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Premium Member Tentative Dancer

Do I choose to join, this Poetic Dance
To reveal my soul, to take this chance
I am left to wonder, who will care
If my life is charmed, or full of despair

I release my emotions, to the page
The good the sad, the parts with rage
The pen gets started, revealing each part
A stitched together, healed broken heart

Like many a writer, I am a bleeder
Revealing my secrets, to you the reader
My only hope, is that you have time
To see yourself, in the words I rhyme 

Because without you, there is no dance
You are the reason, I take this chance
A dance with a stranger, one two three
Perhaps at the end, you will know me

The very first Poem I posted to the soup.

A Tentative Peek

To you I profess care,
True or untrue rests in you fair,
What runs inside you I know not rare?
But surely did not come in a moment thread-bare.
At and all times like this,
To allay all shackles,
That, with hope, does not express by pyre.

Tentative

Consider a moment, 
Tentative steps.
Perhaps they seem new 
and an uncharted realm,
requiring a measure of time 
to truly remember how to walk 
a path that leads to happiness.

Glance at the citadels' walls
which you have built over time, 
to protect your hearts desires.
Do you really comprehended,
its image, stature and strength 
from the other side of perception?

Is wanting to know for certain,
you are not making another
emotionally bankrupting mistake,
an indication of fear or mistrust?

Or perhaps is it wisdom, 
garnered from a lifetime
of hard learned lessons, that
mandates patience to allow 
what ever may happen to occur,
in its own time and way 
in un conjured innocent freedom.

Do you trust nothing more than
you initial emotional reaction,
or the longing to derive some semblance
of unrealized happiness in place of
the void loneliness dictates?

Wanting nothing more than to ingrain,
the entire essence and being of the other,
so that a serene completeness can
turn waking dreams into reality's treasure.


Premium Member Tentative

Walk calmly here
Seize wise good cheer


Face each fear then
Make fear your friend


Fit well fine wit
Taste timeless bits


Cheer knows happy
Make fear snappy


Each moment dies
With high and sigh


Cry if you must
When true love rusts


To transcend all
Rise when you fall


Judge not with hate
Love's never late


Do your best here
For love endears


Tentative moods
Unfurl some good


In this haystack
Take time to slack


Too soon, too late
Time burns each page


Tentative times
Fade like dust grime




Leon Enriquez
10 May 2016
Singapore

Premium Member Hemmed In Feminine

Scale mosaic tail lays gracefully draped over rock
Sumptuous hip width to skin graduates
Saturated waist trailing tendrils touched by moss
Silk mermaid nautical languor eminates
Sorrow in inhibit, love's absence induces her sobs


Vanguard calmly addresses the depths with probe
Weaving seemlessly amongst seaweed 
Gentle marina mistress, Clementine reserves hope
For a qualified merman, in love succeed
Tugged subtly by tides of princely promises flowed


Spell of solo exploration doesn't tarnish bright fins
Siren inspired by increasing innate talent
Sanguine supple lovely needn't gun for yang to yin 
Suitor to exceed her calibre, most haven't 
Shown aptitude for brave compassion, closest kin


Clam fan covered curves retain an untainted heart
Slender arms open troves old tides buried 
Gracious Clementine stays patient for Cupid's dart
Pleasant peaks of top lips drip salt, selfish
Lungs unemcombered by blunder summons laugh


Tinkle bells bemused chortle across vibrant pearls
Heightened by judicious standpoint jubilee
Felicious pageant entrant in a  fish tail gown swirls
Heavy gems adorn torso tight with chastity 
Air orgasmed chest of benevolent treasure unfurls






              16th February 2021
    Entered into Charlotte Peddifoot's
            Open Poetry Contest

Tentative Questions With Definite Answers

It was today, that wasn't so good for me.
multiple decades possibly washed away.
family means everything but i'm a terrible brother.
a horrendous friend who ran from life once lived.
to pastures green and new.
when all that was left behind was those who needed me.
and now I feel needed more than before i left.
there's a guilt there, no there's nothing I could've done it was out of my hands.
but a guilt that i'm so distant in every way unable to even sit down and help pass the time.
the pressure is building on me, don't get me wrong in myself I'm happy and I'm fine, but in others I just want to be there even just for a day.
Just let me find a way back home be the brother I once was and live a life I left behind so long ago, even just for a day.

(D.G S.J L.W K.R)


Premium Member Tentative and Unrefined

My poems have me musing with my muse:
inking new phrases, so I don't reuse.
And to make obscure words sound sensible:
a thesaurus is indispensable.

Each and every line conceived in my mind
gets roughed in, tentative, and unrefined.
And to broaden my vocabulary,
I consult a rhyming dictionary.

And as verses form through perseverance,
a brand-new poem makes its appearance.

Premium Member Tentative Tempests

Why must I beg pardon? 
Has been our great question;
When you and I battle,
Vessels at home rattle; 

I say yes; you say no,
Matters so silly though;
I swear; you swear; sourly,
Dogs and cats laugh wholly...

You are old; I am old,
Our looks have turned ice-cold;
Ego, yet, like a spring,
In us, plays monarch-swing...

When we ask each other,
At end of each whether;
We find the same reason,
Yet pour the same treason...

In the end, it's a jest,
Our true love, dear, does quest,
To explicitly test,
Whose love is best of best...!


08 April 2022

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