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5 Doubtful Decision

5.

Doubtful Decision



Marut, the businessman, wants to go vacation

He now ponders what place in or out his nation

Buys the ticket but decides not to go

Thinks more money to spend if do so

Hour before flight is in doubtful decision.



-01/01/2007

(Dumarao)

*Topsy-Turvy Limerick Ironic

Premium Member Ginanderra

Grey specked sheet of sand
Beckons feeble ripples
Afternoon sun enters the argument
Highlighting their warm source

Here the connection is made.
We comprehend the elements
In their scenic combination
Fitting nicely in the field of vision

Except that ragged outer frame
Faded patchwork of dry gumtrees.
So I sense the crunchy chaos
Through my sips of Barley Griffin.

Comforted by peaceful lakes,
Disturbed by discontented swans,
Sunset glides with chilly touches.
Little to be trusted here

Premium Member Less Doubtful Now

Mommy and Daddy did not believe he was magic
So he used his powers, and began to fly
They were less doubtful now


Doubtful Display

Match so naughty of self calamity, 
Alternates modernized tactics of play 
Neglecting physical aggression. 

Countless clearcut chances,  
Impulsively lost to anxiety. 
Trying the best possible to weigh
Yoke propelled by GARCIA in depression.

Doubtful

I'm so doubtful right now 
So the fort has to stay up
I do see your heart though 
It does radiate love 
Or so it seems at times
I hear your point very well 
You mean every word you say
as far as I can tell anyway 
It's just that stench 
that I can't abide
This reeks of deceit 
I'm doubtful of your intent
It's also bitter to taste 
rather hard to swallow 
feels a little bit
contrived too, I'm afraid 
All these red flags 
glaring at me 
Got alarm bells 
blaring in my head 
I'd be an utter tool to 
ignore them
My mind wants none of it 
if I were to be honest with you 
And my heart sends you love 
though from a safe distance 
I do appreciate 
the effort you made 
But I doubt any good 
will come out of this

Doubtful In Love

Again tonight reality taunts me 
I am too timid to entertain my fears
That unspoken and uncertain feeling 
Concealed deeply yet nurtured by years

A picture of acceptance have I slowly painted
With placid smiles on skeptical eyes
A pact with doubt I remain acquainted
For promises could be true or truthful lies

Have I lived for love or it lived for me?
I waver between imagination and fact
Often what ought  may never be
Am I truly loved or playing an act?


Doubtful

Open Arms...  
the words you give to someone, just may be the strength of reflection needed and neither of you even know it....
             Unknown territory

Doubtful

This rock
Inside this cage of claws
Pumping red poison
Everywhere in me
Was it a wrong word
You spoke

Your I AM is doubtful 
When I am an error

Premium Member The Yin and Yang of Doubtful Bay

A subtle march hush saddles the valley
whilst dawn’s reveille is the seagulls call
staid water’s brim against ancient galley
once flew the ensign how the mighty fall.
For here she lie ‘o’ top of salty graves
where wretched souls ne’er see another day
their silver horizon the restless waves
that howls the sirens song of doubtful bay.
Long gone the storm the cries of emotion
of those whom hankered for a better life
yet still the tempest doth rule the ocean
to take at will the rights of man and wife.
Gone the prisoners of her majesty
damned to the colonies over the sea
the bay holds no bars grants them amnesty
their spirits to roam the ocean floor free.
There’s no one left to wail or shed a tear
to pen a shanty of that tragic hour
nor weave a poem of hysterical fear
build a monolith a marble tower.

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Journey of Doubtful Indulgence

putrid rascal was a real truant
and also a junkie
and a somnambulist too
and wicked gourmet bought a new guillotine

then the rascal walked dizzily 
like a mechanic dancer
around the cinnamon circle
right under the scythe
and underwent a severance

the staggering truth was quite vague

then a postwar prelude under the lurid sky
piccolo semitone
sacrament
orchids
silhouettes on a merry-go-round

the jetty broke up
and a castaway went away
right before dawning
beforethe  stellar equinox
but journey was a humdrum
with nautical nausea
just a medley of flukes

so we hit the road
on the roof of a magic bus
not just figurative
really peculiar
and finally let behind
all the cold sensations

a marble queen visits
with a priest with no faith
and start gentle mutiny

the celestial journey
is over at ten p.m.
and all we got left
is a sobering lethargy

Doubtful

"Oh, woe is me", she cries again.
Not caring of the carnage left behind.
The utter destruction she so kindly bequeathed  her loved ones.

Selfish, self absorbed, oblivious
That is she.
Selfless, giving, forgiving, patient;
There lies the rest of the world.

Everywhere she went,
Like a shattered glass, peices lay everywhere; shiney and jagged 
Carefully, the ones around her dilegently tip toe around the remains; broken, sharp.
Ever so careful
Ever so fearful 
Ever so doubtful
Doubtful that she would ever change.

''Doubtful Me''

~An odd sigh...
~Face to face silence....
~Heed these warning stares....
~Heart taken in dire straits.....
~Across the table, sits the sinking soul mates........

Doubly Doubtful

If I hold one mirror to another,
how many times will it double my image
before I get sick
and decide to end everything?
My guess is enough times to carry me
well into my late 30's;
if I keep it up that long,
you better believe I'll be ringing doorbells
and asking for a reward.
No man should be made to live a life
that he himself would trade away in a heartbeat
for a new set of mirrors
and a hammer.

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