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Premium Member Bittersweet Tumbleweed

I offered up my wings several times
to lift you over the raging ego-licked fires. 
But you chose to be a tumbleweed
in a dusty ghost town called your life...
Everything I've loved, you swept away 
You frolicked in the shadows of my mind
,, and for years that's where you played.

I've placed the wings back where they belong.
Sewed silky notes to a new love song.  
The opaque lifting from my battered heart.
The moment you were gleaned, then gone. 
Gentler things have taken your place.
A deeper dialogue without barbs of judgment.
Lacy hearts rippling with sweet percussion. 

I've spat out the last of your rancid chains.
I can finally breathe without constraint.
From the backwaters of my mind.
I still dream of you from time to time.


Premium Member Marquee

Every night a well-dressed puppet keeps score. 
Of the deaths and casualties of the freshest war.
Some nights the tally is low like a soccer match 
Tonight, it's triple digits for the tin soldier man.
On the scorecard are soldiers, civilians and children.
Never the makers of munitions, or wealthy politicians.

What of the wild beasts and dear family pets
Lying twisted and bloodied in virgin bomb pits.
Forgotten in the backwaters of useless battles.
For them a last meal of shrapnel and ear-piercing rattle.
Their names never honored on the marquee. 
But they should be-they all should be.

Premium Member Lulling Symphonies of My Land

Guarded by towering hills on the East 
And flanked by the Arabian Sea on the West
With its easterly shore of stretching sandy swell 
That lulls the restless waves to sleep, 
There is a land, my land of green vegetation
Nestled among palm trees and paddy fields.

Oh! I am in love with this narrow strip of land
Of rugged hills and meandering rivers
Of placid backwaters and blue skies
Of gibbering monkeys and singing cuckoos

What rich diversity you graciously provide 
A land dotted with temples, churches and mosques
Where Hindus, Christians and Muslims cohabit
Where diversity flows through her arteries
And unity beats through her throbbing heart

Here souls dance to the timeless rhythm of music 
Of diverse genres, vocal and instrumental
Classical and folk, sung either as solo or in groups
With the accompaniment of (2) 'veena',(3) 'tanpura' and violin
Their varying pitches beautifully synchronized!

In the serene dawns and dusky evenings
The atmosphere gets abuzz with the soft strains 
Of (1) ‘Sopana Sangeetham’, the ethnic music of Kerala,
It comes floating from inside the Hindu shrines 
Flooding soul’s enchanted shores, 
And opening the floodgates of piety
 
In healing murmurs and throbbing notes,
As the symphony builds up its circuitous round
It descends down as a stream of blessing 
Drenching devotees in its moistening sweetness
Like the drizzle of dew drops from heaven
Making hearts ride in the palanquin of joy!

May.21.2023

If your Birthplace- Country was a Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Anoucheka Gangabissoon



This poem is about Kerala, a small state in India, which is my birthplace and its geography and culture.

1.Sopana Sangeetham is a form of Indian Classical music, developed in the temples of Kerala. It is sung, sitting by the holy steps leading to the sanctum sanctorum of a shrine. 

2.Veena- a stringed musical instrument, one of the oldest of Indian musical tradition, played sitting cross legged, capable of producing all oscillations of Carnatic music

3. Tanpura- a drone instrument of Indian origin used mainly in a concert of classical music, creating a melodic background, but not a melody.

The Sleeping Arm

As I hold its numb weight
it grows younger,
more delicately knit
to blue somnolent veins.

I am left high and dry
while nerve endings circle
the dilated roots
of severed memories.

A pinched anesthesia;
while arterial threads track back
to things once sensed
on a map of ghost towns.

A slow thaw, and now a delta
seeks a salt water flow
in shallow cold streams.
Blood washes glacial backwaters,
kindles capillaries that carry
a surfacing alluvia.

The arm tugs at my mind like a child.
I flow downstream on a raft
of fine green bones
toward fingertips dipped
in pink shells of fiery snow.

