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Part 2 - Fully Booked

Her train arrived right on time a presence lost in the crowd love’s interminable end Eleven minutes 6/22/2016 -Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo) submitted to – Part 2, Fully Booked – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nette Onclaud

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2016 10:29:00 AM

love this poignant slice- of- life moment, john... incredible!.. thanks for joining my contest and cheery congrats!..huggs

John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2016 10:56:00 AM

Thanks Nette, always and honor to place in one of your contests. Thank you also for taking the time to sponsor such interesting themed contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2016 9:37:00 AM

wow, I LOVE this, John. Glad to see it among the winners. Congratulations

John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2016 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I wasn't sure if it would catch Nette's eye but one can never tell.

Karam Misra

Date: 6/25/2016 9:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win, John. ~karam~

John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2016 10:53:00 AM

Thanks Karam, appreciate your comment

John Lawless

Date: 6/24/2016 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Wendy, glad you got it. I thought it might be a bit "oblique" in its meanings.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/24/2016 1:48:00 AM

Good write john I can just picture it x

John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2016 10:52:00 AM

OOps...Wendy, I posted my response as a comment...see above.