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The Dreams In His Eyes

I vanish in the whirr of dreams in your eyes,
The death masses swallowing me whole,
Masked in your elegant form,
A glistening conviction I cannot dare to obtain

Woe be the paths to your chiseled love,
For the principles of your life smother me,
Kill me…enchant me
As I feed upon the emptiness you have mastered

You groan as I hold on to that dream…
That dream flooding in his innocent eyes
You grip me, and tug me away, 
As I cry out for him, farther and farther gone…

And I realize then, 
That you have shown me,
The dreams in his eyes, 
Were not his own…
But were mine, reflecting back at me…

Irrational conviction!!!
Disgusting…
Pathetic…
Daunting…
Low.

I stare up at the black ceiling of reality
The mirrors cannot lie:
I am torn to shreds by your absolute love
And I cannot say goodbye
Categories: whirr, absence, analogy, angst, best
Form: Free verse

Premium Member From the Kitchen Window

The burst soapsuds dissipate.
Six doves outside my window
Enjoy their meal, congregate.
Wings whirr, head to the gingko

Baby phoebes see surroundings.
With wide mouths expose tastebuds
Hunger each day compounding!
I look, then see burst soapsuds   

So much happening outside my kitchen window view that I forget the dishwater is getting cold and chores going undone. 

June 20, 2023
Categories: whirr, introspection,
Form: Other

Premium Member Where Bumbles Bounce

Flitting and buzzing in a 
playful, poetic dance
a whirr of delicate wings 
crescendos and decrescendos
among a colorful carpet of
sumptuous, silky petals. 

Daring drones speed dizzily about
barely resting, constantly competing 
in a crazy chase for their sticky prize. 
Swooning with drunken lust
they dream of its sappy sweetness 
and long for its golden glory.

Insect tongues sip and suckle in tandem 
greedily drinking with delight to the full.
Soon they whisk away with their 
sticky stash to unseen combs.

And I wonder where they go
and how their delectable delight grows
in that hidden world that only nature knows. 





Written on 9/14/2019
Categories: whirr, insect, nature,
Form: Free verse

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Premium Member Summer Minstrels and Songsters

Summer Minstrels and Songsters

Crickets
Summer songsters
Music of the night
Back porch lullabies, serenade
Singers

Newborn
Cicadas buzz
Yawn and stretch in warm sun
Bright eyes see magnolia trees
Minstrels

Summer
Fireflies twinkle
Magic song of stars
Like suspended bits of glitter
Flash Dance

Buzzing
Grasshopper tunes
Vibrate like a drumline 
Invites lovers to sing along
Duets

Chirping
Katydids trill
Rhythmic beats of improv
In pulsating choruses 
Of blues

Whirr of
Dragonfly wings
Soft downbeats
Solstice troubadours sing alto 
Crooners
Categories: whirr, song, sound, summer,
Form: Cinquain

Premium Member There Is a Hum To Morning

There is a hum to morning
an accustomed to whirr
softly grinding gears
electrical whispers
gentle creaking of awakening wood
satisfied exhale
of a still slumbering dog
purr of a sun warmed cat.
I lie still and listen
to this too often unheard
Symphony.

John G. Lawless
©12/12/2022
Categories: whirr, morning, music,
Form: Free verse

Magnetism

Lights flicker, 
buttons ping, 
new clicks whirr 
in the beautiful machine.

My head slides,
my eyes turn, peer in,
gaze: 
magnetized by novelty, in this tiny 
maze, slinking ever further, further in.

Purring springs exhale steel-sweet breath; 
my narrow eyes glide between busy twirling cogs;
my ears perceive the melodies of electronic hums. 
Then, snap!
 
