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Written 22 February 2025

Placed Second in:

Pick-A-Title, Vol 49 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

 

“There’s a special providence in the fall of a sparrow.” Shakespeare in Hamlet ************************************************************** Augury As the shine of the sun sets down In the far away horizon In villages as in the towns And dusk stealthily makes its dawn, The sky awhile pivots to pink While clouds wafted by woeful winds Seem in the firmament to blink Racing across the sky with spleen. Does the pink sky augur a storm, Tempest, typhoon or tornado That may buildings and trees deform Without a tinkle of ado! Does it herald devastation Of fauna and flora on land, Of harvest and cultivation And rocking of boats on the sand! Nature seems to have its own way To admonish human beings To hold their boats firmly at bay And arouse their inner feelings To keep those near and dear to them In safety and security Until the end of the mayhem Heralded by the augury. To scoff inklings of such omens Is to invite spates of worries From the clutches of a demon, Let one`s ship sink in the deep sea, Allow storms to set one`s house flat, Disregard clues from the divine, Let the wild winds whip off one`s hat And snub signals from the sublime.

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Date: 4/1/2025 1:07:00 PM
This is very good writing. I hope you attained a high score in the contest. Belated Congrats for your win
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Date: 3/3/2025 3:45:00 AM
Pay attention! That is what I took away. Nature does send us signals, but we are not always as aware as we should be. We are often distracted. Other times we are overly confident in our ability to 'ride out the coming storms', so we don't make sufficient preparations - tangible and intangible. The results can be catastrophic. Congrats on your winner.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/3/2025 8:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot poetess for visiting my page, sharing some of your thoughts on the above write and appreciating the poem. Wish you a great day.
Date: 3/2/2025 9:18:00 PM
Before something devastating happens, there are premonitions, which we should never ignore. Sometimes they come as omens or warnings from nature or mere intuition. Beautifully written dear Krishnanand. Congratulations on your great win.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/3/2025 7:54:00 AM
Thanks a lot Valsa for visiting my page, sharing some of the thoughts in my write and for appreciating the poem. These are much welcome. Wish you a pleasant day ahead and thoughtful write as usual.
Date: 3/2/2025 12:37:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem with amazing imagery. I loved it, Krishnanand. Well-done!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/3/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating my poem and for its placement in the poetry contest sponsored by you. Your positive comments have raised my spirits high.Wish you a pleasant day.

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