When Death Visits

Death is a best friend
she visits often to dissolve old cells
tweak dioxyribonucleic acids   
carrying silver sword and bamboo pipe 
to draw breath, pointing to moon
caped in indigo velvet with hood
her whispers are silent breath on
white pillow 

I invite her to sit on my bed
she admires an octagonal quilt red
removing her cape, accepting offering 
of camomile tea, her eyes smiling hollows  hyena, warrior, eagle, dung beetle
all at once, elegantly slow she settles 
closer, fingering my ears, cold breezes 
ripple down my legs 

With sidelong glance she asks : 
“So what is your claim to fame ?”
I reply : “I know not a name. Fame is 
a shadowy flame, an orange-purple 
one flickering to become lame. 
All the same, I claim to be the highest 
version of what Source intended 
nothing more, nothing less. 
This is free fame, oxygenated.
That is my game, if insane, let it not 
be a shame, or a blame.”
Smiling, she asks next : “How have 
you helped fellow humans ?”  

I reply : “With Pluto Sun squared as 
a dominant in my Chart, I undertook to 
integrate escaping gloom into Light for 
Self and others. As God granted Ketu 
long periods of rulership over my form 
I pulped Self in backwaters, where 
angels fear to tread, to be a Presence 
for fellow humans.” 

Her hollow eyes with high cheekbones 
move closer to my face. Sipping from floral teacup, fingers spindly, she asks : 
“How erect will your spine be before 
THE ALL ?”
I reply : “Not as erect as when I practiced kundalini and hatha yoga, though I detect 
zero regrets, bereft of debts, slate clean 
as an uncooked bean.”

Laughing, she replies that Divinity 
will be pleased with my use of poetics
whispering : “Know that your spine will 
revert to 21 years when I draw your 
breath into mine, to gently carry to 
Divine. You will sway on your way
into a ringlet bay of rosy everlasting days. 
17 more good cheer years, hear my Dear.”

I watch quick footsteps across the 
garden path. A thoughtform follows 
slender caped back : “My claim to fame
is to be what HE-SHE desires me to be  
~ Co-Creator of my own destiny.”

Next time Death visits, I will word it this way.

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Hind Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 7:05 PM
Whoah, Ghairo- this is a breath of fresh air....I am Christian, but believe in the God consciousness.... beyond wise, hun....you seem so accepting of everything. <3 I remember you wrote of imprisonment in your country some time ago. So much you have grown and forgiven, beautiful.
Daniels Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 7:24 PM
ThkU for your precious time, PH. Growth is our purpose. Love y’a. X.
DiMino Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 4:43 AM
"With Pluto Sun squared as a dominant in my Chart, I undertook to integrate escaping gloom into Light for Self and others." -- Perfect! Beautiful. “My claim to fame is to be what HE-SHE desires me to be ~ Co-Creator of my own destiny.” -- Most will truly not understand this, that we are co-creators. People cannot comprehend the concept, how one can be totally free, and yet predestined at the same time. One with omnipresence, yet an unknowing child. You get a FAV. Great poetry!
Daniels Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Aah WoW, Joe. THANKYOU so much for fav. I’m happy that at least one person understood. If so, it was worth the write. B blessed 4 read & comment. x.
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