Best Stanzaic Poems


The Weight of Heights

They called him a child of the sky,
a storm-born spark, a rising sun
His steps were light, his hands were quick,
he climbed before he learned to run

The world below had sung his name,
its voices laced with awe and might
You’ll reach the peak they whispered low,
where all the stars align in light

He climbed through fire, through fractured bone,
through sleepless nights that burned like day
And at the top, at last, he swore
there’d be no farther left to stray

But summits blur, and clouds deceive,
each height unfolds another gate
Above him, figures loomed like wraiths,
their flesh decayed, yet climbed for weight.

And so he clings, too proud to fall,
too lost to chase another flight.
He wonders if the climb was worth
a life spent fearing a lesser height.
Categories: stanzaic, angst, fear, identity, loneliness,
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member With the Lord - the Atrina Style

~With The Lord ~
( Atrina )

Make all your dreams for you just shine
Follow his guidance, you'll be fine
His guidance follow, you'll be fine
Make all your dreams for you just shine

Make all your dreams come true and glow
Enjoy life to fullest and grow
Life enjoy to fullest and grow
Make all your dreams come true and glow

Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure
There's salvation with the Lord sure
With the Lord there's salvation sure
Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure

Make all your dreams for you just shine
Follow His guidance, you'll be fine
Make all your dreams come true and glow
Enjoy life to fullest and grow
Thrive and keep thoughts positive, pure
There's salvation with the Lord sure.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


May.24.2017


So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love. 
1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)

-“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. 
John 3:16 (NIV) 

- Rejoice in hope, be patient in tribulation, be constant in prayer
Romans 12: 12 ( NIV )

-The Lord will fight for you, and you have only to be silent.” 
 Exodus  14: 13  ( NIV )



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain 



~Author's Notes:

The " Atrina " is  a poetry form  or  style that was created by Keith Metcalf Drew, and is a stanzaic  poem of 18 lines, consisting of 3 quatrains and a sestet. 
With all lines counting 8 syllables. Rhymed: AaaA BbbB CccC AaBbCc 
The capital letters indicate refrain lines.
(AaaABbbBCccCAaBbCc)
The first and last lines in each verse are exactly the same.
The third line in each verse is of same words to the second line 
The fourth verse the sestet consists of the first two lines from each of the three previous verses.



~ Thought  for  the   day :

- - Salvation can't  be found in  anyone or anything  else. There's  no  other.
 Only  Jesus. Only  through  Jesus  alone.
Categories: stanzaic, faith, hope, inspirational, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member W R I T E R S - the Catena Rondo Style

~Writers~
(Catena Rondo)


Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have more in common than it seem
Writers love to write great stories through

Co-authors make an awesome team
United they share more than their writing
Their love for words make heart sing
Co-authors make an awesome team

United they share more than writing
They want to work in harmony all the time
Writers deserve recognition and that they do
United they share more than writing 

They want to work in harmony all the time
Writers love to write a great story through
Some can make us happy and some blue
They want to work in harmony all the time

Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have in common more than it seem
Writers love to write a great story through.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014



December.29.2016



~Author's Notes:

The "Catena Rondo" is a stanzaic form created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton.
Categories: stanzaic, beautiful, books, love, writing,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry


Premium Member First Birthday

Pretty little princess
in bows and pink sundress
gifts and presents wondrous
year old today

Ribbons, sashes, ruffles
on floor crawls and shuffles
loud laughter and snuffles
childlike display

Mom and dad are so-so
lives changed a year ago
turned their whole world wacko
baby array

Parents hug each other
promise are still lovers
with a year now over
need time away

Grandparents blow kisses
friends and others wishes
party favor glitches
happy birthday

April 14, 2018

*Violette Poem Contest
By Mick Talbot
Second Place


*Violette is stanzaic, rhymed, unlimited quatrains, (in this contest minium 5), in the aaaB cccB and so on, feminine rhyming scheme. B is a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza. 
Syllables, 6,6,6,4, per line.
Categories: stanzaic, age, birthday, blessing, celebration,
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Glows Like Golden Grain - the Bragi Style

~Glows Like Golden Grain ~
( Bragi )

Beautiful first spring day
Bountiful sun but then may rain
Enticing spring is here again at last 
Each ray of sun illuminates so fast
Bright sunshine glows like golden grain
Glad spring shines bright this day.

Butterfly dance here and there fast
Most beautiful springs here again
The airs so mild today
The sky is blue and clouds hide and play
So lovely the sun rays sustain
And to all its beams of warm light it cast.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


June.01.2017


“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain 


~Author's Notes:

 
 The 'Bragi' is said to be suited for scenic beauty and “the elfin”. Created by Thelma Allinder, it became popular through a 1950’s publication,Scimitar and Song.
 The Bragi is stanzaic, written in 2 sixains. (12 lines)
 syllabic,6/8/10/10/8/6/10/8/6/6/8/10 syllables per line.

