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Rusted and Busted Contest Sponsor: Casarah Nance BRONZE BEAUTY Blighted inside the eyes of the ones who are blind Rusted and marred but remarkable in my mind Obliterated beyond repair, but extreme charm I find No one can see the potential I see while inclined Zesty and raggedy with a strange history behind Exhausted vehicle holding such elegance refined Bronzed full of memoirs from accounts of transportation Embarked on a journey since the original assimilation A standard modern example of weathered oxidation Utterly surprised from the ol’ days of junkyard compilation Throughout time scraps become an art of the generation Yard-fills of old automobiles carry exquisite rustication Date Written: June 22, 2016

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Date: 6/29/2016 5:41:00 AM
Excellent, cong Wts on your win.
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Date: 6/29/2016 2:58:00 AM
Congratulations on a superb win, Laura:)
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Date: 6/27/2016 5:51:00 PM
Laura, congratulations you on your wonderful win! Wonderful write ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:04:00 PM
Great monorhyme, Luloo, and nicely written. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/27/2016 2:23:00 PM
The monorhyme is wonderful in your clever poem, Laura !! "Rustication".....what a great word !!! Congratulations !!
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:25:00 AM
I love the beauty in this, I am fascinated with junkyards, it is art. and your lines like "A standard modern example of weathered oxidation" and of course the ending... "exquisite rustication " this drove right up on my winners list... Congrats! ;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
thank you very much for my placement Casarah, I am grateful :)-luloo
Date: 6/27/2016 7:01:00 AM
A different acrostic for the contest than I've seen so far :) All the best:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
thank you very much Jo for all your kind words :)-luloo

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