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Best Painstaking Poems

Below are the all-time best Painstaking poems written by Poets on PoetrySoup. These top poems in list format are the best examples of painstaking poems written by PoetrySoup members


Painstaking Views
A child's view:

"Why did you leave us dear mom and dad?"
"Did we do something to make you mad?"

Tears on our faces, as we see you...

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Categories: painstaking, emotions, life, pain,
Form: Rhyme



This Was Me
it began so innocently
we exchanged ideas on poetry
his art, the suffering he endured
he preyed upon my compassion
as he meticulously bided his time...

i felt safe as...

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© Lynn Marie  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, angst, confusion, introspection, life,
Form: Narrative
Fireflies
It's so dark outside, my eyes can't distinguish where sand meets water. Somehow, dusk has come and gone, plunging the evening into darkness. 
 
But...

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Categories: painstaking, love, nature, me, light,
Form: Haibun
Premium Member The Death of a Poet
I read my obituary
Accolades run afoul to lighten the souls of the living
Trite clichés, forgotten kin, melodic tributes
Boring and meaningless

Upon a granite stone etched for...

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© Jim Hirtle  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, death, poets,
Form: Free verse
Our Colour of Yellow
The lake was still sleeping
a light mist rose above,
a weathered dock could be seen,
its aged wood; full of memories.

The air crisp, breeze light,
trees majestic; watching...

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© Lynn Marie  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, happiness, inspirational, love, me,
Form: Free verse



Premium Member Seduction's Abduction
I begin as a covet, dulcet demure
pure in play, unbound to a dogma or tablature, a luscious lure,
I find that nerve of passion's verve nestled...

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Categories: painstaking, desire, lust, passion, spiritual,
Form: Epic
Beauty At Its Best
Faith is like a flower that grows fervently 
Love is like a rose that glimmers majestically
It's like a tender dove that flies so beautifully,
For it...

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Categories: painstaking, beautiful, blessing, deep, desire,
Form: Free verse
Sing, Goddess
Sing, O Goddess, of my petulant wrath.
That which I’ve failed to address for so long.
Speak and guide my hand to express
The words of extremity needed...

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© Samuel Lee  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, art, beauty, blessing, for
Form: Classicism
The Kitchen Not the Cake
There’s cheap lunches in the Barley Tavern,
each Wednesday, when after one o’clock.
I always chose to eat beer battered fish,
plus mystery cake a little bit ad...

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Categories: painstaking, humor,
Form: Rhyme
The Prose of My Broken Parts
Intristically woven and intensely painful this agony is raging in (angers unleashing) quietly depressing. She took apart the left over pieces of her heart that...

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Categories: painstaking, abuse, courage, identity,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member My Hugs Story
Before… I beheld her quivering, shirking---
suffocation gripped her with my envelopment;
breaking free from the gentleness I exuded
she would scamper wailing…
as if scorched by my belongingness’...

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Categories: painstaking, blessing, christian, encouraging, faith,
Form: Personification
The Village On the Water Iv
Thump-thump of stiffening fish contorting
   In the bilge beneath the gunwale; 
 Lidless, bulging, reddened eyes, swivelling upwards, 
Protruding horribly from the straining...

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Categories: painstaking, appreciation, culture, dedication,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Irreconcilable Paradox
Leaderboard paradox
Bard, crank or chatterbox
Irreconcilable
Most undeniable
Two titles possible?
Can't have all three

Flourish and elegance
Meter and relevance
Grasp of the elements
Sensitive delicate
Post the best poetry
For all to see

Building...

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© Jeff Kyser  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, community,
Form: McWhirtle
Cleanse Me With Your Truth
Cleanse me, oh Lord of righteousness
Mend me, oh God of saving graciousness
Believe in me, so I can fly into your cage
Reflect on me, so I...

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Categories: painstaking, encouraging, faith, grief,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member With Each Morning
Each morning dawn brushes paint across the sky,
pastel colors to herald the rise of sun's golden eye.
He warms the earth. Dew's moisture he'll dry
before the...

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© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: painstaking, hope, sun,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Shattered Sighs