December

Silver haired, the year
rests in the field.
Crows gather
on the sycamore bones.
The day is like glass.
Winter lurks
in the shadows.

In brittle glades,
papery pods protect
the last seeds.
Spiky coneflowers stand tall;
the goldfinches had their harvest.
Everywhere signs
of a cycle
fulfilled.

December 24, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Beautiful imagery, Agnes.
Camacho Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:14 AM
A slice of life ,Breathtaking..love it thanks tonytocaa
DiMino Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful work, Agnes; I truly became apart of the experience as I read this gorgeous poem. Really outstanding writing!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 10:00 AM
I like the way you wrote this poem.I can see this scenery as I read your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.
Inman Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 6:19 AM
A wonderfully emotive metaphorical write Agnes.
Fleming Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 12:03 PM
I was convinced that I had already commented on this little gem of yours, Agnes...but no, I was wrong. Love this - It is just perfect! My warmest regards this chilly January evening. Cheers, Agnes! :) john
Krampe Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Thank you for your kind words, John.
Wood Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 5:08 PM
My goodness Agnes this is beautiful. Masterfully done. I hope you have a great new year. Dean
Krampe Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Dean - a good new year to you, too.
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Wonderfully crafted. Congrats on your win, Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Line.
Breedt Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 4:56 AM
Hi Agnes, great metaphors and an ending to be desired. Congratulations. So well achieved.
Krampe Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Jannie.
Haskins Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Beautiful reminder of the changing seasons, sensitively written, descriptive writing.
Krampe Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Thank you for your visit and your kind words, Sheila.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 5:42 AM
This poem is lovely Agnes! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : )
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:17 PM
lovely imagery , Agnes, congratulations on POTD Eve
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Williams Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Congratulations of POTD honors on your wonderful poem Agnes....Maria
Krampe Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thank you, Maria.
Ashley Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Returning again Agnes :) with congratulations for POTD honors for this wondrous and stunning poem. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Downing  Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful POTD, Ms Agnes... hugs and smiles :)
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Akkina :)
S     Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Beautiful close of the year write Agnes. Congratulations on POTD!!! ~ Judy
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Thank you for your visit, Judith.
Kannan Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Beautiful imagery and congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Loved it...
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, Supraja.
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:20 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:42 AM
A Kermit the frog-esque "YAAAAY!" <3
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thanks, Maureen :)
Lawless Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:32 AM
and spring a bottle fed dream on December's knee. Love that opening line Agnes...a vivid picture.
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, John.
Michael Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Yes, silver-haired the year rest in the field...Nice opening line... Lovely Agnes...All the best for a golden year ahead
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Arturo. All the best for you, too.
Pandit Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Returning with congrats on POTD for your outstanding poem, Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
One Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Lovely choice for POTD Agnes...
Krampe Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Canerdy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved win, Agnes! Janice
Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 12:53 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Agnes :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Merry Christmas to you, too.
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