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Premium Member Look Closely

Look closely,  feel the harmless heat 
enveloping black-diamond 
         petals in the glistening
            garden of glossy geraniums.
There, sprouts rosemary dreams
           from an untouched silhouette,
           eager to be seen beyond 
      her perfumed pigments. 

Her universe was sprinkled 
with starry streams 
of gleaming rays, 
as she swayed to symphonic 
serenades filled with hazel dust.
They may gawk with greedy 
glares as wide as the night sky,
marking her with lecherous 
objects that only please 
shameless eyes.

She was never 
in need of a sixth sense
to understand iron glances
that travel in nefarious packs,
with sugar-burnt hunger 
washing all over her
unblistered flesh,
judging her concealer 
as a manipulative facade,
seeking uncalled-for affirmations
that she never solicited,
misconceiving her thin lines 
of red-river lipstick.

Her summer physique allowed 
no consent for invasive intrusion,
yet carnal cravings become 
unwelcome toxic trespassers.

Their immoral thoughts 
believe shallow words 
give them wanderlust wings,
while sinister stars in their sky
label her a soulless mannequin,
objectifying her 
cinnamon-glazed skin,
sun-kissed hair, 
and pecan-powdered~
caramelized voluptuous flare,
with their vehement 
voracious desires.
Swinging penetrative thin blades 
of opinions from miles,
oblivious to the fact that 
she is the sanguine strength 
that strolls in silver silence 
across spiky swards,
suppressing the pain her 
bones have endured with 
every whiskering 
whistle they wolfed.
There, if the mauve moon and 
crystalline constellations look closely,
they would find versatile 
mirrors of meaning 
reflecting the times 
she parades a smile too
comfortable to wear,
for they have concluded 
her bed to be a shrine 
of blenders and
overflowing thickened blades,
cursed by the biological
sins of Adam's ancestors.
Categories: spiky, deep,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Ambedo

As shades of grey overwhelm white clouds,
their rain tears begin to pitter and patter,
creating a pattern upon my skin.
Like a dehydrated petal, I taste their 
tenderness with the tip of my tongue.
A gypsy breeze kisses my skin's shivers,
as I gaze at my muddy decaying garden -
roses look rusty, but their thorns remain.

As my eyes close in silent stillness,
I'm lost in a melancholic moment -
when I was like a vibrant spring bloom

but I wonder why my roots crumbled.

Life moves so fast,
but some of us struggle to grow.
Some images remain forgotten,
some promises remain broken,
so, I ponder what happened,
to those childhood dreams and schemes -
when the mind cared not for meaning,
only hidden treasures we would find.

How many are still searching,
how many souls are at peace?

How empty is your jar?

Reflecting upon those who arrived,
hardly any stayed - few left an impression -
most left without understanding.
Some still live within boxes of my heart,
especially those who lifted me when I fell,
but there was only a few

and I regret the ones I hurt,
forgive the ones who caused me pain,
but, I shall never forget.

We can never escape our past,
some of us will never really heal,
memories are like lost photos,
stored in a dusty album.

I awaken from my reverie,
as conkers fall at my feet, cracking their spiky shells.
A ray of light breaks from a canopy of leaves,
reflecting upon my face - I begin to a smile.

I can't recall when my bubble floated away,
but, I embrace the rain and what it brings.
I accept what the winds take with them,
because I can feel the warmth of the sun.

Become the gardener of your own life.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: spiky, analogy, childhood, growth,
Form: Free verse

Crushed

Look past
the faded little girl    braids and bows 
in a       polaroid picture
buttery yellow skirt 
curtsying     a smile
frog prince 
imprisoned      in her palm
under a creamy pound cake     sun 
(her grandmother’s recipe
sugar and spice folded carefully
with love and guilt
into a    thick summer sky)

daisies    like polka dots
piecemeal    on her bonnet
seem to stare       down
her face        with jaundice eyes
slanted above    ensnaring weeds 
swirls of sorrow    linger
 in knee-high field
where flowers grew wild         like 
freedom once felt

