Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

In My Mind

(Sonnetina Rispetto) 


In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight 
Now each day I just think of you 
Non-stop my heart for you will cry 
No matter what I do and try 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 

Without you now empty's my heart 
It's all broken, just torn apart 
Now each day I just think of you 
Even when your love makes me blue 
In my mind you're here day and night 
For some time you brought in sunlight. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


August,07,2014 


Author's notes: 



The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form 

created by Dorian Petersen Potter 

on September 8,2009. 

This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. 

It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or 

with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. 

The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. 

The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. 

Specifications restated: 

Stanzaic:  Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octave. 


Isosyllabic:  Eight syllable per line 

Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. 

Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.

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John Posey September 11, 2014 at 6:48 PM I am truly impressed by your creativity... Nicely done, my friend..... I bow to your artistic talent...... Jake Dorian Petersen Potter September 11, 2014 at 7:37 PM Thank you so much John! Glad you liked it my friend. Best wishes! Xxxxxx D.

Ma Yaseen September 10, 2014 at 1:52 AM nice work done... this can be really termed as creativity.. HUGS.. Dorian Petersen Potter September 11, 2014 at 7:40 PM Thank you so much Malik! You're very kind my sweet friend.Hugs to you too! Best wishes! xxx D.

Jan Allison September 8, 2014 at 5:33 PM What a stunning poem and form you have created - I love the rhyme scheme and repeated lines - its a 7 from me! hugs Jan Dorian Petersen Potter September 11, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thank you so much Jan! Glad you liked it and try my style sometimes in the future. xxx D.