Day By Day - Sonnetina Rispetto

(Sonnetina Rispetto) Day by day with God make my way And to him I can always pray Doesn't matter wherever I go Life can be very hard at times But with God I can hear sweet chimes With his love my heart always glow Day by day with God make my way And to him I can always pray. Here on earth till see promised land Life rests in the palm of his hand Doesn't matter wherever I go With his love my heart always glow Day by day with God make my way And to him I can always pray. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 09.17.2014 Authors notes : Sonnetina Rispetto The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form created by Dorian Petersen Potter on September 8,2009. This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. Specifications restated: Stanzaic: Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octaveI Isosyllabic: Eight syllable per line Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.

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Date: 9/18/2014 5:28:00 AM
I am running a choka form contest. Next will be Sonnetina Rispetto, Dorian
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 9:29:00 AM
Wish you the best with your Choka contest Dr. Ram! It must be very exciting and nice for you to be sponsoring one in this form. Oh I am so happy and honored you would want to sponsor a contest using my Sonnetina Rispetto, one of my very favorite forms or poetry style I have created over the years, because I have invented others speaking of and they're published in the Internet and used in poetry books by many of my poet friends all over. Well thank you again for dropping by and wonderful comments Dr. Ram! You do me a great honor in featuring my sonnetina rispetto form. I hope lots of poets take your challenge and participate. Looking forward to reading of course all those nice entries. Cheers! And best to you my friend! xxxx D.
Date: 9/18/2014 5:26:00 AM
Oh, that is you. IF you remember I wrote a poem My Father-My Hero in the year 2011 and I did receive a comment from you. I tried to contact you then via soup mail but I did not receive a reply as I wanted to sponsor a contest on the form. I am very happy to find you on the soup. I am surely thinking to sponsor a contest on the form soon, Dorian
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 9:15:00 AM
I am very happy to be here too, and this time full time as time permits me everyday, Dr.Ram. I've been a member here for many years, I am not a newy, lol...but now I want to share more of my work here and spend more time at the soup with all the good friends that already have (friends like yourself:)and new ones to make. I always love this poetry site, one of my favorite ones over the many years. Yes, thank you, that's very kind of you again. What a nice thought my friend! Have a lovely weekend! xxx d.
Date: 9/17/2014 6:17:00 PM
very beautifully crafted piece
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Liam! Nice to see you visiting my page again. Blesssings! xxxx D.
Date: 9/17/2014 3:50:00 PM
Great poem! I love your beautiful words.. I don't know how you all have the time and ambition to post such pieces of art EVERY day but I love reading them!! Lovely piece. Thanks for visiting my work. Have a wonderful day, Juli-Michelle
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/18/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Juli! Believe I don't even know myself that one.lol.. I guess is love and dedication to this craft, making and squeezing the time among all my daily routine and work. That does the trick! I just wish have more time everyday to write more. Lol .. Likewise! Have a lovely weekend my friend! xxx D.
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