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The Little Pieces

All the little pieces Shards of broken flutes and ripped flowers Of handcuffed hours Of burning showers That had gnawed at the soul Hammering and thrashing the whole Into pieces of pangs pathos and spasm Chasm in psyche Cactus spiky Time teeming with tattered twigs In battered towers and disheveled churches Leaving the life in lurch A meaningless mangled moon But it is time that prevails Time ultimately treats tempers and mitigates Its hurts and traumas Life lightens liberates loves and lures Loosens the soul to listen to The deep blue music of life Swapping the sores for the humming beehive And lo Now there flows the river Boats with their swollen sails Holding the wind from those broken pieces Wrinkles and creases Releasing them in crimson emotions Into the wind and ocean Palm holding dew I love you ________________________________________ 22/9/2016 For All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 10/19/2016 12:00:00 PM
The way you tear at the veneer of the seen world to expose what lies beneath is truly amazing. Love it!!!
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Date: 9/23/2016 5:57:00 AM
An amazingly beautiful and sensitive poem dear Probir! Certainly a seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/23/2016 5:43:00 AM
Such vivid imagery which make it alive. Beautiful. :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2016 7:27:00 AM
These appreciations of yours and others are indeed rewarding Sunita ...
Date: 9/23/2016 12:34:00 AM
Boats with their swollen sails You have a touching way with words my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2016 5:40:00 AM
Thank you for the appreciation ...
Date: 9/22/2016 9:49:00 AM
This is excellent Probir. Maybe the best I've read. A7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel

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