Through the Backwaters

Boated through the tantalizing Kerala backwater
                      in a pleasant summer morning;
                      Coconut groves were adorning
              our way and perky fishes were chased by river otters

                 Cacophony of the swaying lofty coconut trees 
                        and the nearby evergreen plants
                        produced a mesmerizing chant
              that certainly consoled the chaotic minds and appease

               Majestic banyan tree with its spiraled pillar branches
                         enthralled the endemic birds
                       and the migrating animal herds
               on the river bank, renovated the place into the ranch

              Suddenly the boat entered into the hollow way
                    where tangled trees made archways,
                    and fallen flowers filled our pathways
               welcomed us, it was such an unforgettable day

              Reflections of the slender palm trees on the waters,
                       painted a flawless picturesque picture
                    with the kaleidoscope of colors and mixtures
            Which was untapped only in the perpetual back waters

                Coots and cormorants swiftly plunged into water
                      When they heard the sound of the boat 
                   Tranquility of the place calmed the hysteria  
                and it led to the apocalypse of worldly emotions

Sep-9-2017


POTD on Sep 11 2017

I was so happy and I felt so blessed as I received this honour on the death anniversary of my favorite poet Mahakavi Bharathiyar.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 5:49 AM
This is so beautiful I am putting it into my faves Supraja. India is indeed beautiful with its stunning scenery. Congratulations on your deserving win my friend. xxoo
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April 25, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:41 PM
One can never go wrong describing nature from a boat. Very descriptive and most enjoyable read, Supraja.
La France Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Supraja,CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Lovely writing Supraja, congrats on a fine win!
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Lovely poem..congrats on your POTD!
Kannan Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:09 AM
What natural beauty you've brought to life Supraja, lovely and congratulations for POTD honors...
Kannan Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much Charlie... Glad you liked it...
Mhangwa Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Nice imagery in your poem! Congratulations!
Kannan Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Wanter Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Where is this place - I want to go there! Congratulations!
Kannan Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:12 AM
It's in Kerala, India... Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Warrior Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Beautiful verse my friend...Congrats!!! 0n POTD, Supraja...god bless...^WW^
Kannan Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Thank you so much, WW...
Krampe Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Wow , that's a beautiful take on the eight word challenge. Reads like a winner to me. Congrats on POTD.
Kannan Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much, Agnes...
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:49 AM
- Wonderful poem, Supraja :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:08 AM
POTD? OMG... This is unbelievable Anne... I am so happy... No words to explain my happiness...
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 8:23 PM
You painted a very lovely picture, Supraja. Many nice descriptive details went into this gem!
Kannan Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... Glad to hear from you...
Sands Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 8:26 AM
What a beautifully written poem. I enjoyed it very much as you took us through this amazing journey! :)
Kannan Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you so much Heidi... So glad you enjoyed it...
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