Rising Sun

In the winter morning
Diamond fogs play on spiky grasses.
The rising sun is my friend then.

Not pigeons but crows flying on this town
In winter, the feathers are crystal black.
Then cawing is my morning song.

Town streets of dawn are not alone.
Female garments workers are busy.
Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers

My country is my pride for the hard workers.
This world is my heaven for welfare inventions.
The winter helps me to see the rising sun of life.


-20.12.2020 Chattogram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 4:36 AM
"Female garments workers are busy. Like the butterflies after blooming fresh flowers" - this describes them so well!
Levasseur Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 8:33 AM
I really liked your tone and pace in this poem. It is also full of vivid pieces of imagery and tightly conceived. I am the better for having read it.
Theraven Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Mahtab, Enjoyed this Rising Sun, and birds in morning song. For love of kin and country, you really can't go wrong. -Richard
Romios Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Excellent MaHtab. Paints a clear picture, You pen so well .pangie MADE IT A FAV
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