Best Oxidation Poems


I Got Arrhythmia

I got arrhythmia
With no biz here
Still got my heart
Who could ask for anything more!

This old heart beat 
Got new smart beat
Slow then fast beat 
Who could ask for anything more!

My Oxidation
Has a syncopation
No resuscitation
Hangin’ round my door

With a thrum beat 
Not a dumb beat
Long as some beat
Who could ask for anything more!
 Who could ask for anything more!
Categories: oxidation, allusion, life,
Form: Rhyme

Orange

When I was traveling through a wood
I met the color Orange
Laid out before me, long lost kin
Less on top, more so within 
She was the edges and the movement
She was the still frames and the fire inside
She was large, looming death; and the minuscule flit of life
She was the shadow in the afternoon sun - 
Elongated, exaggerated, full of shape and being
Orange...
Orange is the next octave of vision
TheStillSepiaOfPastAndTheKaleidoscopeOfPossibleFuturesAllOozingAtOnceFromThePoresOfThisPresentMoment!
All that glitters is orange
Through leaves, dappled, she flows 
Down to the rippling water, she knows
How blinding she is to the eye
A thousand dancing mysteries with no reason why
Orange is the world inside out
Where the blue sky burns and silence is a deafening shout
Orange...
In her dominion and her gentle preservation 
Is the double sided mirror through which all my reservations
Are left empty
Without merit
Without cause
All the monstrousness we've made comes to a slow and gentle pause
Orange is the oxidation of my life to come
Showing all that could be done
Or lost
Or imagined
Or destroyed and risen high up from the ashes
Categories: oxidation, creation, light, magic, mystery,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Enjoy It

We were calculating theoretical yields on chemcollective
and somehow we ended up dancing to ”go left.”

We were finding oxidation numbers on labster
but somehow we started laughing.

We were balancing chemical equations on PhET
but now we’re singing “World we created” with hair-bush microphones.

Believe your competence - be impressed with your progress.
Attack every challenge with self-contained ease.
Armor yourself with confidence.
You’ll like the way you enjoy it.

*We started studying for school - weeks in advance of spring term - those names (Chemcollective, PhET, Labster) are tools for working out chemistry equations - like calculating theoretical yields from compounds. So we practice, practice, practice until we can do them blindfolded - or in pressurized situations like tests.
Categories: oxidation, fun, humor, school, student,
Form: Free verse

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Anytime

I comprehend the days when rays do shine and Ra does set 
When inner soul and façade connect, 24 hours in one day gave me breathe, that’s 1,440 
seconds closer to death rather than oxygen left. Aspire to build that dream shape that 
atmosphere, win a Nobel peace prize, become Man of the Year
Build homes in the smog inner city ghettoes, where blocks and countenance of lost souls 
decay and rust, maybe spread poetry and love as well as a monumental philanthropist, 
raise seeds that spread, root, bud fruit, then trees, then yield juice to saturate the Earth 
with only sweet  organic humanity
Turn impossible into “Can it be” then push shriveling raisons of doubt into the fathoms 
of Davie Jones’s locker, to the depths of no man’s land where oxidation and sea level 
pressure crush submarines into aluminum cans, cans where can’t conforms to can, 
starve doubt and feed your faith, slow and steady wins the race, but more than 
anything,, remember without tree-shaking fear, find that passion and equilibrium, killing 
opposition and the antagonizing meniscus, swiftly remember that life through birth is not 
a boomeranging discus, life never comes back so dream, execute, relax and become 
life’s subtle screenplay until the script and its cast wilt into debris of cremated urns 
holding dreams, aspirations, and the well worked remains of me.
Categories: oxidation, inspirationallife, , cute,
Form: Rhyme

Bronze Beauty

Rusted and Busted Contest
Sponsor: Casarah Nance

BRONZE BEAUTY


Blighted inside the eyes of the ones who are blind
Rusted and marred but remarkable in my mind
Obliterated beyond repair, but extreme charm I find
No one can see the potential I see while inclined
Zesty and raggedy with a strange history behind
Exhausted vehicle holding such elegance refined



Bronzed full of memoirs from accounts of transportation
Embarked on a journey since the original assimilation
A standard modern example of weathered oxidation
Utterly surprised from the ol’ days of junkyard compilation
Throughout time scraps become an art of the generation
Yard-fills of old automobiles carry exquisite rustication 



Date Written: June 22, 2016
Categories: oxidation, beautiful, car,
Form: Acrostic

Fermented Spirits

Wine is a mocker, strong drink
is raging: and whosoever is
deceived thereby is not wise
Prov. 20:1