Look closer   picture fading
She         is running
legs bent      shouting from the page
stockings          peeled off
lanky legs    running
through                     her pain
till her heart        detaches
from a barefoot soul  
She still feels    spiky burs      in her heels
drops of            blood  
 zigzag               numb
beyond the treeline
memories   meld 
love and loss 
euphoric rush    warm winds fuel
an urgency         her creation
until lightning strikes
her grief   rushing to catch up  

through crushed wildflowers
fragmented patterns
under paths        at her feet
tears flooded       her field overgrown
She remembers   to forget
                Her mother
       buried         under 
        a distant willow      

She was taught 
by her grandmother
to be composed     
poised      like other girls
wad up      unpleasant feelings
slip them into    a corner 
of the cedar chest
under layers 
of afghans and quilts     
she     laid them to rest
long ago      but
never stopped
 her fidgety legs         from weaving 
through        floral tapestries
of field and meadow
wild brush turned emerald green      
in mourning

Her daddy passed away
ten years ago    today
He was buried       with wildflowers
tucked softly 
in his     lapel           and praying hands
he always said       windswept blooms
reminded him        of his girls

If you look closely     at the picture
of that faded little girl        
you will see her running
     from the graves 
         as the wildflowers crush
              beneath her feet
Categories: spiky, daughter, death, family, memory,
Form: Free verse

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From My Diary: Nature

Santa Barbara, Summer 2017

Monday
I walked on the bluffs above the sea.
Orange poppies bloom in the dunes.
I discovered
the labyrinth:
smooth stones spell the path.
Peaceful pilgrimage.

Tuesday
Walked on the beach and smelled:
Tar from the oil seeps,
fennel,
coastal sage,
eucalyptus.
And, of course, the sea.

Wednesday
Hiked in the foothills.
The grass is brittle and yellow; 
the land sizzles.
Spiky shrubs,  spiny scrub oak.
The chaparral is ready
to burst into flames.

Thursday
The eucalyptus trees 
on Ellwood Mesa
are dying
from the drought.
Where will the butterfly sleep?

Friday
The sandpipers
hurry to the surf, neck forward, 
to peck with long bills.
They scurry inland before the next wave
as if they are afraid
to get their feet wet.
Snowy plovers skitter
like cotton balls on wheels.

Saturday
The infinite ocean
under an infinite sky.
A white S among the reeds,
the egret can teach me
poise and patience.

Sunday
Found a piece of seaglass.
Translucent blue,
The edges smooth
Worn by water,
Sanded down.
Beauty from adversity.
I think I will write a poem about it.


November 1, 2017
For contest: From my Diary
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Categories: spiky, nature, sea,
Form: Free verse

December

Silver haired, the year
rests in the field.
Crows gather
on the sycamore bones.
The day is like glass.
Winter lurks
in the shadows.

In brittle glades,
papery pods protect
the last seeds.
Spiky coneflowers stand tall;
the goldfinches had their harvest.
Everywhere signs
of a cycle
fulfilled.

December 24, 2017
Categories: spiky, nature, winter,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Lost, Found, and Now Just Missing

Going through some old things that just had to go,
I came upon something that nearly got tossed.
Memories came to me from long ago. . . . 
I thrilled that my treasure was no longer lost.

Toys come and toys go. In the 60’s, one fad
was to own an odd doll not seen much today.
This doll had long hair and was scantily clad
but wasn’t a Barbie with which I would play!

Its body was squat and it had a pug nose.
I probably loved it because it looked droll.
Its hair could be orange, green, yellow or rose,
but if you don’t know yet, that doll was a troll!

How I wish I could dredge up some memory
to know what was happening inside my head
as a pre-teen with friends and what it might be
that we did with those dolls and what fun things we said!

The trolls that I owned must have been at least four -
both sexes so they'd make a small family -
their hair different hues, each a doll to adore.
But one day they no longer mattered to me. . .  

I can’t say where all of my playthings got stashed.
When I left for college, they vanished from view.
But knowing my mom, they must have got trashed.
She doesn’t hang on much to things like I do.

