Notes About The Poem

Written 22 February 2025

Placed Second in:

Pick-A-Title, Vol 49 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

 

Augury

“There’s a special providence in the fall of a sparrow.” Shakespeare in Hamlet 
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                                                   Augury

                                As the shine of the sun sets down
                                       In the far away horizon
                                    In villages as in the towns
                               And dusk stealthily makes its dawn,
                                   The sky awhile pivots to pink
                              While clouds wafted by woeful winds
                                   Seem in the firmament to blink
                                 Racing across the sky with spleen.

                                  Does the pink sky augur a storm,
                                     Tempest, typhoon or tornado
                               That may buildings and trees deform
                                        Without a tinkle of ado!
                                      Does it herald devastation 
                                      Of fauna and flora on land,
                                       Of harvest and cultivation
                                  And rocking of boats on the sand!

                                 Nature seems to have its own way
                                      To admonish human beings
                                   To hold their boats firmly at bay
                                  And arouse their inner feelings 
                               To keep those near and dear to them 
                                          In safety and security
                                     Until the end of the mayhem 
                                         Heralded by the augury.

                                   To scoff inklings of such omens
                                     Is to invite spates of worries
                                    From the clutches of a demon,
                                Let one`s ship sink in the deep sea,
                               Allow storms to set one`s house flat,     
                                   Disregard clues from the divine,
                               Let the wild winds whip off one`s hat
                                 And snub signals from the sublime.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 1:07 PM
This is very good writing. I hope you attained a high score in the contest. Belated Congrats for your win
Layne Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:45 AM
Pay attention! That is what I took away. Nature does send us signals, but we are not always as aware as we should be. We are often distracted. Other times we are overly confident in our ability to 'ride out the coming storms', so we don't make sufficient preparations - tangible and intangible. The results can be catastrophic. Congrats on your winner.
Guptar Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Thanks a lot poetess for visiting my page, sharing some of your thoughts on the above write and appreciating the poem. Wish you a great day.
George Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Before something devastating happens, there are premonitions, which we should never ignore. Sometimes they come as omens or warnings from nature or mere intuition. Beautifully written dear Krishnanand. Congratulations on your great win.
Guptar Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Thanks a lot Valsa for visiting my page, sharing some of the thoughts in my write and for appreciating the poem. These are much welcome. Wish you a pleasant day ahead and thoughtful write as usual.
Ibeh Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem with amazing imagery. I loved it, Krishnanand. Well-done!
Guptar Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating my poem and for its placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. Your positive comments have raised my spirits high.Wish you a pleasant day.
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