''Doubtful Me''

~An odd sigh...
~Face to face silence....
~Heed these warning stares....
~Heart taken in dire straits.....
~Across the table, sits the sinking soul mates........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 12:42 PM
save him mate,don't let the ship sink.nice write Kacey
Song Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Wow...talk about a shift in relationships...You described a strong scene here..If personal, please don't stress over the small stuff...You are too young yet! (Experience talkin')...Best to u and have a killerific weekend, Kacie! gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Interesting work..Sad that the soul mates become silent and sinking..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Situation Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 7:36 PM
were living in the moment.
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