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Part 2, Fully Booked

Eleven minutes are left
Before you come with your brush
To paint the convulsing cloud
Ah just eleven
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June 23, 2016
Contest: Part 2--Fully Booked
Book title: Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/27/2016 3:07:00 PM
Short, sharp and effective good job probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2016 2:14:00 AM
Thank you ... In spite of what you say, the poem somehow survived in just a corner sans light and air, let alone any love, ... Thank you ...

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