I failed to hear the mind hiss
inside its trap.
Categories: whirr, desire, evil,
Form: Free verse


To Not Two Nor Too

A semi baked semi colon is neither a seminar nor a seminary session. It is in fact the whirr of wheels from the large overweight apostrophe on a bike. Uphill downhill and all around the picturesque towns, villages and hamlets but not cities for cityscapes' are carnivorous and carnivores can charm even a chalice from a wagon if and when sealed with the juice of a steak. Well oiled grease test then. All in line. Good. Garages grab greenery giving great galloping geraniums. On the phone now are we? Oh good afternoon. Good morning. Good evening. But never a good night in a customer query box ticked. Tickle a ticket to induce laughter. In many many rides on a bus or a train a mandatory mane maneuvers managing mere mobile movements. And always remember that the globetrotting goldfish in the wicker hat can sing mist loudly to a cone. Hahaha Kyu k pass hai saja hai mekhana and a fried onion belches to a melted cheese. *** geomorphologic Z
Categories: whirr, angel, appreciation, aubade, basketball,
Form:

A Shy Shiraz

They say Cabernet Sauvignon pairs nicely with steak
Pinotage, they reckon, for cheese
Tempranillo is the choice for Mexican grub
But, I'm somewhat easier to please

I've tried a fair few "Reds", on a weekend night
While chilling to some melodic jazz
I've had the brave, the bold and the border-line nasty
But I've never had a "Shy Shiraz"

I once had a good round Pinot Noir
And I've tried a spicy Grenache
I've felt the cranberry burst through a daring Gamay
Which cost me lots of cash

I've had a Beaujolais, which wasn't too pretty
Bought from a dodgy guy named "Baz"
Found a corked Chianti - rather a pity
But I've never had a "Shy Shiraz"

I've had a monster of a Monastrell
And a beautiful Petit Ver
A Mataro, which did nothing for me
A Malbec, which made my mind whirr

Yes, I like a glass, on a weekend night
You may prefer beer, whereas
I must keep looking, 'cos it's quite off-putting
That I've never found a "Shy Shiraz"

A Zinfandel gave me heartburn hell
And a Claret once cleared my head
A Merlot can make me beg for more
Rioja sends me merrily to bed

Yes, I like a bottle, on a weekend night
It gives my mind pizzazz
Then sends me mellow, like a good old fellow
Who's searching for a "Shy Shiraz"

This earth is fine, for those who love wine
I've had the old world, and the new
But until I find a "Shy Shiraz"
I'll just keep trying - as you do.

For a bottle of red, on a weekend night
Is a blend of razzmatazz
You can find me drinking, while secretly thinking
"I hope I never find a Shy Shiraz"
Categories: whirr, wine,
Form: Light Verse

Debutante

WHIRR!
The noise
Hair-Dryer
Nails Polished Pink.
It's her first prom night.
Drenched in waves of blue silk
And black shoes with heels to kill.
Not a strand out of place on a
Nervous seventeen-year-old's blonde head.
The lights shine tonight for the ballroom's belle.
© Avery Hall  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirr, teen,
Form: Etheree

Premium Member Crescendoes

The glowing light 'pon sparse clouds
Radiates a golden glow
Orange marmalade sun tips the far
horizon and waltzes slow

Light changes slowly to clear bright
The birds' chorus crescendos
Joined by the whirr of a hummer
Mornings sung in tempos  

The plural of Crescendo can be crescendos, crescendoes, or crescendi

The plural of Tempo can be tempos or tempi..
Categories: whirr, life,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Translation of Aranjuez Lyrics From the Spanish Original, Sung By Andrea Bocelli

Translation of the Aranjuez lyrics from the Spanish original sung by Andrea Bocelli

Your lovely presence still lingers at Aranjuez

Aranjuez,
A place fused through in dreams of love
Where the whirr of fountains
In crystal
Make believe the waters chatter in the garden
In hushed tones with the roses

Aranjuez,
Nowadays the faded dry leaves
Which waft and drift in the winds
Recall the tenderness of our tryst there
That once upon a time
We let surge in our hearts      you and I
And without cause let befall us oblivion
Yet that intense fervour lies safe
In some sun eclipsed by the horizon
Or in the hint of some breeze or lingering in some flower
Awaiting only your return

