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Through the Backwaters

Boated through the tantalizing Kerala backwater in a pleasant summer morning; Coconut groves were adorning our way and perky fishes were chased by river otters Cacophony of the swaying lofty coconut trees and the nearby evergreen plants produced a mesmerizing chant that certainly consoled the chaotic minds and appease Majestic banyan tree with its spiraled pillar branches enthralled the endemic birds and the migrating animal herds on the river bank, renovated the place into the ranch Suddenly the boat entered into the hollow way where tangled trees made archways, and fallen flowers filled our pathways welcomed us, it was such an unforgettable day Reflections of the slender palm trees on the waters, painted a flawless picturesque picture with the kaleidoscope of colors and mixtures Which was untapped only in the perpetual back waters Coots and cormorants swiftly plunged into water When they heard the sound of the boat Tranquility of the place calmed the hysteria and it led to the apocalypse of worldly emotions Sep-9-2017 POTD on Sep 11 2017 I was so happy and I felt so blessed as I received this honour on the death anniversary of my favorite poet Mahakavi Bharathiyar.

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Date: 4/28/2019 5:49:00 AM
This is so beautiful I am putting it into my faves Supraja. India is indeed beautiful with its stunning scenery. Congratulations on your deserving win my friend. xxoo
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/3/2017 6:41:00 PM
One can never go wrong describing nature from a boat. Very descriptive and most enjoyable read, Supraja.
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:47:00 PM
Supraja,CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:03:00 PM
Lovely writing Supraja, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:24:00 AM
Lovely poem..congrats on your POTD!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/13/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Date: 9/11/2017 11:09:00 AM
What natural beauty you've brought to life Supraja, lovely and congratulations for POTD honors...
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/13/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie... Glad you liked it...
Date: 9/11/2017 10:35:00 AM
Nice imagery in your poem! Congratulations!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/13/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Date: 9/11/2017 10:04:00 AM
Where is this place - I want to go there! Congratulations!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/13/2017 8:12:00 AM
It's in Kerala, India... Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Date: 9/11/2017 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful verse my friend...Congrats!!! 0n POTD, Supraja...god bless...^WW^
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/11/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, WW...
Date: 9/11/2017 7:03:00 AM
Wow , that's a beautiful take on the eight word challenge. Reads like a winner to me. Congrats on POTD.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/11/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Agnes...
Date: 9/11/2017 6:49:00 AM
- Wonderful poem, Supraja :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/11/2017 8:08:00 AM
POTD? OMG... This is unbelievable Anne... I am so happy... No words to explain my happiness...
Date: 9/10/2017 8:23:00 PM
You painted a very lovely picture, Supraja. Many nice descriptive details went into this gem!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/10/2017 11:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... Glad to hear from you...
Date: 9/9/2017 8:26:00 AM
What a beautifully written poem. I enjoyed it very much as you took us through this amazing journey! :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/10/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi... So glad you enjoyed it...

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