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Magnetism

Lights flicker, buttons ping, new clicks whirr in the beautiful machine. My head slides, my eyes turn, peer in, gaze: magnetized by novelty, in this tiny maze, slinking ever further, further in. Purring springs exhale steel-sweet breath; my narrow eyes glide between busy twirling cogs; my ears perceive the melodies of electronic hums. Then, snap! I failed to hear the mind hiss inside its trap.

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Date: 3/26/2024 1:34:00 PM
As above, so it is below ~ fav
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 3/26/2024 1:46:00 PM
Glad you liked this. J :)
Date: 3/20/2024 8:13:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 3/21/2024 2:10:00 AM
There are a few machines like this- mind traps (or time traps)! J:)

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