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Rising Sun

In the winter morning Diamond fogs play on spiky grasses. The rising sun is my friend then. Not pigeons but crows flying on this town In winter, the feathers are crystal black. Then cawing is my morning song. Town streets of dawn are not alone. Female garments workers are busy. Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers My country is my pride for the hard workers. This world is my heaven for welfare inventions. The winter helps me to see the rising sun of life. -20.12.2020 Chattogram

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Date: 1/2/2021 4:36:00 AM
"Female garments workers are busy. Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers" - this describes them so well!
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Date: 12/22/2020 8:33:00 AM
I really liked your tone and pace in this poem. It is also full of vivid pieces of imagery and tightly conceived. I am the better for having read it.
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Date: 12/21/2020 7:57:00 AM
Mahtab, Enjoyed this Rising Sun, and birds in morning song. For love of kin and country, you really can't go wrong. -Richard
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Date: 12/20/2020 10:58:00 PM
Excellent MaHtab. Paints a clear picture, You pen so well .pangie MADE IT A FAV
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