You Are Commendably Beautiful

You are commendably beautiful, If beauty were time, you'd be eternity, Your seductive smile is a problem for solution. A twinkle that can only be shown in your eyes, The sparkle in your beautiful eyes, provides the object of endless commentary. It burns like blazing fire, Just as I have loved you like a moth to a flame. I came once looking for your soul, Now captured by tormented dreams, Believing I'm climbing higher, Intensity enfeeble me When you speak my name in ecstasy. Whispering ancient songs unsung, With the rhythm of my rhyme. Rapture fills the air When I see you standing there. I never want it to end A warmth exuding as your own private fountain. It feels so good the way it takes over and over again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/9/2012 12:57:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Chittaranjan. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:10:00 AM
SO SO VERY ROMANTICO..........
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:29:00 PM
ha ha ... the poem is very passionate.... enjoyed your poem, take care~ ALWAYS ~ xox ~ PD
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:23:00 PM
wow, you sure do love writing love poems to beautiful women in pictures. They are very inspiring!! As for my froggie, I truly was looking on my cell phone screen when I thought to do the haiku about the lilly pad and the dragonfly!
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Date: 4/30/2012 6:15:00 PM
I've got to agree with Elliot...this is positively breathtaking. Thanks for sharing this powerful, romantic piece. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:17:00 PM
I enjoyed this much dear poet,this was very breath taking.lovely.
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