winds
                                   Seem in the firmament to blink
                                 Racing across the sky with spleen.

                                  Does the pink sky augur a storm,
                                     Tempest, typhoon or tornado
                               That may buildings and trees deform
                                        Without a tinkle of ado!
                                      Does it herald devastation 
                                      Of fauna and flora on land,
                                       Of harvest and cultivation
                                  And rocking of boats on the sand!

                                 Nature seems to have its own way
                                      To admonish human beings
                                   To hold their boats firmly at bay
                                  And arouse their inner feelings 
                               To keep those near and dear to them 
                                          In safety and security
                                     Until the end of the mayhem 
                                         Heralded by the augury.

                                   To scoff inklings of such omens
                                     Is to invite spates of worries
                                    From the clutches of a demon,
                                Let one`s ship sink in the deep sea,
                               Allow storms to set one`s house flat,     
                                   Disregard clues from the divine,
                               Let the wild winds whip off one`s hat
                                 And snub signals from the sublime.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Musks

*Image of Elon Musk & Brut by Wiki & Unilever.

The Musks

Homonyms, closeness or likeness,
name or smell, be all there,
creates vanishing impetus,
Twit byes and scents to air.

Brut (cologne) was by Faberge,
Joe Namath modeled them,
Brit's Unilever owns today,
autistic Musk use--'um.

Kicked-up raw earth lingers...consorts
just when a mug pivots,
trigger the hounds and all their sorts,
unfeeling and vicious.

Commercial Brut Musk spray wear's off,
sure and forward sashays.
Refine defines, sign-wavers scoff,
Blue Origin tweet praise.

Like Men in Black bruises those teased,
bypass pedos and smile,
a wound-up car humming was eased,
brute Musk in Space-X style.

2023 January 15
*7th Place*
MUSK 
~~Anthony Biaanco: Judged 2023 February 04

*RZ & HMS.
Form: Rhyme

Night Bike

A polished skeleton gleams in the porch light,
meshing gears rattle silver bones.
He slides tubes under his legs,
pivots on a straining fulcrum,
knee’s unlocking a juddering thrust.

He rides by night
pondering a nocturnal test flight.

Lights flicker as wheels turn.
Head bent, he powers downhill,
lamps sucking energy
through metallic stems.
Stringy tendons
knotted to angular levers,
then uphill,
dynamo stuttering, counter-assaults
of implacable darkness.

The dim road
saps,
but he will not stop.
He imagines he has a blueprint
for a flying bike.
He believes that a drawing
can be bolted together by thought.
He imagines an alloy so light
it can be lifted intact
from the page — be airborne.

The boy turns for home,
there is work to be done,
wings to be hammered together
on paper anvils.

Premium Member Thank You Ma'Am - In Memoriam Queen Elizabeth II

In memoriam:  Queen Elizabeth II died on 8 September 2022. May she Rest in Peace.

Gracious and a constant all my life,
not bending to public opinion o’ strife,
your sharp wit could cut like a Bowie knife.
With statesmen you did meet—had an excellent seat.
Paddington Bear, so sweet—your compassion, not beat.
You’re honoured as a national treasure,
never resorting to artful pressure: 
Deus ex machine per Measure for Measure.
You danced with those freed—gifted a French Guard stead.
You have lived by a creed—example to us indeed.
Remembered as beloved mother and wife,
seventy years on the throne: quite a feat.
There’s no more need of any embrasure.
For your esteemed family, hearts now bleed.

Poetic form: Suzette sonnet.
The title of the poem refers to Paddington Bear saying ' Thank you Ma'am ... for everything...' when he 'took tea' with HRH in celebration of the Planinum Jubelee in June 2022.
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© SUZETTE SONNET—SUZNET for short (9 April 2021)
A 14-line sonnet of alternating triplets and couplets, concluding with a quatrain.
Rhyme scheme: aaa (b1–b2)(b3–b4) ccc (d1–d2)(d3–d4) abcd
The triplets are iambic pentameter [*/|*/|*/|*/|*/]. 
The rhyming couplets are iambic hexameter and include an internal rhyme, namely [*/|*/|*/—*/|*/|*/] (alexandrines).
Concluding with a quatrain in iambic pentameter that summarises the poem in a rhyme scheme set by the triplets and couplets.
The volta is at L9. OR the couplets may define pivots within the poem, ie a tilting or shifting in the mainline of thought. When the latter is employed, it needs to be uniform throughout the poem.
Form: Sonnet

Music Box

Movement pivots lid lifted, Pandora astonishes
      Actions perpetual pirouette dancer acknowledges
      Glamour glues sockets smooth, figurine believed 
      Image incorporates graceful, a fighter bereaved
      Curtsey in zenity as her stage lazy susan circulates


      Tulle tickled hips scissor, treasures sage congregate
      Rules spurred by war spring away from delicate damsel 
      Intimate fleshpink stretch legs enter audition to dazzle 
      Craft to elicit captivation tunes ballerina's true energy 
      Kills a brash sword brandishing cavalier, buried enemy




               Entertaining Eighteenth of January 

                        MAGIC          TRICK
Form: Couplet

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