Fate intervened on this day
I overslept... missed my train.
Find out about the rail crash -
Not a soul survived.
7,7,7,5 checked with how many syllables
Book Chosen Eleven Minutes by Paolo Coehlo
Contest Part 2 Fully booked
Sponsor Nette Onclaud
06~23~16
Categories:
coehlo, destiny, journey, miracle, sad,
Form: Dodoitsu
Her train arrived right on time
a presence lost in the crowd
love’s interminable end
Eleven minutes
6/22/2016
-Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
submitted to – Part 2, Fully Booked – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nette Onclaud
Categories:
coehlo, lost love,
Form: Dodoitsu
Eleven minutes are left
Before you come with your brush
To paint the convulsing cloud
Ah just eleven
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June 23, 2016
Contest: Part 2--Fully Booked
Book title: Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Categories:
coehlo, anxiety, beautiful, cool, crush,
Form: Dodoitsu
Eleven Minutes
Eleven minutes before
he wedded in the jammed church.
She barged in and proposed
to the gracious groom.
June 22, 2016
For Nette Onclaud
Contest- Part 2, Fully Booked
Novel Title- Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
Categories:
coehlo, marriage, time,
Form: Dodoitsu
mixed icing while oven showed
eleven more minutes left
school shooting—radio blared
wretched birthday cake
Written on 06/22/2016
Contest: Part 2 - Fully Booked
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
Categories:
coehlo, peace, war,
Form: Dodoitsu