Probir Gupta Poet Dodoitsu

Part 2, Fully Booked

Eleven minutes are left
Before you come with your brush
To paint the convulsing cloud
Ah just eleven
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June 23, 2016
Contest: Part 2--Fully Booked
Book title: Eleven Minutes (Paolo Coehlo)
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Kyle Kriticos June 27, 2016 at 3:07 PM Short, sharp and effective good job probir Probir Gupta June 28, 2016 at 2:14 AM Thank you ... In spite of what you say, the poem somehow survived in just a corner sans light and air, let alone any love, ... Thank you ...