Darkened oxidation
		 changing personality
Liquid fermentation
	altering perception of reality
Look long into the bottle,
you see fire in the water
It burns you as you swallow,
your memory now getting shorter
Release the genie from the lamp,
		set free the jinn from it’s shapely confine
	But you will wish you never did ...
Hyde-and-seek is such a dangerous game
Hiding from the truth,
seeking answers by way of 100-proof
Blackout is a mind-eraser tramp
		Dr. Jekyll prognosis: too much wine at the dine
	Good manners went off the grid, 
mild-mannered you now ain’t the same
Saccharine sweet talk turns into acidic argument
Civilized behavior turns primitive
Fermentation is bubbling ...
		God knows, you wish you could put 
what you just said back in the bottle
Uncorked repressions of guilt and anger
			     agitating anew
Then, just as quickly, a reverse change in attitude
Fungi perversions start growing in you,
carbonizing your thoughts ... propagating strange desires
Corrupt carnal pleasures souring your mind
Fermented spirits,
darkened oxidation
Breathe in the aromatic conversion ... 
intoxicating vapors releasing your inhibitions
A different you comes babbling through
Drink deep the pungent madness ... 
		complex organic compounds
chain reacting into fast acting mental breakdowns
Taste the seething mix of the witches brew ...
Let the liquid serpent sting bite you,
			creating violent excitation
Lustful permutations 
		conceived through
darkened oxidation
Fermented spirits have drunkenly deceived you
Categories: oxidation, religious, spiritual, truth, wisdom,
Form: Free verse


Exotic Electrons

   Exotic Electrons  
Title: Exotic electrons

In the house of atom,
Electron resting at its bottom.
Eager  to pop up and down,
Like a clown.

In the discharge tube, it took its birth,
Photon too assisted it with mirth.
It led to the discovery of X-ray,
A boon to the society, one must say.

Revolving in atomic orbits and its shells,
Are the places where it dwells.
Pairing up with opposite spin,
For magnetons to properly align.

Its addition gives reduction,
Whereas it's removal causes oxidation.
This chemistry leads to electrolysis,
Resulting in battery analysis.

 It's every hop and pop transition emitted light, 
Its excitement  made a spectral line bright.
It's every absorption and emission,
Resulted in a laser invention.

Electroplating, electrochromism and electroluminescence,
Make every one feel my presence.
But it wonders to know it's own scope,
Which  led to  the discovery of electron microscope..

It can be made totally free,
 To wander and spree.
Breaking a  bond, crossing a layer and 
Tunneling in  a barrier,
Makes this charge carrier a Warrior.

Even though it is charged negatively,
Its motion in a  device  works positively.
It's density in a material is significant,
For all transport phenomena to become dominant.

Bit confused about its dual state,
Unaware of what will be its fate.
Decided to be diplomatic,  
Matter and energy became systematic.

There was no doubt a conflict.
But to end up in a begift.
Atomic city made a revolution,
For  progression in science perception.


Author 
Dr Ketaki Patankar
Physicist
Rajaram College
Kolhapur, Maharastra state
India
Categories: oxidation, 12th grade,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Flicked Cigarette

Through the hills within the woods of a mountain's slithering slopes,
A road winds its way, on which rides a car driven by a misanthrope. 

Plucking from his pocket a pack of poison sticks with one hand,
To suck the smoke from a cigarette labeled with his favorite brand.

From the ashes of the cindered cylinder arises an airy sensation,
Which swirls within his head as his body suffers from oxidation.

After deciding with an apathetic puff that he'd had enough tobacco,
He flicked the cigarette through the open window with an apathetic throw.

As he drove he thought of the days to come and of his job and friends he'll see,
With the wind in his hair he happily traveled from nine at night to the morning's three.

He arrived to his destination: his parent's home for a weekend sojourn,
And in his childhood bed he drifted to sleep and awoke at eleven in the morn'.

Laughs with loved ones and home-cooked feasts had continued to unravel,
During this weekend which he ended with yet another nighttime travel.

From the suburbs of the foothills he ascended through to mountain roads,
With popping ears he picked with pinkies, producing several waxy loads.

Onward through the familiar roads which swerve along the curves of rivers,
Which pour from bleeding basins which, to below, their water is delivered. 

Then, as the sun had settled its golden hue upon the wrinkles of the wooded thick,
Darkness spilled atop the forest's feathers to slather its leaves like an oil slick.

A sudden cessation of the leaves' silhouettes had slipped the sight of the distracted man,
Who, while he drove, had been lost in thought of the snacks he'd make in a frying pan.

Then, as the darkness had settled its cimmerian hue upon the naked wooded thick,
Flames spilled atop the forest's feathers which slathered its leaves like a lit oil slick.

Firetrucks battled the fire as the man stopped his car so he could walk,
Towards a volunteer fireman who stood before him to warn of the roadblock.

The man asked the firefighter what had caused the scorching of the trees,
Acres of woods burnt in smoking condensation which made the man begin to wheeze.