Now four decades later, I looked at my prize,
bare naked and smudged but its hair still jet black.
It stared up at me with its cute amber eyes.
I couldn’t believe how I got that thing back!

It somehow had ended up in my new state.
Good luck for that troll, I throw few things away!
That doll would be learning soon of its new fate
and meet other troll dolls with whom it would stay.

Just like Peter Pan, I refuse to grow old,
and new trolls I’d bought with long bright spiky hair
when troll dolls again in the 90's were sold!
But I had to recall where I’d  stored them….. oh, where??

(I found the dolls and added the old one to the new collection,
but my daughter's family moved in with me a few months ago.
My daughter is a clean freak like MY mom is (apparently it skips
a generation or something), and my daughter took my troll dolls
and put them out of sight somewhere so currently they are floating
around who knows where!

For Paula Swanson's "Yard Sale" Contest
Categories: spiky, nostalgia, hair, daughter, me,
Form: Quatrain


The Girl Who Ate the National Park

Today I present an old poem, written at least a decade before "Doubts". What this poem lacks in poetic format, and style, it reaps in sentiment.
Enjoy:

the Girl Who Ate the National Park

I was picking apples, from polystyrene
boxes, when she held aloft a spiky
green football and her excited voice
asked, “What do you call this?”
She named it durian. I didn’t know,
and pulled a lettuce from its packing.
Harvested multigrain rolls
from bakery bins, and hunted
sandwich ham from fridges.

I laid our picnic mat down
amongst market gardens, and planted myself
to grow in her company. Uncorked
a shiraz in a vineyard, and savoured
her smile. Pulled an apricot from the cooler,
in an orchard, and hungrily
consumed her words.

She took to the park's paths
like shopping aisles. Selecting ingredients
for a salad from green foliage shelves.
She chose a duck dish
as it flew above us, and decided on a fish,
as we watched it swim
beneath the waterfall.
Then as we left, she created a desert
from the trees.

Her touch stopped me. Rooted
me to the spot, where we ravenously
embraced. Our feelings blossoming
around us. Forming a canopy
which we took shelter under,
and bore fruit, that we ate together.
Our appetites sated.
Categories: spiky, love,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member The When and Where of Some Verbs of Life

When we are walking…
and we’re stepping on a spiky ground,
Walk lightly without looking down or turning around;
Ahead of us always awaits the finest sand 
where we can lay down and laze in the sun.

When we are climbing…
and we’re going to climb a scree,
Dodge those stones that roll down on us freely;
And if we feel disdain and in vain,
remember that we’re unique, with special knacks and strength.

When we’re swimming…
and we’re swimming on distraught of morass counts,
keep dancing the minuet of life in mellow sounds;
When sable clouds and torrents of rain teem down too,
swim at our best stoke, on those clouds we’ll always float and glow.

When we are loving…
and we’re loving too much from the heart,
It hurts, but Cupid also heals wound with his magic dart;
Keep on loving others, never stifle and give up
Love is a berth of comfort, a precious gift, a great reward.

When we are standing…
and we’re lashed by cataclysm that mangled our heart,
Cling to the Lord, He will restore everything from the start;
He will reshape whatever was deformed
And make us stand straight, a forever cypress amidst the storm.



   
Dec. 9,2014   10.50pm

©2014Leonora Galinta
All Rights Reserved



-I hope this humble poem of mine can inspire or uplift. God bless! This was not entered in a contest because it’s too late but it’s ok with me.
© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: spiky, inspirational, uplifting,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Iguana -- But Not In a Blizzard

The iguana is certainly a popular lizard
To figure out why doesn't take a wizard

With that spiky mane curving down its back
It looks like a stegosaurus who went off track

I myself prefer pterodactyls to lizards
To guide me home when lost in a blizzard
Categories: spiky, animal, bird, flying, storm,
Form: Rhyme

I Potted Up a Plant

I potted up a plant, with love, for you;
Although I fear it could turn out a weed:
I’ll have to stick a flower on with glue...

It wasn’t something that I really do,
But when I found a bird’s discarded seed,
I potted up a plant, with love, for you.

I could present you with a species new!
Perhaps  I’ve got a tree or bush or reed...
I’ll have to stick a flower on with glue.

