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Who can truly tell all? It is all in time and perspective. I am sure that I’ve forgotten the important things, but who cares, because life is an adventure even when we are in the valley. This bio from my daughter’s perspective is for the bio contest. These are the facts and fiction of my imagination from her.

Eldest Daughter Tells All

My mom, she, when I was just three,
Would binge operas of soaps, and she

Tethered to the television, after her sail
Home from Pearl Harbor, would not fail

To hug and kiss our butterfly eyes and cheeks.
She’d store mama’s milk in freeze for weeks.

As we’d march off to church crammed in car,
Mom saw her binge as a sin and went as far

As to stop watching all three, especially as
We’d call them Mama’s Soaps. Her new jazz

Is God and the bible, and her church friends.
Some have kids our age. On weekends

We’d go to explore the beach, but then
We all moved and Mama said Amen.

My brother, once said, Mom, you’re not old enough to
knit and crochet. She said, Then how do we learn to?

Rolling eyes…as at some point, she
Started writing, took up poetry.

Those rolling eyes and whys, recorded for posterity,
She reads to us one, two, three - her peculiarity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Williams Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 12:34 PM
My brother, once said, Mom, you’re not old enough to knit and crochet. She said, Then how do we learn to? Beautiful poetry, congratulations on your contest placement :) All the best , Julianne xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Julianne! Hugs
Crandall Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Hi Kim. It's nice to read about a family, a mom's version of a daughter's version of a mom, with a brother thrown in.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 8:09 AM
LOL! Love how you see things! And if you read even deeper, the end shows the 3rd…also indicated with the milk in the freeze. And of course the count is reading more than one, but now I’ll stop interpreting my own poem ;)
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:34 AM
- A mother with a heart of gold .... who always hugged and kissed their butterfly eyes and cheeks ... lovely poem, with a smile :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Turner Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Dont feel too bad Kim. I get the rolling eye treatment here as well. Great to read you again. Happy Thanksgiving!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:11 AM
We are loved somewhere within the rolling eyeball. Our kids have aha moment when they give birth to a new set of rolling eyeballs and that is why the aged have a glint in their eyes and a smile on the lips…lol!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 10:35 AM
You write like a beautiful butterfly, flitting from one idea to another. You're a wonderful poet.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:12 AM
That is the kindest thing you have said and you have been so sweet! Hugs ~ Kim
Read Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Enjoyed reading your thoughts Kim, all the best in the contest. xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, John! Mom and her soaps…not to imply that one is bad for watching but I was addicted…lol.
Messina Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:55 AM
I love this, Kim. A great take on the contest. Best wishes... :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 10:43 PM
Your kids don't miss a trick Kim, they remember everything. It's often said, be nice to your kids because they get to choose your care home, yikes Tom
Hind Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Oh, love it, like I love all your poems! The flow was fun and creative - <3 Love and hugs!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:49 PM
You are always so kind. Thank you, Paige!
Rolland Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:17 PM
moms are the wisest persons in the world, this is a touching and subtle poem, good luck for the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, Yann! :)
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 3:01 PM
The 3rd and 4th couplets are so revealing and my favorites! Love the rhymes and best wishes for the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 5:14 PM
Thank you for telling me what you liked! Hugs ~ Kim
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