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Seduction's Abduction

I begin as a covet, dulcet demure pure in play, unbound to a dogma or tablature, a luscious lure, I find that nerve of passion's verve nestled 'neath narcissistic comfiture a covey of tingles taunting the ambition you serve, swift and swill I swerve, in you I introduce a tempo of truth trailing a kiss along your spine's curve a persuasion of perversion purring patiently in almighty allure, reaching your pinnacle pulse I assure, Entwining myself around your libido with nibbling nurture binding you to the alter of painstaking pleasure I relieve with analgesic swelter hoodwinking your will with a delicate dominance I am the prima donna capture, embellishing the envisage of eros, I burnish organs keen with aphrodisiac welter you become a devout captive to me, the divine dominator, I am the matador confronting your impulsive power the target of your sexual tremor, spear tipped with warm vigor into you I pound a wonder, vice and virtue surrender to principle superior in passionate plunder, for you become the conquer's lover, taking my spirit from specter to flesh victor, I will make a woman the vessel of volcanic velvet, revolutionize female thighs, simmering the sighs in eyes, make the wrap of a man's arms a hearth of healing heat soul felt, his tongue a torch pinging with paced pause within mouths magnetized, A coup de tat taken to your Shangrila, weaknesses my wayfaring, strengths the servants of my junta my sweet magic of mayhem laid upon your lithesome lips, the coup de grace - J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2014 3:04:00 AM
Had to read one of your writes today, Justin. It is a hard day for me. I'm weary and tired. I need to read something that is beyond reality and full of extremes of passion. Your work...your words always fit that bill...that need. Lovely.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/29/2014 5:47:00 PM
To be the nurture of your need, the seduction that warms your vitals and stretches the parameters of reality's potential is a purpose that excites me in every way Eileen. My spirit is within your touch. J.A.B.
Date: 11/20/2014 12:49:00 PM
oh my! Your words are addicting! I just can't stop reading! My heart is beating so fast. Thank you for sharing!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/22/2014 1:04:00 PM
Seduction speeds the heart as it awakens the libido to realize a new goal Megan. Feeling and seeing language in new ways becomes an addiction for creative minds. Thank you for sharing your heartbeat...J.A.B.
Date: 10/23/2014 1:11:00 AM
It takes an unselfish and loving man to be able to travel deep into a woman's heart, and discover how he can truly please her.... This is written from a very unique, and almost inhuman perspective. It is like a personification of passion itself. Amazing poem, Justin!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/25/2014 3:27:00 PM
You see so much Kelly, feel so deeply with a heart that tolls for the essence of acute love. Your response is so passionate Kelly...J.A.B.
Date: 10/21/2014 1:50:00 PM
Trailing a kiss along your spine's curve..That is passion..This is indeed sensual ,wild and yet classic.Going to my favourites : )
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2014 8:44:00 PM
Invasive temptation is the rivet of this kiss Charma. I'm thankful that a Master Poetess sees and feels the wild and classic touch in my work, thanks Charma...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 8:17:00 PM
Maybe I am over analyzing the entire piece, but I got a lot out of it today. Thank you for sharing your work with us Justin. This particular piece is brilliant. I think we can find both sweet and sour seducers in ourselves and especially in others...even in nations, galaxies, and fantasies. LOVE this. I am faving it (: Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2014 8:35:00 PM
You can overanalyze me anytime Laura, although I know your mind is thorough and your heart supple, and your keen sight see the broad spectrum of seduction's charm and self interest. Beautiful evaluation once again Poetess...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 8:14:00 PM
Who could resist such seduction, I have yet to understand. I see two egos enhanced in this full product of sensuality, fantasy, and even physicality. Anyhow the imagery is utterly fantastic, which is not a surprise from you. That third stanza is so confident in nature as well as assuring, and the poetic elements within that small stanza are quite phenomenal. I love that entire stanza... and then you have the ending stanza..in this love act, weakness are explored and strengths are served.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2014 8:29:00 PM
We can be the benefactor of seduction, and possibly it's casualty Laura...seduction and its accompaning rewards and risk command a high price. You are fascinated, not intimidated by seduction Laura...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 8:08:00 PM
Not only is that line very artistic and luscious..but I think it really adds a unique and believable character to your theme. The second stanza is also just as breathtaking and you show that "delicate dominance" brilliantly, how it takes over mind and body, and how it essentially "hoodwinks" the "will". I also like the last line of that stanza- "taking my spirit from specter to flesh victor" You are transforming someone in this seduction from mental shards of her "Shrangrila" to something real
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:22:00 PM
The specter line is very profound as it expresses the transformation, the take over of seduction in relation to someone's desire, thete is a real, visceral sense of victory communicated in that line. Yes Laura, your intuition is strong, seduction understands you, as you feel it's heated urge. J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 7:59:00 PM
Hm....very interesting one. The first stanza is brilliant in depth and pulsating purpose. I could feel a melody changing in intensity and tempo in this piece throughout. To create unfathomable pleasure and victory, to seduce and uphold... I think one must possess first an open mind, to be as you wrote "unbound to a dogma or tablature, a luscious lure.." I really like the line "a persuasion of perversion purring patiently in almighty allure"
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2014 8:17:00 PM
The line you quote truly encompasses the spirit of seduction Laura. Seduction has no boundries or refrain, and It will actually use boundries of law, morals, culture to advantage. Seduction is a ruthless temptation Laura...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 12:45:00 PM
I read this beautiful write...Several times. I even looked some words up to get the full meaning. I love how you challenge my mind. You are a master when it comes to passion and possession. It is an art...lovemaking. You are well versed in it. Great write. Superb.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2014 1:40:00 PM
We enhance eachother's mastery of divine sensuality Eileen. Our minds revel in pursuit of love art, you excite and challenge me on many levels my sweet Lady. You are a Seductress unrivalled in ability. There is a charming quality of possession in this poem Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2014 3:01:00 AM
PHEW---- awesome poem on passion and seduction Justin. I think I need to go take a cold shower now ;) Enjoyed the innuendo's in the poem that pertain to the lure of the human body.
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Kim van Breda
Date: 10/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
I will heed your advice on how to handle the heat... and yes... it's the ego that needs targeting every time. Try find my poem "DEFROSTING ICE"---I think you may enjoy I ;)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2014 1:25:00 PM
The enticement of ego is the primary target of Seduction, stimulating the reproductive organs to generate hot acquisition and creativity Kim. Shower not in the cold rather in the heat of titillating poetry. So happy you read me Kim...J.A.B.