Aranjuez,
Nowadays the faded dry leaves
Which waft and drift in the winds
Recall the tenderness of our tryst there
That once upon a time
We let surge in our hearts      you and I
And neglected without reason
In Aranjuez, My Love
You as well as I

© T. Wignesan - Paris, 2018
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirr, farewell, lost love, places,
Form: Free verse

Lost Car Keys

I've never understood how things work

gears turn and cranks crank

circuits connecting and forming a link

all of this stuff is out of my reach

its all so confusing, fuses and plugs 

that plug into sockets 

and HUDS that have numbers and belts that have notches

motors that whirr and shake so profusely

only do more to stump and confuse me

I'm not at all mechanically inclined

trust me I know, I've tried many times

I can't understand battery's without power 

have to charge for almost a whole half an hour

drivetrain won't drive, forward or reverse

transmission whats that, this sticks stuck in first

the bumpers don't bump and the flashers won't flash

speedometer and fuel don't work on the dash

there are spots under the hood for the fluids it takes

and I don't understand how a carburetor.. carburates?

mufflers to muffle the sounds that it makes

drive shaft to control the turns that you take

key to ignition 

ignition to starter 

starter to the whatever the hell that you call er'

it's all so disturbing, it bothers me bunches

gas pedals, brake pedals, what are these clutches

automatic and manual drives drive me crazy

has anyone checked the oil here lately 

the tires have tread to catch on the ground

hydraulics to make you go up and go down

there are switches and knobs

that serve no functions or jobs

there's gearboxes, spark plugs, fuel tanks and handbrakes

and I couldn't even tell you which one keeps the car in place

how it all works is way beyond me

I have a hard enough time just finding my keys
© Jared Day  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: whirr, car, crazy, fun, funny,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Holi-Dazed Poetic Musings

Poetic musings in the post holi-daze


Living downstairs from the centipede
one dreads the hours of waiting
for the “other” shoe to drop.


the bottom half of the moon smiled
grinning through the haze of dawn
soft glow casting soft shadows
across the glistening hoarfrost 


sitting outside the homes
they once filled with joy
green brittle branches crack
under the weight of failed promise


wild spinning whirr of life’s impatience
shatters the silence of snow’s quilt
tosses the ice chips of “reality”
atop the warmth of hidden dreams.


“of what use are gloves
to fingers that comprehend
only mittens”.


In response to the question:
“How many ways up the mountain?”
Religions exert the inane belief
there is only one way up the mountain.


Opportunity no longer knocks.
It can, however, be downloaded.


John G. Lawless
Categories: whirr, humor, muse, silly,
Form:

Premium Member Permanently Stained

With a whirr and grind
Slowly creeps up inching along
Then the banging sounds
The "Bobcat" reaches his paw
Out as far as it can
Pulling back black plastic
Discarded cardboard boxes
Tidbits of vegetables, file thirteen coupons
Last nights scrapes

Then the male voices
Men in banana yellow shirts
Permanently stained 
Men who come once or twice weekly
Creeping along  
Getting the tough smelly job done..
Categories: whirr, on work and working
Form: Free verse

Into the Unknown

Miles from here
The future dwells.
The unending road
Takes me particle by atom
Into thin spaces of air.

Moving forward and never looking back.

The past is a dragging rock 
But the future is sky and space.
Clouds cover the trail
That need but a little courage
To squeeze these atoms through.

Moving forward and never looking

Wheels whirr along pavement
The tune a call to journey 
Where land and water are more
Than just illusions of survival.
And leaving is not running away.

Moving forward and never

The past, not the future,
Holds me back, until I see
That support from behind
As it bears some of the burden
For pushing these atoms forward.

Moving forward and looking back.

Because no journey begins
Without yesterday’s
Embrace as its starting point.
Categories: whirr, anxiety, courage, destiny, travel,
Form: Free verse
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