Words of Sea

The words of sea
           although adventurous,
           rapturous, salty ...
           They are also aware how to be sweet
            and homemade ...
           They are fon of waves,
           of huge vacancies
           of adventure...
           But they also perform
           calm, lull,
           at low tide ...
           The words of  sea,
           they are ships, they are caravels ...
           Sands, conches, shells ...
           Abandoned tranquil islands,
           standing water backwaters
           immensity of oceans ...
           The words of sea,
           are towering,
           sailors ... sail
           and sail ...
           Days, months, years,
           don't vanish ...
           Always come back
           to the land ...
           The sea takes them, the sea brings them ...
           The sea leaves them at the edge of the pier ...!


2021 the Year Poets Saved Christmas

The year was 2021 and Christmas was fast approaching,
Fear and uncertainty were seeping into every corner of daily life,
Good will was at an all time low throughout the land,
With Covid spreading faster than the gossip surrounding it,
The people cried out in vain, many going insane, 
Few safe in their own company for than a week.

With those in power throwing in the towel,
The situation was grim indeed,
Is this the end becoming the catch phrase?

Who would have thought that once again poets?,
Would be called upon to save the day,
With style and wit, the pens began scratching,
And keypads started overheating, 
As out of the mist that hung over the many backwaters and  lonely bye-ways, 
Poems filled with the spirit of Christmas past began to appear.

As one after the other poets on the soup took up the call, 
With other forums soon taking up the challenge,
To light another candle of positive thought,
And push back the darkness,
Saving Christmas for another year,
Giving those who threw in their towels,
Or failed to take sound advice,
Another chance to put things right in 2022.

Premium Member Pearl of the Orient

Surrounded by tranquil turquoise waters,
Guarded on sides by oceans three,
In the east by the Pacific,
On the south by the Celebes Sea,
And on the west by the south China Sea, 
There is an archipelago on the blue water crescent,
A group of islands, called Philippines, 
Encircled by a girdle of gleaming silver,
With its shores of stretching sandy swell 
That lulls the restless waves to sleep; 
A land of green vegetation and terraced terrain!

It houses picturesque and breath-taking views.
Vast beaches of ivory sand sprawl before our eyes
Dolphins leap over seafoam, palm fronds wink 
Soft breezes waft and cotton clouds float above.

Anyone will fall in love with these tiny strips of land,
Of rugged hills and meandering rivers
Of placid backwaters and blue skies
Of gibbering monkeys and celestial monarch birds,
Of strutting peacocks, pigeons, pheasants, and parrots.

The powdery white sand of Boracay
The Chocolate Hills of Bohol
The Caraballo Mountain ranges,  
And the Cordillera Mountain chain of Luzon, 
The Rice Terraces of Philippine Cordilleras
All these give the country a solemn investiture. 

Volcanic peaks, standing mighty and tall,
Proudly line the landscape, dotted with dense forests
Where birds sing melodies and Tarsiers with bug eyes
The tiny primates, endemic to the Philippines roam and jump

Amid the slumbering hills, there is fecund soil,
Turned into orchards and plantations,
Its population with perseverance and patience
Work in the soil relentlessly and in unison.
Well known for their hospitality, they receive tourists,
And outsiders with warmth and camaraderie.

In this paradise of mixed fortunes, tragedy comes unforeseen,
In the form of natural calamities like typhoons and cyclones, 
But nothing can tear the people apart and they prosper,
With resilience, bent on sustaining their tradition,
Adding value to it each day and proud of an identity of their own

This beautiful land of velvet waves and crystal sands
Lying as a pendant in a crescent of emerald cluster
Rightly deserves the title- the 'Pearl of the Orient'

When Death Visits

Death is a best friend
she visits often to dissolve old cells
tweak dioxyribonucleic acids   
carrying silver sword and bamboo pipe 
to draw breath, pointing to moon
caped in indigo velvet with hood
her whispers are silent breath on
white pillow 

