Tentative and Unrefined

My poems have me musing with my muse: inking new phrases, so I don't reuse. And to make obscure words sound sensible: a thesaurus is indispensable. Each and every line conceived in my mind gets roughed in, tentative, and unrefined. And to broaden my vocabulary, I consult a rhyming dictionary. And as verses form through perseverance, a brand-new poem makes its appearance.

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Date: 3/20/2020 7:40:00 AM
Masterful!! Brilliant!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2020 11:05:00 PM
So many of us can relate to these words - the reference books, the original idea slowly taking shape, the perseverance, the delightful appearance of a finished work. Love the line 'musing with my muse'. An all around winner to me, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thank you John, you always manage to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2020 10:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Emile! This is delightful and I love the conclusion!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2020 8:00:00 PM
CONGRATS on your big win, Emile. Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/1/2020 9:35:00 AM
Nice flow and well penned. Great work!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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