The firefighter responded to the man who began to trickle with sweat:
"We believe the fire was started by someone's casually flicked cigarette."
Categories: oxidation, addiction, appreciation, care, mountains,
Form: Couplet

On Mars In Mars

On Mars In Mars

Volcano hollowed sound, echoes in Olympus Mons
Thin atmosphere cratered in ancient crevasses
Storms last three hundred years or more
Etch ancient lines red iron oxidation 
Rocks move from one place to another
As the only life on Mars
Mouths of rivers dry and scarred above
Love is rare.  No air.  Ground tells a story
To be told but somewhat old
Holes fill with water gray and heavy underneath
Keep secrets of the planet
Inside and on the surface
Of things we still can’t understand

1.	(*Olympus Mons is a very large shield volcano on the planet Mars. By one measure, it has a height of nearly 25 km (16 mi). Olympus Mons stands almost three times as tall as Mount Everest's height above sea level)

Created on 7/17/15 for “Subject Mars” Poetry Contest sponsored by: Joe Maverick
Categories: oxidation, adventure, age, environment, history,
Form: Free verse

Glimpse

Memories lay in the tall grasses
 hidden from street view,
  statues for the wandering ants.
Forgotten possessions 
 in the graveyard of a worn estate
  where families once played.
The house with wearing wood
 is a beautifully sad structure
  that has seen better days.
Swing set chains rusted,
 ever so often would howl
  with the ghosts who still move about.
The patina of age spreads
  across the desolate property
    in an artistic awe, aware
     no one ever visits there.
Beautiful rain cried rust lines
 oxidation illustrations 
  in a naturally romantic transformation.

Glimpse the sanctuary many have know,
this is where the past calls home.


Date: 7-1-18
For Contest: Patina
Categories: oxidation, appreciation, art, environment, time,
Form: Free verse

Terra-Firma

This chain of rusted iron and fallen tears is strung together,
forged of poorly tempered links,
cast into the water untimely, 
the choices called to account.

There is no jury for decision,
no panel for propriety or loyalty,
and that metal is riddled with holes throughout,
holes that hold steady between the weak iron,
holes which time will fade.

Oxidation slowly burns away this tepid and unfocused purpose, 
obliterating importance and leaving nothing but red, or green dust.
A corpse of what poor choices that were made, 
left for the isotopes to feed on,
which they do.

Where the rock is king.

And the earth beneath it all is always laughing,
laughing at our fear of silicate embrace,
the love we have for our belligerant air;

So here we burn together,
here we rust and wilt away, petals to the barren ground.
we blow away...

Where the rock is king.
Categories: oxidation, time
Form: Free verse

Binge

Break,break,break on the cold,gray septa
(the veil is ripped and so am I)
\Fern sundered amongst the 
Daffodils,dandelions and diadems tarnished 
With the oxidation of time and tide
That waits for no man.
\Well here I am
The littlest seraph of Sodom
(what did they do in Gomorrah?)
Blow horns and sack butts
Tan-ta-ra
The epitome of epiphanies awaits
And Gabriel - you go play in the other room.
Categories: oxidation, recovery from..., daffodils,
Form: Blank verse

All Natural

<                                   earth ~ third planet from sun
                                     liquid and iron ~ cores
                                     continents  ~  islands  ~  pun
                                     arctic  icing  ~  drips pores

                              
                                    wind  ~  natures own fury
                                    flow gasses ~ bulk movements
                                    storm ~ hurricane ~ jury
                                    place in pocketbook ~ dent


                                    fire ~ oxidation
                                    combustion ~ releasing 
                                    heat ~ light ~ good ~ tar nations
                                    pollution ~ choking ~  thing


                                    water ~ called H2O
                                    oxygen ~ hydrogen
                                    evaporation ~ goes
                                    will exceed supply ~ when ?

      
                                   earth ~ wind ~ fire ~ water
                                   Nature's elements   ~ sure 



Entry For
Barbara Gorelick's
The Four Elements Contest
G.L. All
Categories: oxidation, adventure, education, fantasy, history,
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member The Bolts of Balthakk

Like many heroes of mysterious Marvel Comics, 
Doctor Stephen Vincent Strange is a bolt of magic mix;
Spells of supernatural kinds he works, abundantly,
Crimsons, crystals, ice, rings, chains - in constant redundancy...!

Pile of pure pulverization and annihilation,
The Bolts of Balthakk has become eternal damnation; 
On any stuff - solid or liquid - the bolt does explode,
Like iron-oxidation, all powers it does corrode...!  

Bounds, rebounds, rings, winks, blows, boomerangs at its master's hands,
Swishes, swooshes; whizzes, whooshes like winds in desert sands;
None in heaven or hell could ever its gravity hold,
Like swift, sly electric current it does its force unfold...!

Is it terrible torch of fire? Or lake of lava? 
Is it hydro-nitrogen bomb resembling baklava?
From hands of Doctor Strange, like gold dust they serenely fly,
Clapping, crashing, flashing, dazzling, booming, zooming they spry...!

Doctor Strange manipulates these bolts like liquid plasma,
For him, a magic-surgeon, it's mere mental miasma; 
An awesome third eye adorns the forehead of Doctor Strange,
For mesmerized kids, these are, delightful amusement-range...!


30 August 2022 
Doctor Strange Spells Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
Categories: oxidation, allegory, analogy,
Form: Rhyme

Zero

Josiah conquers revisionists
by stating an old-world axiom:

     “When seeking structure,
     one must be mindful of decay.”

He taps a rusted column with
an ordinary wooden cane,

releasing decades of oxidation
in particulate dust.

As his nephew secures the wire
on the final shape-charge

a tear wells with nostalgia
and sympathy for the hobbled

until the flurry of blasts
at zero.
© John Weber  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: oxidation, death
Form: Free verse
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