I invite her to sit on my bed
she admires an octagonal quilt red
removing her cape, accepting offering 
of camomile tea, her eyes smiling hollows  hyena, warrior, eagle, dung beetle
all at once, elegantly slow she settles 
closer, fingering my ears, cold breezes 
ripple down my legs 

With sidelong glance she asks : 
“So what is your claim to fame ?”
I reply : “I know not a name. Fame is 
a shadowy flame, an orange-purple 
one flickering to become lame. 
All the same, I claim to be the highest 
version of what Source intended 
nothing more, nothing less. 
This is free fame, oxygenated.
That is my game, if insane, let it not 
be a shame, or a blame.”
Smiling, she asks next : “How have 
you helped fellow humans ?”  

I reply : “With Pluto Sun squared as 
a dominant in my Chart, I undertook to 
integrate escaping gloom into Light for 
Self and others. As God granted Ketu 
long periods of rulership over my form 
I pulped Self in backwaters, where 
angels fear to tread, to be a Presence 
for fellow humans.” 

Her hollow eyes with high cheekbones 
move closer to my face. Sipping from floral teacup, fingers spindly, she asks : 
“How erect will your spine be before 
THE ALL ?”
I reply : “Not as erect as when I practiced kundalini and hatha yoga, though I detect 
zero regrets, bereft of debts, slate clean 
as an uncooked bean.”

Laughing, she replies that Divinity 
will be pleased with my use of poetics
whispering : “Know that your spine will 
revert to 21 years when I draw your 
breath into mine, to gently carry to 
Divine. You will sway on your way
into a ringlet bay of rosy everlasting days. 
17 more good cheer years, hear my Dear.”

I watch quick footsteps across the 
garden path. A thoughtform follows 
slender caped back : “My claim to fame
is to be what HE-SHE desires me to be  
~ Co-Creator of my own destiny.”

Next time Death visits, I will word it this way.

__________________

*[new form: L&N : Letters and Numbers]
Form: Other

Through the Backwaters

Boated through the tantalizing Kerala backwater
                      in a pleasant summer morning;
                      Coconut groves were adorning
              our way and perky fishes were chased by river otters

                 Cacophony of the swaying lofty coconut trees 
                        and the nearby evergreen plants
                        produced a mesmerizing chant
              that certainly consoled the chaotic minds and appease

               Majestic banyan tree with its spiraled pillar branches
                         enthralled the endemic birds
                       and the migrating animal herds
               on the river bank, renovated the place into the ranch

              Suddenly the boat entered into the hollow way
                    where tangled trees made archways,
                    and fallen flowers filled our pathways
               welcomed us, it was such an unforgettable day

              Reflections of the slender palm trees on the waters,
                       painted a flawless picturesque picture
                    with the kaleidoscope of colors and mixtures
            Which was untapped only in the perpetual back waters

                Coots and cormorants swiftly plunged into water
                      When they heard the sound of the boat 
                   Tranquility of the place calmed the hysteria  
                and it led to the apocalypse of worldly emotions

Sep-9-2017


POTD on Sep 11 2017

I was so happy and I felt so blessed as I received this honour on the death anniversary of my favorite poet Mahakavi Bharathiyar.

Premium Member The Devil's Conch

The lip of childhood was bloodied.
When the CSX ran over my puppy.
For years I fired rocks at the metal devil.
Trains were supposed to be a boy's second-best friend.
Not a killer of soft things that wag their tails.
Lick your face when you come in from hell. 
Sweet things that never have an off mood.
Or care that you're a slow learner.
Tossed to the backwaters of grade school.
Childhood was cut in half by CSX railroad.

Why couldn't the train have swerved and struck 
that pervert 5th grade teacher instead.
Then again, trains don't swerve or lick your face.
They just plow straight into the pillow of childhood.
Then blast the devil's conch in manic celebration.

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