Commendably Poems


Football Distraction

Magically, the usually late
Is in front of their school’s gate
Ready to a gentle push give it
Or open fling it.

Now, he is commendably trim,
The hand of the lord strongly upon him,
Miraculously, he tries strides  with his blistered pair,
For many weeks the torment of football games not fair.

Soon, he does a linear to their classroom block,
Where he must a shoddily done homework rework
And with that elude his short-listing
For the cleaning and whitening
Of their schools toilet/bowl
Always looking worse than a dying- minute conceded goal.

But lo! In their classroom stared back at him a shape
That did make his pursed lips gape.
Jesus ! A sadly lost and now found football
Of near FIFA quality and leather...
When last fortune had smiled on him he couldn’t recall
Nor when last he did fondle a cap with a stuck feather.

This, though, now not much of the matter,
As his recuperating feet are about to face the real matter.
In the end, a homework to be speedily reworked
Does with a bit of waiting to be once again worked
And its correctness checked
For solutions that may ‘ve been faked.
Categories: commendably, adventure, beautiful, career, character,
Form: Rhyme

You Are Commendably Beautiful




You are commendably beautiful,
If beauty were time, you'd be eternity,
Your seductive smile is a problem for solution.
A twinkle that can only be shown in your eyes,
The sparkle in your beautiful eyes,
provides the object of endless commentary.
It burns like blazing fire,
Just as I have loved you like a moth to a flame.
I came once looking for your soul,
Now captured by tormented dreams,
Believing I'm climbing higher,
Intensity enfeeble me
When you speak my name in ecstasy.
Whispering ancient songs unsung,
With the rhythm of my rhyme.
Rapture fills the air
When I see you standing there.
I never want it to end
A warmth exuding as your own private fountain.
It feels so good the way it takes over and over again.
Categories: commendably, love, romance,
Form: Free verse


You Are Commendably Beautiful


You are commendably beautiful,
If beauty were time, you'd be eternity,
Your seductive smile is a problem for solution.
A twinkle that can only be shown in your eyes,
The sparkle in your beautiful eyes,
provides the object of endless commentary.
It burns like blazing fire,
Just as I have loved you like a moth to a flam.
I came once looking for your soul,
Now captured by tormented dreams,
Believing I'm climbing higher,
Intensity enfeeble me
When you speak my name in ecstasy.
Whispering ancient songs unsung,
With the rhythm of my rhyme.
Rapture fills the air
When I see you standing there.
I never want it to end
A warmth exuding as your own private fountain.
It feels so good the way it takes over and over again.
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Thank you for reading.

Chitta.
Categories: commendably, love, romance, , cute,
Form: Free verse
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