I cried the day you said our love was through;
It’s sad you say I am not what you need.
I potted up a plant, with love, for you.

I left and didn’t know what else to do...
They say that flowers help with love; indeed,
I’ll have to stick a flower on with glue.

It’s growing huge with spiky leaves of blue;
I gave it whisky, lots of chicken feed;
I potted up a plant, with love, for you;
I’ll have to stick a flower on with glue. 

written 12th June for 'Villanelle me a flower' contest
© Jack Horne  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: spiky, garden,
Form: Villanelle

Premium Member Roses

The Rose is the ultimate floral Queen!
A radiant beauty. Colourful blooms.
A feature of any idyllic scene.
Some live in gardens, others brighten rooms.

Delicate. Precious to the beholder.
A symbol of affection in romance.
Nestled in a lapel 'neath a shoulder
For a wedding, a funeral, a dance.

Appreciate their glory. Sing their song!
A sweet aroma have some, others none.
Don't take them for granted. They don't stay long.
Suddenly they season out and are gone!

Spiky leaves and petals tender,
Grace our vision with their splendor. 


Written 17th September 2022
(My first Sonnet)
Categories: spiky, appreciation, rose,
Form: Sonnet

The Little Pieces

All the little pieces
Shards of broken flutes and ripped flowers
Of handcuffed hours
Of burning showers
That had gnawed at the soul
Hammering and thrashing the whole
Into pieces of pangs pathos and spasm
Chasm in psyche
Cactus spiky
Time teeming with tattered twigs
In battered towers and disheveled churches
Leaving the life in lurch
A meaningless mangled moon

But it is time that prevails
Time ultimately treats tempers and mitigates
Its hurts and traumas
Life lightens liberates loves and lures
Loosens the soul to listen to
The deep blue music of life
Swapping the sores for the humming beehive
And lo
Now there flows the river
Boats with their swollen sails
Holding the wind from those broken pieces
Wrinkles and creases
Releasing them in crimson emotions
Into the wind and ocean
Palm holding dew
I love you
________________________________________
22/9/2016
For All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest sponsored by Broken Wings
Categories: spiky, anxiety, beauty, emotions, image,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Imperfect Perfection OCD -SHM

In pursuit of imperfect perfection,
she slowly turned every lucky star blind,
drowning in constant chores from obsession, 
unable to appease her stormy mind.

Promises ascend against perception, 
nothing halts fixed rituals from spinning,
as turmoils of time twirl through aggression, 
she sees the devilish mantra winning. 

What is left when breathing becomes a pain?
whilst malignant fears urge for reliance, 
spiky succulents perish faith in vain
frantically panicking in silence. 

day bleeds into repetitive debate—
Emotive wildfires stir despair and hate.



emotive wildfires
appease her stormy mind blind
stir despair and hate


breathing becomes a pain~in the pursuit of imperfect perfection
Categories: spiky, mental health,
Form: Sonnet

How Are You Feeling I

How Are You Feeling? I

I feel yellow to-day.
I feel as playful as a child’s “Do you like butter?”
	amid a field of yellow, waving buttercups.
I feel as naughty as the spiky haired, boldly invading	
	dandelion’s yellow head, nodding cheekily in the yard.
I feel as pucker up and kiss me as the tart and 
	tangy lemon’s yellow juices promising to quench my thirst. 
I feel as brilliant as a sunbeam shining everywhere at once
	without casting the faintest shadow.
Yes, I feel yellow to-day!
© Susan Linn  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: spiky, feelings, joy, yellow,
Form: Free verse

Rising Sun

In the winter morning
Diamond fogs play on spiky grasses.
The rising sun is my friend then.

Not pigeons but crows flying on this town
In winter, the feathers are crystal black.
Then cawing is my morning song.

Town streets of dawn are not alone.
Female garments workers are busy.
Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers

My country is my pride for the hard workers.
This world is my heaven for welfare inventions.
The winter helps me to see the rising sun of life.


-20.12.2020 Chattogram
Categories: spiky, work,
Form: Free verse
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