Balveen Cheema Poet Dodoitsu

Eleven Minutes

Eleven Minutes


                                       Eleven minutes before
                              he wedded in the jammed church.
                                  She barged in and proposed
                                       to the gracious groom.

          

                                            June 22, 2016
                                         For Nette Onclaud
                                 Contest- Part 2, Fully Booked
                        Novel Title- Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)

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Nette Onclaud June 26, 2016 at 10:47 AM ohh, a brave proposition, balveen... creative take on the theme.. congrats and thanks for being part of my contest.. huggs Balveen Cheema June 26, 2016 at 11:44 AM Absolutely my pleasure, Nette!

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2016 at 9:44 AM Nice win. Congrats, Balveen Balveen Cheema June 26, 2016 at 11:45 AM Many thanks Andrea!

Karam Misra June 25, 2016 at 8:57 PM Congrats on your win, Balveen. ~karam~ Balveen Cheema June 26, 2016 at 8:18 AM Thanks Karam dear!