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The Death of a Poet

I read my obituary Accolades run afoul to lighten the souls of the living Trite clichés, forgotten kin, melodic tributes Boring and meaningless Upon a granite stone etched for an eternity I was but a ‘A faithful husband,’ ‘A good father,’ And ‘Never Forgotten’ They have it all wrong If they had read my sonnets Mystical offspring scribbled on napkins Consuming stale coffee in late night diners lit by neon lights They would have known Had they paid heed to my limericks Nonsensical rhymes of fairytale fantasies And polka-dotted panties created to amuse only me They would have known Had they inhaled my free verse Painstaking hours spent Creating worlds of exquisite harmony Carrying the reader on endless voyages Guided by the inspired lyricist through emerald forests Royal seas, white-capped mountains And never-ending dreams They would have known Had they met my only mistress One called Haiku A quiet damsel Her beauty lies in brevity and endless seasons They would have known More than a husband More than a father More than forgotten I am a poet I read my obituary I should have known

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Date: 6/15/2021 9:50:00 AM
Great job, Jim. I love this. Blessings.
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Date: 6/8/2021 9:23:00 AM
Jim, this is very clever! I love your theme here. We never make money being a poet, but we would sure appreciate a little kudos... and yes, from family and friends, at least! Thank God, my son is proud of me that I'm a poet.
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:30:00 PM
Very nice lines of reflection... I should have known that life is much richer with wor(l)d economy called poetry...
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Date: 6/7/2021 5:59:00 PM
Very nice. Keep writing, and we'll all keep writing, hoping others notice.
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Date: 6/7/2021 2:22:00 PM
You’ve foretold my future.. Said with such understanding. We’re on the same track my friend.
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Date: 6/7/2021 1:13:00 PM
ONE! my fellow poet, Jim. More the reason for us to continue to pen the birthing creations from our pregnant poetic minds. Poets die; their words live on! Remember, only the worker dies; the work goes on. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe (aka, M'Lowe)
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Date: 6/7/2021 10:41:00 AM
Exhalent !!! Captures one's essence, seldom seen of one's life by onlookers or passers by .
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Date: 4/30/2021 1:16:00 PM
Bravo, Jim ! Totally delightful. Congrats on your POTD ~
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Date: 4/27/2021 6:18:00 PM
hahahaha.. So so so cool. And I am not surprised this earned you a POTD.. Your first verse intensified my curiosity, just to see how more faithful you are to your poetry... Hahahaha, the poem flows well, the concept is brilliant. Weldone.
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Date: 4/23/2021 11:58:00 PM
Jim Hello, we haven't communicated much maybe not at all but I had to read this because it tickled my fancy - it made my day, sad, but oh so true what you say - first and foremost a poet must loves all his family with his heart soul and poetic mind. But it would be great if it was mentioned what great poetry you wrote also. Congratulations on POTD my friend Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/24/2021 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer.
Date: 4/21/2021 9:17:00 PM
Sorry I am so late sending you my heartiest congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hello Jim Hirtle, When a poet passes i would think that his or hers poems would be famous. Enjoy your day my frend.
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Date: 4/21/2021 5:37:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Jim. Great poem. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/20/2021 6:14:00 PM
Back to say Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/20/2021 4:45:00 PM
Wonderful...Congrats on this POTD.
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:31:00 PM
This is wonderful! You speak for all of us. And so eloquently. Thank you. I'm keeping this poem close. Congrats. It is definitely a poem of the day!
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/20/2021 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Ann
Date: 4/20/2021 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Jim, wonderfully penned!
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Date: 4/20/2021 11:39:00 AM
~ They "should" have known, *I am a poet* ~ Of course you are, and all of the above. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/20/2021 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and thought provoking comments, Brandy Nicole.
Date: 4/20/2021 10:45:00 AM
Jim, congratulations on receiving this deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, your poem touched my heart deeply as my family seldom read my poetry and thus do not know the poet in me, A FAV for me, love _Constance
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/20/2021 4:10:00 PM
Here's to the day when families say "I knew her when..."
Date: 4/20/2021 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 4/20/2021 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd win. A creative story/write. "I love it." I also love your line, "They would have known" Yes, I am a poet. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/20/2021 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 4/20/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 4/20/2021 8:13:00 AM
Great muse, Jim! Congrats on POTD
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Date: 4/20/2021 7:43:00 AM
I simply loved your poem. A favourite for me. Congratulations on your potd. Enjoy the honour. Take care Rama
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Date: 4/20/2021 7:38:00 AM
"Don't confront me with my failures, I have not forgotten them" said a living poet named Browne. Your POTD was introprospective for me. Thank you.
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Date: 4/20/2021 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations for having this fine write selected as poem of the day.
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