Dismissal Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Early Dismissal

  
     Learn from the past whether or not you were there

         Of those who dismiss it ~ beware

Premium Member Paradoxes-dismissal and resonance

Paradoxes

Are stories with

 Responses of

Disbelief..or a 

Certain immediate

And quiet resonance

Which cannot be 

Explained..

Nevertheless...

Premium Member 22-November-63: An Early Class Dismissal

Alone I enter my dim empty house and mourn our slain president

Monoku
Written 2/15/22


Dismissal

We stand outside, in heat or cold 
And one by one, each class
Is marched outside to reunite
With we who wait, en masse.

The teachers watch to match each child 
With parent, sitter or
A nana or a grandpa
Huddled near the exit door.

The children run to give a hug
To those who stand and wait,
The teachers glad their obligations 
They can abdicate.

Sad Dismissal of Secularists

Yesterday, on the 20th of March 2016 on the BBC,
On The Andrew Marr Show about politics weekly,
I did see Ian Duncan-Smith, government member,
Say something that upset me, I do remember.

“I am not morality, I leave that to church men.” 
But can't anyone decide what makes you a christian?
I understand evolution, and that gives me values, 
Sets standards and boundaries for thanks and dues.

Premium Member Death's Dismissal

Death’s Dismissal


I have seen death
masquerading in its many faces,
the fear of those holding numbers,
the agony of those not.  Stared into
the dimly fading headlights of the
passing vehicle, slowing as the vision
dimmed, the agony increased.

I have seen death
take the unsuspecting in an instant,
snatch the breath of youth, impose its
ugliness upon an empty future,
string barbed wire upon memory.

I have watched death
peering cowardly from non-existent
shadows, haunting our moments without
care, stealing, in hurtful bits and pieces,
the warmth of life’s slowing breath.

I have touched death
in weakness and denial of my life,
pleaded for release without conviction,
felt the loneliness and terror of submission,
saw the saddened eyes of death’s dismissal,
heard a number called, not mine, but death’s.


John G. Lawless

submitted to Death Shadow – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Justin Bordner


Premium Member Dismissal

Where do you come from, vacant-eyed
hag, and where do you go from here?
Witching your way from border to bay,
who will your mumbling hear?

The babe in the bower is safe for an hour
while you intone your hideous cries;
the man in the wood not even you could
harm with your malevolent eyes.

Scat! with the brat who accompanies that
noise which you wail with spoon on pail.
Sail 'cross the sky on your broom or fly
down the chimney of some dungeon dimly
lit by the flare of gaseous air.

We'll not heed your pitiful creed
nor miss your darkening frown.
Go, Despair! Get out of town!

A Dismissal of the Soul

Ah, Inhale life
onto the paper I shall write
Be it dark or be it light 
while the inner fire’s burning;
now the wheels shall be turning

It feels just right
It flows so freely
out of the depths of me 

This ambitious attraction 
to cascade and spill, 
and all the lonely hours it does fill 

For this reclusive writer 
Chooses to live within her mind 
there she shall be for hours at a time

And time passes so promptly and measured
moments have ended 
For that, that is treasured 
  

I will idolize my tranquility 
And bleed out my reflections
In hopes I may be reconnected

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