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Adrift In the Midst of Gladness and Sadness

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Walking upon silent parched paths, under speechless scarlet skies. Your name sits upon the tip of my tongue, listening to the susurration of my heart. Each vibration echoes tones of lament, conflicted by the principles of time. Adrift in the midst of gladness and sadness, in a plot without a twist, lost in blackness and slackness, through turbulent trials, I yearn for you to return. Distance remains an unknown intangible pain, but visions of your timid cute brown eyes remain. How your mouthwatering scent seduced senses. How your luscious lips dissolved all walled defences. Now I yearn for queen of my heart to re-appear, to sleep in each others arms, into the new year. Adrift in the midst of gladness and sadness, in a plot without a twist, lost in blackness and slackness, through turbulent trials, I yearn for you to return. Without you the mind is misplaced in marshlands, where intimacy is lost to complex riddles called life. Under cold ebony skies, your memories flicker like candlelight, you are the flame, which insulates my heart with devotional delight.
Silent One 26 December 2019 Wanted to experiment with a mix free verse and rhyme. After contemplating calling it a free verse or rhyme, I settled for lyric. Maybe an idea for a contest.

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Date: 5/31/2020 9:56:00 AM
Nice Poem..
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Date: 3/3/2020 3:05:00 AM
All Brilliants & Diamonds to You and to your verses!.. :)
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Date: 1/21/2020 10:21:00 PM
' a flame that insulates' wowww! I like to combine freeverse and rhyming so this was a delight to read. My favourite line was with ' walled defences ' and how you rhymed everything was superb as well as the super refrain. Kudos and congrats on a well deserved Poem of the day honour!
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Date: 1/21/2020 11:09:00 AM
You created a magnificent write, Silent One.. I absolutely enjoyed this.. I literally got lost in your write, my friend.. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 1/11/2020 3:07:00 PM
love this! I am sorry I didn't see it before. I love mixing rhyme and free verse. It flows so beautifully. You wrote with such ease - great poem dear SO, have a great night..blessings and hugs x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/9/2020 5:09:00 PM
That was structurally beautiful, well written, and the kind of work every gal wants to be the star of. Bravo. Love it
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Date: 1/5/2020 11:37:00 PM
Silent, and a beautiful lyric poem it is too, loved it and the image and music too, well done, A FAV _ Constance
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Date: 1/3/2020 12:19:00 AM
Excellent presentation. God bless you.
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Date: 1/2/2020 1:56:00 PM
So much yearning in this beautiful poem .Wowzer
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 1/1/2020 12:59:00 PM
You sniffed many a rose on this one Silent; love how you subtlely mention her 'timid cute brown eyes...' And ...'insulates my heart..' Happy new year brother;-)
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:17:00 PM
There is only one rose for me my fiend.... Happy new yeare my brother..
Date: 12/30/2019 9:41:00 AM
WoW! Silent, I got lost in this write. I didn't mind lingering on this well written piece. The mixture of free verse and worked well together. I think you're on to something, this would be a great idea for a contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, still contemplating if i will do one... thank you..
Date: 12/29/2019 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Happy New Year 2020..........
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you.. Happy new year..
Date: 12/29/2019 8:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/29/2019 6:18:00 AM
definitely a great idea for a contest, I love the repeated lines, It does nicely as lyrically correct. xo
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Silent One
Date: 1/2/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/28/2019 8:10:00 PM
Very nicely done, Silent One. Very effective piece of writing! Congrats on POTD!
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Silent One
Date: 12/29/2019 6:09:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/28/2019 4:14:00 PM
Excellent structure and congrats on the POTD Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 12/29/2019 6:09:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/28/2019 9:49:00 AM
Back with Congratulations for POTD Silent One - blessings, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2019 9:51:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/28/2019 6:25:00 AM
like poetul care simte mult :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 12/28/2019 6:24:00 AM
like poetul care simte mult :)
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Date: 12/28/2019 6:25:00 AM
Date: 12/28/2019 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Just figured this out.
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thanks Caren...
Date: 12/27/2019 10:32:00 PM
Should have known this gem would make POTD. Congratulations Si....Maria Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thanks Maria..
Date: 12/27/2019 1:34:00 PM
this is beautiful... the slight rhyme mingled in the refrain works well with your free verse... love this...congratulations on potd :) hugs
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Sandra..
Date: 12/27/2019 1:23:00 PM
Lingering in sadness, a tender ache. You wrap around these moments and emotions with ease. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Brandy..
Date: 12/27/2019 12:33:00 PM
I'm yet to understand all the names used to describe a type of poetry... A yearning love is your poem...Congratulation Silent One on POTD...
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:10:00 PM
I didnt know any forms before i joined here.. just poetry... thanks Arturo..
Date: 12/27/2019 11:32:00 AM
- A wonderful cocktail ... congratulations on your p.ot.d., SO. :) - hugs // Anne-ise :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you.. shaken bu not stirred... lol
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