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My Hugs Story

Before… I beheld her quivering, shirking--- suffocation gripped her with my envelopment; breaking free from the gentleness I exuded she would scamper wailing… as if scorched by my belongingness’ warmth. After painstaking therapeutic sessions offering my compassion-propelled embrace I witnessed her, gradually yielding to me succumbing to my love-blest invitation… devoid of resistance. Graciously overcoming grievous traumatic hug-pressure she confessed that she’s healed from domestic violence, by the mercy of God*… Who rescued her against lustful and incestuous hugs. Now… with serenity's bliss she’s cheerfully reaching out to others letting them feel kindness-driven hugs sealed by care, concern, and comfort... precious blessings of earnest bonding.
*Psalm 52:8 ... I trust in the mercy of God for ever and ever. June 6, 2020 8th place, "Hugs" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish; judged on 6/14/2020.

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Date: 6/17/2020 1:37:00 AM
Such a soothing, heartfelt and powerful expression of transformation of reviving strength and compassion. Congratulations on your win Beata :)
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Date: 6/15/2020 10:44:00 AM
i have a huge lump in my throat beata, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:12:00 PM
Beata, A kind heart shines in this poem, and too a kind deed. "Before they call I will answer; while they are still speaking I will hear. The wolf and the lamb will feed together, and the lion will eat straw like the ox, and dust will be the serpent’s food. They will neither harm nor destroy on all my holy mountain, says the Lord."- Isaiah 65:25
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:42:00 AM
This makes me cry. Thank you so mucn Ms. B. To God be the Glory
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