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Fate intervened on this day I overslept... missed my train. Find out about the rail crash - Not a soul survived. 7,7,7,5 checked with how many syllables Book Chosen Eleven Minutes by Paolo Coehlo Contest Part 2 Fully booked Sponsor Nette Onclaud 06~23~16

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/27/2016 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 3:06:00 PM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/26/2016 12:26:00 PM

So very sad but great write!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 4:45:00 PM

Thanks Carol thankfully its a fiction write for me:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2016 10:13:00 AM

what a lucky omen, jan... great one from you... huge kudos and thanks for being part of my contest.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2016 9:34:00 AM

Congrats, dear friend. The message behind this was awesome.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 6/26/2016 8:23:00 AM

OMG! Thanks to the Lord! Congrats Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 9:40:00 AM

Pure fiction write for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/26/2016 7:44:00 AM

Congrats! Jan on the win...great job...^WW^

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thanks so much ^WW^ hugs jan xx

Karam Misra

Date: 6/25/2016 8:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan! ~karam~

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thanks Karam:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/25/2016 7:15:00 PM

Congrats JAN to win. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2016 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/25/2016 2:17:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win, Jan. I knew it would place high! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/25/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I am delighted Nette liked it - I did amend it slightly from the original - maybe that did the trick:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/24/2016 12:46:00 PM

Never read the book, but I have heard of an author. It's days like these, one would quickly contemplate destiny ... A poignant moment of reflection and thankfulness. P.S. Is the book good?

Jan Allison
Date: 6/24/2016 12:58:00 PM

No idea Timothy - just used the book title as inspiration for the contest I have no idea what the actual book is about :-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2016 9:01:00 AM

that would be an incredible feeling to know one had missed such an event, Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/24/2016 12:16:00 PM

I can't begin to imagine the emotions you would go through Andrea:-( hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/24/2016 6:10:00 AM

Superb ... A great write ...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/24/2016 6:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/24/2016 2:09:00 AM

Excellent. A great Dodoitsu. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/24/2016 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Ravi:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/24/2016 1:41:00 AM

Very impacting wow great x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/24/2016 6:12:00 AM

I changed it slightly from the original poem - i hope Nette likes It:-) hugs Jan xx

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 6/23/2016 12:43:00 PM

Being late was a lucky charm for you! Marvelous poem! Perhaps, what you wanted to say was Oh " brother" and " heard"-- just thinking aloud. 7 it is!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2016 1:31:00 PM

Thankfully just a fiction write Jajosh but you do hear of these things happening - I was writing it from the point of me being on the train - thanks for the thought though:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/23/2016 12:17:00 PM

A great Dodoitsu, Jan, that has a powerful impact. Good luck with the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2016 1:29:00 PM

Thanks Sandra - I do hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/23/2016 11:54:00 AM

Ive heard many stories like this. Missed trains, planes, stuck in traffic, unexplained reasons....Good luck Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2016 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Tim, thought I better pen a poem the contest is nearly full!:-) hugs Jan xx