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I May Die

The image of demise refined,
Thus, my body was confined 
So dismal, doleful and discomfited 
Although the wicked wish went awry
But, I still weighed 'I may die'.

Suddenly, I saw my soul stalled;
After a short time, it questioned,
"Are you aghast of death?"
This question remained on my eye,
As my tears said 'I may die'.

For whether we live,
We live unto the Lord;
And whether we relive,
We relive unto the Lord
We live or die, we are the Lord. 

With this,
Confidence reported like
There is nothing worse than death
Death is assured;
Thus, we must feel 'I may die'.

You run after riches,
On the floor of the fallen men;
Remember you shall die like men,
And fall like one of the princes
What'll be your gain if you die?

Your father,
Where is he?
Does your prophet live forever?
With your power, the world is slave 
Don't you think 'if I die?'

As it was,
The body will devolve by the earth 
Whatever you call yourself;
Always remember,
'I may die'.

by Akinloye Gbajero S. (c. June 5, 2023).
(ref. Romans, 14:8, Psalms, 82:7, Zechariah, 1:5, Ecclesiastes 12:7).

Premium Member The Spider Or the Fly

Whom does God favor in the web?
The spider, or the fly?
My ponderance does flow and ebb
deciding which deserves to die.

Love has taught us we must respect
every living thing.
So which does His great love effect,
is discomfited under His wing?

The splendid fly with fine gauze wings,
human benefactor
cleaning dead, decomposing things,
acting as refuse collector.

Elegant spider, skilled weaver
having eight legs only,
tireless in his just endeavor,
bearing the industry solely.

So, once again I ask the question:
Whom does God favor in the web?
I don’t know, is my confession.
My ponderance does flow and ebb.

Aquamarine

In aquamarine ran off my warmth traversing 
mild meadows with swallows of ash 
past the pink sunset 

Three cherry cardinals swooped past partly pleased 
the brook trickled near 

Evading were than icon imaginings 
the following fawns 
the spotted taupe-hazel fawn 

Three taupe robins at a white well 
The magic cello hummed earlier 

Sword at side passed over my warmth 
through the falling cascades 
off on the pink sunset 

Three cherry cardinals swooped past partly pleased 
The level prairie sat below 

Supple were they sandaled sand 
The sheer slim fawns 
The discomfited shuffled fawns 

Three graceless mothers in the green dell 
The ravenous barb earlier crooned 

Curtsy at waist my warmth traversing 
Casing the waterfall behind 
Off in the pink sunset 

Three cherry cardinals swooped past partly pleased 
The vertical crests sat above 

Brighter be they than tranquil birth 
The sheer slim fawns 
The taller edgy fawns 

Three higher vicars at the mild meadow 
The adept huntsman 
Ran below 

In aquamarine ran off my warmth traversing 
mild meadows with swallows of ash 
past the pink sunset 

Three cherry cardinals


Premium Member Tears

When I wake up in the morning
I want new responses from me
Just like the mule climbing up-mountain
My perception grinds to a churn

Inside the mask I have learned to jump through hoops
Those hoops are my successive and continual gates of learning

(If you will
When you can)

Though my eyes fill with tears tonight
Like the spring I had prayed for

The need to allow sadness to be and not 
Drugged or shrugged by the discomfited few

To be alone in the darkness and give power and full reign to your sorrow
This is real and healing freedom

Like the cousin lurking in the shadows of your favorite room
Smiling and waiting for you

The only one that believes in your magic
The only one holding a candle

Betting Against My Heart

Once again, you’re putting out your blinds
It’s this wicked game you play at minds 
With the chiseled pot concealed,
My heart’s cards are now revealed.

I’m getting broken down again.
You’ve locked me up into this stain,
And as I try to raise heart’s chase
You lay there still, poker faced.

You force me into this blinding bet
Where no one is allowed to check,
Still you show me all your faces
As your wretched cards take their places.

‘Guess I have to get a grip,
Your words are dealing against my lip.
For they’re begging me to call
And see if I’ve lost my heart at all.

I’m no longer your full (fool) of hearts,
Letting you invade my private parts.
I’ve beseeched for long enough
For you to fall from your discomfited bluff.

You stand as an immortal Ace,
Wounded through my composed face.
Though I never knew it could,
My heart is now lost for good. 


© 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila

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