Tentative and Unrefined

My poems have me musing with my muse: inking new phrases, so I don't reuse. And to make obscure words sound sensible: a thesaurus is indispensable. Each and every line conceived in my mind gets roughed in, tentative, and unrefined. And to broaden my vocabulary, I consult a rhyming dictionary. And as verses form through perseverance, a brand-new poem makes its appearance.
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Radhakrishna Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Masterful!! Brilliant!!
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Watt Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 11:05 PM
So many of us can relate to these words - the reference books, the original idea slowly taking shape, the perseverance, the delightful appearance of a finished work. Love the line 'musing with my muse'. An all around winner to me, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Thank you John, you always manage to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Congrats on your win Emile! This is delightful and I love the conclusion!
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 8:00 PM
CONGRATS on your big win, Emile. Janice
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Koplin Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Nice flow and well penned. Great work!
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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