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''Doubtful Me''

~An odd sigh... ~Face to face silence.... ~Heed these warning stares.... ~Heart taken in dire straits..... ~Across the table, sits the sinking soul mates........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 12:42:00 PM
save him mate,don't let the ship sink.nice write Kacey
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
Wow...talk about a shift in relationships...You described a strong scene here..If personal, please don't stress over the small stuff...You are too young yet! (Experience talkin')...Best to u and have a killerific weekend, Kacie! gwendolen
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Date: 6/10/2012 12:33:00 PM
Interesting work..Sad that the soul mates become silent and sinking..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:36:00 PM
were living in the moment.
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