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Part 2 - Fully Booked

Her train arrived right on time
a presence lost in the crowd
love’s interminable end
Eleven minutes


6/22/2016

-Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)

submitted to – Part 2, Fully Booked – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Nette Onclaud

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Nette Onclaud Date: 6/26/2016 10:29:00 AM love this poignant slice- of- life moment, john... incredible!.. thanks for joining my contest and cheery congrats!..huggs Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 6/26/2016 10:56:00 AM Thanks Nette, always and honor to place in one of your contests. Thank you also for taking the time to sponsor such interesting themed contest.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/26/2016 9:37:00 AM wow, I LOVE this, John. Glad to see it among the winners. Congratulations Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 6/26/2016 10:55:00 AM Thanks Andrea, I wasn't sure if it would catch Nette's eye but one can never tell.

Karam Misra Date: 6/25/2016 9:02:00 PM Congrats on your win, John. ~karam~ Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 6/26/2016 10:53:00 AM Thanks Karam, appreciate your comment

John Lawless Date: 6/24/2016 7:48:00 AM Thanks Wendy, glad you got it. I thought it might be a bit "oblique" in its meanings. Login to Reply

Wendy Rycroft Date: 6/24/2016 1:48:00 AM Good write john I can just picture it x Login to Reply John Lawless Date: 6/26/2016 10:52:00 AM OOps...Wendy, I posted my response as a comment...see above.