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Premium MemberEldest Daughter Tells All

My mom, she, when I was just three,
Would binge operas of soaps, and she

Tethered to the television, after her sail
Home from Pearl Harbor, would not fail

To hug and kiss our butterfly eyes and cheeks.
She’d store mama’s milk in freeze for weeks.

As we’d march off to church crammed in car,
Mom saw her binge as a sin and went as far

As to stop watching all three, especially as
We’d call them Mama’s Soaps. Her new jazz

Is God and the bible, and her church friends.
Some have kids our age. On weekends

We’d go to explore the beach, but then
We all moved and Mama said Amen.

My brother, once said, Mom, you’re not old enough to
knit and crochet. She said, Then how do we learn to?

Rolling eyes…as at some point, she
Started writing, took up poetry.

Those rolling eyes and whys, recorded for posterity,
She reads to us one, two, three - her peculiarity.
Categories: eldest, daughter, mother daughter,
Form: Bio

Eldest Daughter

Eldest daughter cries a lot
Tries to hide the pain
But gets betrayed by her eyes
Pain reflected by palms
Blood running by her own wounds
Wounds she never hopes to treat
Neither anyone intends to...

She craves for a good sleep
Laying her head on her mother’s lap
Forgetting about her past and
dropping all her future worries
She just want to have a good sleep

She  wants to be cared
Wants to be prioritised
Wants to be listened
Wants to be loved
Loved unconditionally..
Categories: eldest, child, daughter, depression, grief,
Form: Free verse


As the Eldest

I am the eldest, the pioneer,
The first in the line,
Every move I make is watched,
Every choice judged in time.

The trail ahead is un-traveled,
No footsteps yet in the sand,
I blaze the trail for those behind,
Without holding a parents hand.

The weight of the expectations,
The pressure to excel,
To set an example so perfect,
To follow every rule.

My siblings march behind me,
With almost no burdens to bear,
While I struggle under the weight,
Of being the eldest heir.

But though the path is harder,
The journey all my own,
I walk it with perseverance,
And wisdom I have grown.

For though I lead the way alone,
They follow in my tread,
The trail I've paved for them to walk,
The lessons that I have led.

So I walk on with purpose,
My footsteps leaving trace,
For those who come behind me,
I clear the trail with grace.
Categories: eldest, life, parents,
Form: Rhyme

Eldest One

First time forever,
laying on my bed.
Is me and my eldest,
saying things we've never said.

So demanding in her ways,
she thinks she's getting heard.
But to me in my eyes,
shes just being a little turd.

I love her so deeply,
tried with all my heart.
to bring her up good.
and make sure were not apart.

so much to say,
to go against my words.
as i said in the second verse.
she's just a little turd.

17/05/2016
Categories: eldest, anger, baby, beautiful, beauty,
Form: ABC

To My Eldest

Joshua Louis Pokorny Sullivan

Joshua was a beautiful soul
always soaring about

He brought love, laughter to everyone
even those who knew him not

Joshua was a beautiful soul
always expressing himself through art

He brought beauty, color, and humor
to everything he crossed

Joshua was a beautiful soul
always kind, compassionate, and strong

He tried to keep going and going
obstacles all along

Joshua was a beautiful soul
always funny, comforting, and smart

He knew just what to say and do
to make him be apart of you

Joshua was a beautiful soul
a wounded bird that no one could catch

He wanted to live in a life of ease
feeling no pain or disease

Joshua was a beautiful soul
no more problems to attend

He lives in Heaven now
like the Rose of Sharon

Joshua was a beautiful soul
the only rose in a field of trees.

He will always be loved
and never forgotten

Joshua IS a beautiful soul.........

Holly Moore, and my son, Jonathan Sullivan
July 2012
Categories: eldest, dedication, funeral, beautiful, beautiful,
Form: Free verse


Her Eldest Daughter

Methinks thou mayst receive mine words as false;
Her eldest daughter at a stew-house tups.
Come hither, pray - and see with thine own eyes 
We lusty knaves surround that saucy wench
To make the two backed beast.

For Lisa’s Old English Scandal contest
Categories: eldest, work,
Form: Blank verse
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