 Rhymed, rhyme scheme abccba cbaabc. (abccbacbaabc)
Categories: stanzaic, beautiful, butterfly, love, spring,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member In My Mind

(Sonnetina Rispetto) 


In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight 
Now each day I just think of you 
Non-stop my heart for you will cry 
No matter what I do and try 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 

Without you now empty's my heart 
It's all broken, just torn apart 
Now each day I just think of you 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


August,07,2014 


Author's notes: 



The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form 

created by Dorian Petersen Potter 

on September 8,2009. 

This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. 

It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or 

with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. 

The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. 

The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. 

Specifications restated: 

Stanzaic:  Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octave. 


Isosyllabic:  Eight syllable per line 

Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. 

Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.
Categories: stanzaic, heartbroken, lost love, moving
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member He Knows - the Catena Rondo Style

~He Knows ~
(The Catena Rondo)

God knows all our present  past and future
He created us with a great plan in mind
He wants us saved and love in heart to find
God knows all our present  past and future

He created us with a great plan in mind
God knows what's in store for you and me
He knows men' hearts and wants us free
He created us with a great plan in mind

God knows what's in store for you and me
He knows what's in our minds and heart
He loves us all right from the very start
God knows what's in store for you and me

He knows what's  in our minds  and heart
God knows all our present past and future
This is a fact according to the Good Book for sure
He knows what's in our minds  and  heart

God knows all our present past and future
He created us with a great plan in mind
He wants us saved and love in heart to find
God knows all our present past and future.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014



September.12.2016


-So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love. 
1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)

-“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. 
John 3:16 (NIV) 


~Author's  Notes:

The " Catena Rondo " is a stanzaic form or style created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton.
Categories: stanzaic, faith, hope, inspirational, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Nightmare, Translation of Paul Verlaine's Cauchemar

Nightmare, Translation of Paul Verlaine’s Cauchemar

(Translation of Paul Verlaine’s quintilla : « Cauchemar ». As usual, I have tried to stick to the original’s stanzaic format and rhyme scheme. T. Wignesan)

In my unfurling dream I saw it happen
- The way the hurricane lashes the strand –
A two-edged sword whirling in one hand
An hourglass in the other 
This knight rider

Come coursing through Germany
Down through towns and the open country
And from the river up mountain free,
And from forests to valley lone
This stallion

Ebony black and red as flame
Sans bridle, nor bit, nor rein.
Ne’er a hup ! nor crop, constrain 
In the midst of deafening railing
Unfailing ! Unfailing !

Long plume adorning a huge felt hat
Kept in shade his eye which up it lit
And then it dimmed. Such as in the mist
Explodes and dies this blue flash clear
The weapon fire

As when the white-tailed eagle’s wing
As might by a sudden storm sting
The air streaked with snowing,
His fur coat out-raised distend
Beat back the wind,

And disclosed with an air : glory be
A torso sombre and of ivory,
While in the black night free
Through strident neighing : dazzling beneath
Thirty-two teeth.

© T. Wignesan – Paris, 2013
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: stanzaic, dream,
Form: Quintilla

Premium Member He Knows - the Catena Rondo Style

~He Knows~
(Catena Rondo)

God knows our present past and future
He created us with a great plan in mind
He wants us saved and love in heart to find
God knows all our present past and future

He created us with a great plan in mind
God knows what's in store for you and me
He knows men' hearts and wants us free
He created us with a great plan in mind

God knows what's in store for you and me
And knows what's in our minds and hearts
He loves us all right from the very start
God knows what's in store for you and me

He knows everything out there for anyone to know
God knows our present past and future
This is a fact according to the  Bible  for sure
He knows everything out there for anyone to know

God knows all our present past and future
He created us with a great plan in mind
He wants us saved and love in heart to find
God knows all our present past and future.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014


November.01.2016


-So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love. 
1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)

-“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. 
John 3:16 (NIV ) 


~Authors Notes:

" The Catena Rondo" is a stanzaic form created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton.
Categories: stanzaic, faith, hope, inspirational, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Day By Day - Sonnetina Rispetto

(Sonnetina Rispetto) 


Day by day with God make my way 
And to him I can always pray 
Doesn't matter wherever I go 
Life can be very hard at times 
But with God I can hear sweet chimes
With his love my heart always glow
Day by day with God make my way 
And to him I can always pray. 

Here on earth till see promised land 
Life rests in the palm of his hand 
Doesn't matter wherever I go 
With his love my heart always glow
Day by day with God make my way 
And to him I can always pray. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


09.17.2014


Authors notes :


Sonnetina Rispetto 

The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form 

created by Dorian Petersen Potter 

on September 8,2009. 

This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. 

It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or 

with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. 

The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. 

The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. 

Specifications restated: 

Stanzaic:  Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octaveI 


Isosyllabic:  Eight syllable per line 

Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. 

Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.
Categories: stanzaic, christian, faith, hope, inspiration,
Form: Rispetto

Premium Member W R I T E R S - the Catena Rondo Style

~Writers~
(Catena Rondo)


Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have more in common than it seem
Writers love to write great stories through

Co-authors make an awesome team
United they share more than their writing
Their love for words make heart sing
Co-authors make an awesome team

United they share more than writing
They want to work in harmony all the time
Writers deserve recognition and that they do
United they share more than writing 

They want to work in harmony all the time
Writers love to write a great story through
Some can make us happy and some blue
They want to work in harmony all the time

Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have in common more than it seem
Writers love to write a great story through.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014



September.12.2016



~Author's Notes:

The "Catena Rondo" is a stanzaic form created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton.
Categories: stanzaic, beautiful, books, love, writing,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member W R I T E R S - the Catena Rondo Style

~Writers~
(Catena Rondo)


Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have more in common than it seems
Writers love to write great stories through

Co-authors make an awesome team
United they share more than their writing
Their love for words make heart sing
Co-authors make an awesome team

United they share more than writing
They want to work in harmony all time too
Writers deserve recognition and that they do
United they share more than writing 

They want to work in harmony all time too
Writers love to write a great story through
Some can make us happy and some blue
They want to work in harmony all time too

Writers love to write a great story through
Co-authors make an awesome team
All have in common more than it seems
Writers love to write a great story through.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014



July.12.2016


~Author's  Notes:

The " Catena Rondo " is a stanzaic form created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton.
Categories: stanzaic, beautiful, books, love, writing,
Form: Free verse

A Violtte Poem - Fantasy Land

FANTASY LAND
 A
VIOLTTE POEM
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

a land of few hippies',
where live elves' and pixies;
matriarchal fairies,
Irish drummers

where happy and laughter
and joy ever after
fun end to a chapter,
love their summers!

humans come to visit,
all so much fun isn'it
left leaving some credit
we thought runners

you people have many,
care we not of any,
our lives' so friendly,
your could, chummers

our land of plenty
where guys act so genty
adult? yes, so scenty
ladies stunners
~~~~~

Violette
By Lawrence Eberhart | April 7, 2014 | fantasy
• The Violette is a stanzaic form with a rhyme scheme similar to the Zéjel without the mundanza, introduced by Viola Gardner. Line 4 carries a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza.

The Violette is:
• stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
• syllabic, 6/6/6/4 syllables per line.
• rhymed, feminine rhyme used aaab cccb dddb etc b is a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza.

Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/violette/ via  http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1882#baccresiez

My Thanks to Judi Van Gorder via Lawrence Eberhart for the wonderful resource at PMO, what Lawrence has done at http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/

Mick Talbot
Categories: stanzaic, fairy, fantasy,
Form:

Premium Member Arte Mayor: Neither Cricket Nor Football

ARTE MAYOR*: Neither Cricket nor Football

Is this the way to prop A-first
Sock not oval ball overhead
Slam not round ball with drumstick dead
Cut not corporate tax: the worst
Hundred millions sweat till tv burst
Swamp Super Bowl cheer-leaders' tights
The day England scorned Wales' rights*
Would arméd football rugby durst

Catch not ball in leather-gloved hand
Watch how slip-fields pluck balls from air
Out-fields brave boundaries debonair
That's what  cricket's in any land
Trumped-up charges make no A-men grand 
Nor soft base balls stop eyes grow sore
A-1 Nation must make World soar
Hail Rugby! King Twickenham brand!

Throw missile back You Quarter-Back
Take no step beyond the Red line
Referee draws to keep the front-line
Push no further than ball in pack
The Golden Rule's not to kick back
Unless you're in scrum cheek to jowl
And lick the foe if he must growl
Block those horns in grid-lock Am-track!

Curve ball's By Gad no in-swinger
Reach first base sans one lone strike
Home runs no match sixes through dike
Stop runs coming through huge bouncer
Best way to take the World over
Scrap apéd games from lean memory
Learn to play ball gentlemanly
You'll need no Vinson carrier!

*Arte Mayor (Sp. Major Art) stanzaic form, the art of Archiprest de Hita (12th-13th c.): eight syllabic lines in eight-line stanzas, rhyming abba acca.
*England beat Wales in epic match at Cardiff to win Six-Nations' Rugby 2017 Trophy; the same day the Super Bowl was watched by 125 millions on TV. If the same audience could have seen the match at Cardiff, I'd wager that would have been the very last Super Bowl event in history.

© T. Wignesan - Paris, 2017
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: stanzaic, baseball, england, football, games,
Form: Political Verse

Premium Member In My Mind - Sonnetina Rispetto

(Sonnetina Rispetto) 


In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight 
Now each day I just think of you 
Non-stop my heart for you will cry 
No matter what I do and try 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 

Without you now empty's my heart 
It's all broken, just torn apart 
Now each day I just think of you 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 

09.17.2014


Author's notes: 



The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form 

created by Dorian Petersen Potter 

on September 8,2009. 

This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. 

It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or 

with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. 

The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. 

The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. 

Specifications restated: 

Stanzaic:  Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octave. 


Isosyllabic:  Eight syllable per line 

Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. 

Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.
Categories: stanzaic, betrayal, break up, grief,
Form: Rispetto
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