Fermented Spirits


Wine is a mocker, strong drink
is raging: and whosoever is
deceived thereby is not wise
Prov. 20:1

Darkened oxidation
		 changing personality
Liquid fermentation
	altering perception of reality
Look long into the bottle,
you see fire in the water
It burns you as you swallow,
your memory now getting shorter
Release the genie from the lamp,
		set free the jinn from it’s shapely confine
	But you will wish you never did ...
Hyde-and-seek is such a dangerous game
Hiding from the truth,
seeking answers by way of 100-proof
Blackout is a mind-eraser tramp
		Dr. Jekyll prognosis: too much wine at the dine
	Good manners went off the grid, 
mild-mannered you now ain’t the same
Saccharine sweet talk turns into acidic argument
Civilized behavior turns primitive
Fermentation is bubbling ...
		God knows, you wish you could put 
what you just said back in the bottle
Uncorked repressions of guilt and anger
			     agitating anew
Then, just as quickly, a reverse change in attitude
Fungi perversions start growing in you,
carbonizing your thoughts ... propagating strange desires
Corrupt carnal pleasures souring your mind
Fermented spirits,
darkened oxidation
Breathe in the aromatic conversion ... 
intoxicating vapors releasing your inhibitions
A different you comes babbling through
Drink deep the pungent madness ... 
		complex organic compounds
chain reacting into fast acting mental breakdowns
Taste the seething mix of the witches brew ...
Let the liquid serpent sting bite you,
			creating violent excitation
Lustful permutations 
		conceived through
darkened oxidation
Fermented spirits have drunkenly deceived you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/16/2017 4:29:00 PM
This is such a well written poem about drunkards Freddie; should be posted in bars everywhere my friend!~Che :)
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Date: 7/16/2017 2:47:00 PM
The bible hold the key to life! Proverbs tells us how to live a healthy and rewarding life!
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