Betting Against My Heart

Once again, you’re putting out your blinds
It’s this wicked game you play at minds 
With the chiseled pot concealed,
My heart’s cards are now revealed.

I’m getting broken down again.
You’ve locked me up into this stain,
And as I try to raise heart’s chase
You lay there still, poker faced.

You force me into this blinding bet
Where no one is allowed to check,
Still you show me all your faces
As your wretched cards take their places.

‘Guess I have to get a grip,
Your words are dealing against my lip.
For they’re begging me to call
And see if I’ve lost my heart at all.

I’m no longer your full (fool) of hearts,
Letting you invade my private parts.
I’ve beseeched for long enough
For you to fall from your discomfited bluff.

You stand as an immortal Ace,
Wounded through my composed face.
Though I never knew it could,
My heart is now lost for good. 


© 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 6, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your amazing poem making the semi finals. Good luck in finals! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 26, 2009 at 3:54 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 12:22 PM
unique love verse full of unrequited love. I never got to say welcome to the Soup!
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July 14, 2009 at 5:36 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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July 9, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Stefania, congrats on your feature...Raul
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July 8, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Nice blending of the idea with lost love for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 6, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, well deserved Stephanie>>James
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July 6, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Stefania. May you have many many more. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2009 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations on this nice and deserving poem being featured this week. Welcome to the Soupland. Ernilando
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June 21, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Great analogy here, Stefania and play (!) on cards ... don't think I've seen anything like this before on the Soup. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week and Welcome to PoetrySoup !!
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June 21, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Congrats for being featured!
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June 19, 2009 at 4:37 PM
"Soup Mail Gifted Lady!" ~
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June 15, 2009 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations Stefania on the featuring of "Betting Against My Heart." Vince
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June 15, 2009 at 8:18 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Stefania. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 7:09 PM
Stefania - I once felt the same way for many of years - Then I met met my wife - hopefully you shall become as blessed - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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June 9, 2009 at 7:20 AM
i hope that things are looking up since you wrote this. You are now the first poet ever to go into my favourite poets. cant wait to get a chance to catch up on the other poems you have put on here.
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May 18, 2009 at 2:05 PM
I like your expressiveness in the poem. The rhyming pattern also tells a story. Things are always changing; nothing is permanent. I like the essence of the piece. Great job! ~Joseph
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May 11, 2009 at 10:59 AM
This is AMAZING! I love it for sure. Congrats on this piece of art. One for the favs =) ~Jese
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May 10, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Nicely written Stefania! Welcome to the soup! - jeremiah
Fraser Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 9:39 AM
A lovely written poem Stefania, James.
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May 8, 2009 at 5:15 AM
This rhyme poem is full of sentiment and your pain shows through. That is good writing. I hope things work out for your happiness, whereever God leads. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
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May 7, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Pretty words flow...ryhming with sound. This is a piece of poem cherished. Nice and not cluttered. I wish you all the best.
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May 7, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Nice.
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